Samaina TS: Dil Ka Rishta (Part 3 page 8)

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Priya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Totally awesome.

Loved the way Preeti has raised her voice effectively. She has spoken against the atrocities committed on Naina by her own family, Sameer and Mundit.

I wish the show had included such scenes and dialogues. Preeti's character could have been developed properly.

Please continue and if possible PM me.

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Vidhimehra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Pls updt...new version

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Please continue it soon

Sameer's concern for Naina just cannot be hidden

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vandana

@VandyP

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Wow...wat an update

Simply loved the built up and the concept 👍🏼

You are becoming a pro at writing... Please update the next part ASAP...coz I wanna know wat happens next...

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Boring?? How can you think that even for a second?!
I really really enjoyed it yaar. All the thoughts and doubts running through our minds... you have voiced them so beautifully!

I am so happy you used Preeti so effectively. She is one character who can set things right to a great extent. Surprisingly we have never seen a proper conversation or confrontation between her and Sameer since the break-up, especially considering those 2 have always shared a really friendly understanding bond.

I loved how you have shown Preeti accepting that Naina has made mistakes too, but Sameer's behaviour hasn't been blameless too.

And so good to read that in your version Sunaina seems to be onboard with Sameer's plan just to make Naina jealous. That way we dont have to worry about her haunting our Samaina post the patch-up! 😆

Loved it dear and will be eagerly waiting for the next part. Bohoot mat tarsana!

Thank you May... Glad to know that u liked it .. Yes Sunaina ko plan mei Dikha kar maine involved risks Kam kar diye 😆 ab shanti se story aage likh skti hu ... Learning from u ppl . Hope I can do justice to what I have started 😃

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shelly_nair
Beautiful one. Plz continue. Plz PM me after updating

Sure dear... I have sent u buddy request.. Next time whenever I'll update will pm u

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: asmita21180
😭😭 ..
This was so painful to even read it..Liked the Song "sab se hum door hue." And the promise Naina made ...
..Its good Preeti voiced some sense in sameer..And he realized his mistake ...What will happen next...Please do continue

Yup sorry thoda painful bna diya but story kuch aisi hi sochi thi mind mei.. Further updates will clear your doubts 😊

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Radkam
Defo continue! It was awesome!

Thanks Radhika 😊

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Meenakshi! This was nowhere boring! In fact, this has left me wanting for more! Kab update kar rahi ho?

A fresh new concept and a new angle to the story! Loved the way you started with those lyrics! And the flashback cleared all the doubts I had! Sameer's hesitance and fear of going to the ICU reminded me of Nanaji's death track. He loved Naina to an extent that he couldn't see her in such a condition! Truly loved Preeti's argument and Sameer's guilt!

Can't wait for the next part! 😃

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Edited by Muskan2001 - 7 years ago

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Mayashika
Sabse hum door huye tumse milne ke baad reminded me of the famous chocolate scene. Hehe. 😉

Boring? Oh please, this was so much exciting to read especially the dialogues were so crisp, I felt Preeti was being our voice. She was truly the highlight!
Both at fault and hurt yet angry at each other, I loved the fact that the concern never wavered..simply heart touching.
Sameer immediately standing up in shock when he heard Naina being hospitalised made me smile so much, he forgot his ego, his everything for Naina.
And another fact I liked was Sunaina was part of the plan, at least we won't see her heartbreak!

Waiting for the next! 😃

Thank you shreya 😊 Hn Sunaina ko plan mei include kiya taaki Aap logon ki feelings na hurt Ho aur Sunaina ki bhi otherwise personally mujhe usey lagav nai 😆😆 ...

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