Sur Darling!
You better inform me when you are updating the next part..I need to do insurance of my laptop..It cannot handle such hotness of blazing updates..😉
First things first..I for a second thought this boy doesnot meet with an accident in daze.Dazed in isolation, his senses are blocked,knowledge of present stripped..
And I must give it to you darling,how brilliantly you wrote the description of Nanaji sitting on armchair and all..Thats such a horrifying scene to read and imagine..Gave a gothic feeling.
Coming to the to and fro motion of present and past.Magical oblivion that was.This is one of your standalone master piece updates..And I can see how much you have improved writing wise since the first update of LIMA FF.👏👏
Their weekend getaway is explicitly done.Well..a thought came to me while I was reading through this.A woman is like a tea bag..You can't tell how strong she is until you put her in hot water.
Yes..the gradual change from cold showers to steaming temperatures..
And I got hold of a symbolism here..They were envolped in a mist of steam and fog of emotions .. they didn't realise they were in love..especially on part of Sameer.Because he was in a magic oblivion.
With Naina going away from him,the horrid thought of her belonging to someone else,and to top that the vacuum in his life without a guiding hand has cleared the mist,the fog..its a clear picture.
What I loved the most in this writing wise the description of both shedding their own inhibitions..This shows though they have explored each other, they need to bond more emotionally.There is stilla void of emotional gratification.
And the way he could figure out if its fake-orgasm or a sated one..Even if he is a wreck,he is a gentleman under neath.A man who knows the unspoken.
Sleeping pills!Well her thoughts would keep him alive till he slips into another oblicion,falls into abyss..she knows him well..she will be a light and I am waiting in bated breaths to read how unexpectedly the twists come to surprise us.
Loved it in all.
Thanks for the PM and keep coming with your best.
With love-
Minu
Itti Si Khushi Sab TV
