Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected #2 (Part 25 on Page 130)

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: gugul
Beautiful update!! I was missing the story and was wondering where are you Sameer is going through so much of pain remembering his golden days with Naina... I will be praying that they meet soon... Can't tolerate more pain...

Hey Gugul!! Tumne pukara aur hum chale aaye! 😃😃 Yes dear...this is a painful time for Sameer...they would meet again- I'm giving this out! 😃 But kab, kahan, kaise...jaane ke liye padhte rahiye story! 😉

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UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#352

Sur di i want to cry right now 😭

poor Sameer

sleeping pills oh God ! I hope someone will save in within right time

Naina dreamt of Sameer ... a nightmare hmm I hope she is still unmarried and will try to contact Sameer

plz Sur di jyada mat tadpao ab inhe ek kardo plz

update soon Sur di

Lots of love

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vidrev

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Posted: 7 years ago

#353

So heart warming. You have narrated the emotions that sameer is going through very well. Poor guy in the realization stage. One sec what is he up to with the sleeping pills.

The car scene and the way naina enjoys the rain and nature was really good. It reminded me of their birthday date in the serial.

You are such a fabulous writer. Plz next time at least tell whether naina is married or not. I'm actually getting scared now to know the truth. I think she is not married .

Thanks for the pm dear.

Keep up the good work and keep rocking.

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suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#354

Ahem Ahem. .. What was that sur ... I couldn't control my blush reading that part ☺️ though u attempted little of this sort on Earliar part where red satin nighty was involved 😉 but I found this one better than the previous because with each update u come up with something good... But coming back poor sameer he's in soo much pain . . Bhukkhad sameer ko kisi k liye bhi khana nai Chod skta usney Naina k Gham mei voh bhi ignore Kar diya... And those slipping pills .. Hope he didn't had an overdose or something ..feeling sad for him .. Naina ko Bhej do bechare k pass ... And udhar naina bhi restless hai . . ..

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Yudkbh30

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Posted: 7 years ago

#355

So lovely update

Now when will Samaina meet??

Eagerly waiting

So beautiful Romantic update

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: mystique123
Sur Dear...
Such an amazing story teller you are...I could not describe the beauty of this update in words ⭐️

The title clearly outlines Sameer's thought process...that his past decisions echoes in his present.

My heart broke at the emptiness around Sameer. Lonely does not mean being alone, it is the feeling of being not cared by anyone.And Sameer has lost two souls who cared for him: Nanu and Naina. His regret for his impulsive behavior...for not realizing his Love for Naina ...his acceptance of being a failure...ouch...it did hurt me a lot...😭

He just feels sad, useless, invisible, a failure and what not...and how would not he...a kid who was abandoned by both the parents for their own comfort...who was always perceived as the happiest by the whole world...it was only Nanu and then Naina who understood his torment..and now Naina has also left him...the feeling of being unloved has overpowered his emotions...

Even the presence of Munna-Pandit or Ramdhari around him is not pacifying his hurt soul. He simply has lost the control on himself. He has become resilient.

The Matheran trip was wonderfully described.They had already become one in all sense. The physical intimacy just added flavor to it and such an idiot he is...he never realized his love for her even after being with her for years...even after being proclaiming them as man and wife(for whatsoever reasons). Love is a longing to have someone as part of yourself and Sameer always wanted Naina...theirs was a complete union of soul and body.

All Tears flow from Love and after years Sameer broke his promise and cried for Naina...Sur this depiction won my heart ⭐️

Finally, Sameer has taken a step...drastic or not...I will wait for your next update...but I was touched when Naina could sense him. It gives me assurance that All will be Well soon...You wont push them into more and more agony...my hope Sur...my wish...it hurts to see people in love being pulled apart.

Eager to read the next ❤️

Love 🤗

Isha dear!!

Love you so much!! 🤗

Such a sweet comment you've put in here...I'm glad I could do justice to Sameer's agony, his mental condition, and of course the hot flashback! 😃

Yes these are definitely the echoes of his past, ringing in his present! Things that Sameer could've done, but hadn't! Things he did do, but which never seemed enough!

He regrets! He's in pain! He's in love, yet he cannot do anything, for he's late!

Life without Naina doesn't seem possible now. There's a limit to which you can test one's soul..Sameer has had enough since his childhood...he's always felt lonely, abandoned, not worthy of love...and finally when he decides to give it a chance, to take the risk again, to fall in love again...all he gets is misery multiplied hundredfold. This rejection coupled with the past incidents have brought him to a tipping point now!

Yes, he did cry for Naina! Happy that you liked that part! I really felt something tug at my own heart as I wrote it! 😊

Thanks for the wonderful comments yaar!

