One Step Up -Samaina chapter 3 (updated on page 4)

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Yudkbh30

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Wow so amazing update

Plz update next part soon

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Asmita

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1
What..I was in such a happy place reading it and it ended so soon..please this cannot end like this..please write next part an intense conversation on family ahem ahem and more accidental touches..I realised you a very diff way of expressing diff emotions and I loved the Sameer introspection..please continue..waiting..

Hi dear..

The scenes of Mama and family in CV looked incomplete to me ...And I thought it would be good opportunity for Sameer to gain some physical knowledge...

Frankly speaking this is how grown up kids learn looking at their elders and sometimes Movies 😆 in realistic life...

But I did not feel they will rush at this stage...90's kid were ignorant of such things...And so I kept this update up to Sameer's realization ... It's still Naina who is not aware of all these physical aspects of relationship...Looking at her family it is impossible for her and She will still have to learn this changes...She has to come a long way...

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Asmita

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Janani214
This made my morning but you cannot stop it here. Please continue. Loved the way you wrote about Sameer's feelings. And I miss the guglupuchu in the show also.

Hehehe ..Thanx Janani ..I am glad you liked it...I have added part 2 ..Hope you will like it too.. thanx for your Review...Will try to write more ...

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Chatterbox1

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: asmita21180

Hi dear..

The scenes of Mama and family in CV looked incomplete to me ...And I thought it would be good opportunity for Sameer to gain some physical knowledge...
Frankly speaking this is how grown up kids learn looking at their elders and sometimes Movies😆in realistic life...

But I did not feel they will rush at this stage...90's kid were ignorant of such things...And so I kept this update up to Sameer's realization ... It's still Naina who is not aware of all these physical aspects of relationship...Looking at her family it is impossible for her and She will still have to learn this changes...She has to come a long way...

Totally agree with you loved the take you took with slow realisation..with Naina always being so curious I so want her to ask Sameer some question which leads to an interesting conversation on physical intimacy of some sort..she can go back to that song..that is why I so want a rain sequence in the show..

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Anjali33

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Ahh!! What a lovely n romantic update

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MeenAkshi Kalra

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

It was lovely.. n hot in end.loved the update.

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vidrev

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Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Wow so happy to read the post. A movie date with full romance and without any hindrances. Loved it to the core.Thanks.

Nice movie date with friends. They forgot that they are with friends. They were in their own world. Nice os. Good things happens happens everywhere and vice versa. Happiness is surrounded every where now. Touch wood. Plz do write more. Your writings are really good.

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bmk28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Lovely Asmita.. You kinda extended what we saw in the show and in such a beautiful way... I wish to see a long romantic ride on a bike for Samaina.. lets see whether you fulfill it or the CVs 😉

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May

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Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Lovely update! And now this is how a romantic movie date should be 😳 the slow realisation and progression is just perfect!

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Booklover94

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Posted: 6 years ago

#20

Wow Asmita!!❤️

Loved the story,it was so cute!!

Mamiji was so funny-aaj ke aaj hi kaam pe lago😆😉

Poor bhabhi and bhaiya,totally embarrassed.😆

I loved how you bought in sameers realisation that he wanted more from his relationship😳

And the guglupuchhu scene was adorable❤️

I'm surprised Devang bhaiya made the first move while watching the movie... normally it's bhabhi who gives Sam practical demos😆

Toh mr.maheshwari ke bhi sapne chalu hogaye...bed pe rahe toh movie toh dekhne se rahe, he'll make sure of that😉

I always found his demands so cute...to be fair she looks really pretty in that blue dress...bas freshers ke Baad toh woh dress bhi gayab hogaya...lagta hai Sejal ki mummy me woh bhi thug liya😆

Toh iss Baar theatre mein finally Majnu Maheshwari Ko thoda action mil gaya😆😛

Jokes apart,I really liked how well you portrayed their emotions, especially naina's...poor girl doesn't have anyone to talk about these things.since Sam is a total gentleman, atleast he'll make her comfortable❤️

Loved it,Asmita!!

Pls update further.

Love,

Viji

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