Love

Sur

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#357

😃😃

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Resss😃
Unres

Surbhi, trust me you nailed it this time.. For two reasons!!
Thank you dear!!! 🤗Kitni baar padh chuki hun tumhara ye comment, mujhe khud yaad nahi! 😃

First, the hot romance, of course 😳
Itti barish mein bhi garmi lagne lagi, by God!!☺️

Second, the way you put the lovemaking part in this update.. It wasn't just to give us our asanskari dose.. It had a reason to be put in.. Plus, the way you related the passionate flashback to Sameer's shattered present, that was phenomenal👏
I'm flattered dear! Yes, it was interspersed to give the asanskari dose in the narrative here, but that wasn't the sole purpose of it! I wanted to relate Sam's situation with his present...the good days with the bad ones...and also to stop my readers from becoming too gloomy considering Sam's condition! 😊

When I read the warning of mature content, I was like OK, he'll be reminiscing about one of their hot encounters maybe.. But girl!! This one was just awesome on another level😳
😃😃 Thank you!!
When Sameer called out to Nanu, kasam se mujhe rona aa jata😭
😕 Yes dear! I know! Bechara toota hua Sameer!

Ye kya yaar, Naina ek last ki do lines mein bhi, to aa k bhi ayi nhi.. Upar se you're saying ki aur 2-3 updates tak uska wait krna hoga!! This is not done🤔
Hehe...tension not yaar! Naina aayegi! 😃 As soon as Sameer is ready to face her...socho abhi aa gayi to ye toot jayega!

Aur mere pyaare se doubt ka to tumko pata hi h.. 😆
Hehe pata hai...😆😉

Hey Anjali!

Thank you so much dear!

My response in pink!

Love

Sur

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priyanka

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Posted: 7 years ago

#358

sur

i guess i have been one of your bad readers and since i was unable to comment on your last one given my other priorities you deserve a long long note. so i'll try and put things into perspective with my review as per me. hope i do justice given your prowess as an imaginator seems to be growing in leaps and bounds.

part 16

for the last update i would say it depicted the sensitivity of the character sameer just so well, it also tells a thing or two about you as a person, that you are one hell of a sensitive person. the pain, the loss, the anguish was all so palpable in the last one. i could actually feel his pain while i read, the helplessness of the situation made me wince. part 16 stood true for the title of your story. of all the twists that ihad thought of, this was definitely not the one i had expected. so indeed an unexpected one! though the missed calls always made me wonder about naanu and with foreboding i had somehow sensed that sameer's life's gonna come down in shambles and so it is, all shattered. the broken sameer, with those hollow eyes made me cringe. but the twist has makes me feel intrigued for this story, it feels like some jigsaw with all the pieces scattered all over while one is missing and that missing piece is naina. she is out there somehere omnipresent yet she is lost and so is sameer. it was quite painful reading about the same, yet the melancholy the angst somewhere has gotten into me so deep that am always lurking in the background looking for an update. but i dont wanna pressurize you since i know you have your hands full and already the art of juggling in between you people have given it an altogether different meaning, where in am awed by your super power.

part 17

sur, you should never have doubts about penning such updates from on, if you feel that its erotic, i would say i felt it was sheer sensuality and chemistry that was oozing in bundles for this update. the master that you have become at conjuring up such scenarios, hats off for that. we all need to curtsy in front of you! am amazed an astounded at the sheer talent and i cannot stop gushing. the words had been bubbling up right from the time when i read the update for the first time but i had to ma

wait and pen it systematically so that it does justice to your writing.

sameer:

love! i often laughed at the incredulity of the very word. love, the emotion that i made fun of so often, since i never believed in it. love was never an option for me, i knew i was incapable of it, infact all the couples who swore by it, i hated them and in fact quite so often sneered at their foolishness for believing in such a thing that doesn't exist. for me, it was always hunger, hunger which leads you seek a body to satiate your untameable sins. and sinned i had quite a lot of times and every time it was a different female, until i found her. it was hunger yet again, and this hunger had been nesting from quite sometime. my eyes often wavered to the bench she sat upon and my slow gaze would assess each of her curves but yet i stayed at bay, since i knew something didn't sit right, but destiny had other plans and no time i was lured to her and it all started that one fateful night. i dismissed it off as hunger as first and waited and waited for the feeling to outgrow while i kept falling into this abyss with no end. she was the one i never got tired of. i had suddenly attained the bliss which i had never dreamt of. i was different in her company, the physical fusion was just the cherry on the top while the we shared the cakes of our respective lives. she was diffrent with me, this side of her seemed like an elixir for my parched soul. we were like one soul in two bodies and yet the denial.

we often had celebrations of our own, and it was one such celebration. it was the first time that we had shared a shower together, amidst the mist, and steam of that shared bath, my mind and heart came together blaring out the obvious to me. i had never felt what i felt with her, the moemt was just so special. yes she had trusted me with her body before but this time i was stunned at the way she let go of all her inhibitions for me. she stood there while i drank in her beauty. our bodies danced in sync giving each other the maximum access. it felt like both were driving towards the same aim. we both wanted to gift each other ourselves and we did. we made love in the truest of sense i felt loved and my mind too couldn't deny the words that came out in response. if it was a surrender from her side then i too let myself swayed by this tide. this tide that she had to offer to me, the olive branch that she extended i had held on to it as if it were the anchor of my life and yes indeed so it was. those days at the resort we loved each other with no bounds, we just loved and lavished one another with all that we had to offer. we had become one, and from there it was never me, it was us. alas! the denial! it spoilt it all, and now i have lost her.i cannot imagine her in anyone else's arms, she is mine, mine only. i cant even blame her for the betrayal since she had tried, deep down within i know she did, i was the one who turned away. my soul is gone and i can feel my physical self ebbing away. i dont want this life without her. i curse myself for making fun of love, for not understanding the emotions attached to that tiny word. they say bad karma always gets to you and today i can say it is my bad karma and it is life's way of getting back at me. but little does life knows about me, if it plans to get back at me, i have a better solution to my problems, i'll cut it short. goodbye!

you made me see this world in different light

thet winkle that was gone,

the sparkle that was lost,

you brought it back to me

you breathed life into this stone

yet,

i made you go through all the thorns

you were still ok with it

you endured

persevered

even stood strong

but alas!

this rock smashed you hard

and left you broken

only to regret and repent

and now,

you are gone

and so is the life that you so lovingly breathed into mine.

hope i did justice

waiting for the mystery to unfold

Edited by doublecross - 7 years ago

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: Dr.Don
Hi Sur aka Sam,

I did PM you that I will round up the story over the weekend, but then I just brushed through few lines ... and then I could not stop.

I have no additional words to praise you which others have not already said.

I feel so honoured Doc! It's a huge compliment when someone says they couldn't stop reading once they started it! 😃

However, I will still mention some of the points that you have elaborated deliciously in your plot.

1. The Hunger of Body in love that feeds the soul:

I know the tag seems confusing. But that is how love is. When love is mutual, selfless and strong: when the lovers unite via their skins, curve to curve, angle to angle: It is not just the union of one body with another. In true sense, its the union of one being with the other.

I strongly believe that without a strong, uncontrollable attraction for your love to claim him/her and experience the bliss of being a man or a woman, no love can be complete in the whole sense.

Some time that true raw attraction comes after marriage (or from the first meeting) and sometimes it comes just like you have mentioned in your plot between Sameer & Naina.

Superb.

Now I understand the meaning of the statement you mentioned in my updated story - that the forum has lost its innocence long back. 😳
BOLD: Haha true that! But I caught onto pretty late! It was all triggered because the Samaina of our show were too sanskari, even for a 1960s couple! 😆
I'm glad you liked my portrayal of Sameer and Naina here and the way their relationship is progressing in the reverse fashion! I too agree, that apart from the emotional bit of love, the physical piece is as important- well the two go hand-in-hand with love I feel! The absence of either one does not complete love.

None the less it is good that people are appreciating the physical aspect of love.

P.S: (A hostel interaction that came to mind while reading your story) One point we realised from our seniors - during med grad days - during late night BOYS ramblings in the hostel. One of our famous seniors will say (who had a whirlwind love story and married the same girl): You will stay healthy, fit, attractive only when you are in Love & Attracted to your lover/wife and you want to be your best self when you are in your bare minimal in front of her. In fact that will spur her also to be in her best self possible. That time we laughed it off ... but today we feel its so true!

So, applauds to you for being gutsy and exploring the rawness of love.

Thank you Doc! Thank you for sharing your hostel experience. And it is true- one does want to be the best version of ourselves with our lovers- both emotionally as well as during intimacy! 😊

2. Emotions that feed the love making:

But making love becomes the most amazing experience when the two individuals are truly in love. And that was abundantly mentioned and explained in your story. It was not only about the carnal desires. Under the layers of desires, there was an immense amount of love, care and concern by Sameer and Naina for each other. This aspect was superbly explored and that made the whole read an amazing experience.

You left the story on a cliffhanger. I guess all are just waiting when the next update comes.

Once again thank you for your PM and my apologies for the delayed response. Hope you did not mind it.
True that Doc! Lust and love cannot be equated! One can be physical with the most beautiful woman/ man, yet not feel the sparks which appear when you are close to the one who makes your heart flutter- the one you love. And this is the point I wanted to show with Sameer and Naina. It is unexplainable why they are attracted to each other and understand each other too! But they do, and this is perhaps how fate intended them to be- like soul mates!
The story is on a cliffhanger right! But I hope it isn't as bad as the one I left the story on when Naina disappeared and Sameer got a phone call. People went mad at me! 😆

You writing skills are at level with any of the professional romantic fiction writers. You are ready to make the jump to serious professional writing now.

BOLD: Thank you so much Doc! I'm really honoured to see you feel so! 😊 I hope I can try my hand at professional writing too someday, considering that enjoy it.

Keep writing and keep spreading blushes.

Regards

Thanks Doc for the encouraging feedback to my story! My response in red!

Sur

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: Radkam
Mind blowing update! Hila diya & dil dehla diya 😭
Plz jaldi se theek kar dou! Sam had realized long back that he was in love with her, thick head took ages to accept it! Plz jaldi milwa dou! 🥺 sam ko kuch nahi hona chahiye & Naina shouldn't be married plz!

Hey Radhika! Thank you so much for appreciating the story! Yes- Sam ko ab samajh aa rahi hain uski feelings about Naina...he was in love with her all along! Naina aur Sameer ka kya hota hai...would reveal soon! 😊😊😊

Love

Sur

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