Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected #2 (Part 25 on Page 130)

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Aayushi

@A.Green

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Posted: 7 years ago

#331

Res

Aa gyaaa 😃

Unres!!

Cheating! 😭 you promised me more of Naina and you gave her at the last 3 lines!! 😆😛 Pata hai reading this story from the start, I could never have imagined ek din ye turn bhi aayega 😉 You are such a fab story teller

This update was so much needed! Sameer ka realization was one in a billion but this was his moment of realization of his own words, his inner self had acknowledged his feelings long back, he had muttered the words to her, he had spoken it in his mind, his actions had always made it clear 😳

I loved it!! You don't need to be even one bit apprehensive if you are! :)) It was written so beautifully 👏

I really really liked the starting, how he searched for his Nanu, his dad left him, his mom did, then Nanu and finally even Naina is gone, he feels he deserves the pain, I feel so bad for him Bichara bachhaa!

I could relate to how he was so absent-minded and kept on doing things out of nowhere. Jab usne sleeping pills li I was like, ohh mere suicide ka direction sahi toh nahi? 😆

Munna-Pandit 😡 Pata wata hai nahi, bichari Naina ko kya kya bol rhe the, maaf kar rhi hun main kyunki Sameer ke saath the bure times mein.

I loved the car scene too too much In dono ko car mein yehi sab karna chahiye ☺️

That moment when she makes him face the road instead of her awww ❤️

Then the resort wala part! He made the booking as Mr. And Mrs. Sameer Maheshwari.!! Gadhe ladkeee 😡😆 Chalo aaj wala Sameer smart ho gya hai, samjh gya he had even accepted them back then! 😳

Thereafter the shower scene ☺️ Kya tha wohh, so so hot ❤️ You wrote the desire in them so brilliantly and the transformation of Naina, from the shy girl to the bold one. I am glad Sameer talked about that coz even I had that thought lingering in the back of my mind 😛

Bahut hi badhiya tha, how he realized he had spoken love that day also. So surreal how he is realizing, thode ache time par realize krta toh aur maze aate, abhi toh he is hurting a lot! 😲

And kya connection hai dono ka! Yahan inhone extra sleeping pills khai and wahan madam darr gyi! 😉 Pyaar

Pleaseee agle mein Naina de dena, warna main marr jaungi 😆🤣

Loved the update as usual! <3

Much love 🤗

Oh and and and!! I am first 🥳

P.S. I forgot writing the best part of the update for me. It was when he realizes he has broken his promise of never crying again, just for her! That point in the story was love, because he had faced bullying but a girl made him forget everything, but to shed his pain, finally ❤️

Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago

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Isha

@mystique123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: A.Green
Updating padha maine!!

Maine bhi 😉

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: A.Green
Res
Aa gyaaa 😃

Super fast! 😆

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Aayushi

@A.Green

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Posted: 7 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Super fast! 😆

Pyaar hai mera 😳

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Isha

@mystique123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#335

Sur Dear...

Such an amazing story teller you are...I could not describe the beauty of this update in words ⭐️

The title clearly outlines Sameer's thought process...that his past decisions echoes in his present.

My heart broke at the emptiness around Sameer. Lonely does not mean being alone, it is the feeling of being not cared by anyone.And Sameer has lost two souls who cared for him: Nanu and Naina. His regret for his impulsive behavior...for not realizing his Love for Naina ...his acceptance of being a failure...ouch...it did hurt me a lot...😭

He just feels sad, useless, invisible, a failure and what not...and how would not he...a kid who was abandoned by both the parents for their own comfort...who was always perceived as the happiest by the whole world...it was only Nanu and then Naina who understood his torment..and now Naina has also left him...the feeling of being unloved has overpowered his emotions...

Even the presence of Munna-Pandit or Ramdhari around him is not pacifying his hurt soul. He simply has lost the control on himself. He has become resilient.

The Matheran trip was wonderfully described.They had already become one in all sense. The physical intimacy just added flavor to it and such an idiot he is...he never realized his love for her even after being with her for years...even after being proclaiming them as man and wife(for whatsoever reasons). Love is a longing to have someone as part of yourself and Sameer always wanted Naina...theirs was a complete union of soul and body.

All Tears flow from Love and after years Sameer broke his promise and cried for Naina...Sur this depiction won my heart ⭐️

Finally, Sameer has taken a step...drastic or not...I will wait for your next update...but I was touched when Naina could sense him. It gives me assurance that All will be Well soon...You wont push them into more and more agony...my hope Sur...my wish...it hurts to see people in love being pulled apart.

Eager to read the next ❤️

Love 🤗

Edited by mystique123 - 7 years ago

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#336

This chapter was a beauty, you are becoming truly a master of words who spins magic in reader's mind...the sadness, the betrayal, the love making, all in all was very satisfactory for a reader. 🤗

Reading through Sameer's anguish was the hardest part, with each and every word I read carefully, I started sympathising with his state more but what does he need?

Love. Love of his Naina that was cruelly denied by the destiny. That neglected child came out, why all the people who he loved was snatched from him...that was the only complaint he had with the God!

Wasn't he capable enough to be loved or to love but his mind drifts to his Naina, what he shared with her made him believe that he can love and was worthy to be loved. His mother was taken away from him at an age where if you ask the definition of love, it would be mother.

His Nanu again was taken away when he needed him the most and now, Naina too. Why was he punished like this, for what misdeeds? His short temper? His impulsive behaviour? For his imperfection? In this crowd of happy people, who is perfect? Then why only he was punished, why was life being unfair towards him?

He laid there, crying, at his destiny and himself...

It's such a heartbreaking thing to read Sameer being so numb, so unaware of his surroundings. 💔

The Matheran trip was lovely and much needed in this sad phase.

Loved that detailing of Sam being a true foodie, very much relatable, haha! But the painful irony was now he had completely lost his appetite when he couldn't find her near him, close to him, all away form him supposedly with her 'husband'.

The love making was intense and passionate and written very beautifully and explicitly. 👏 ☺️

How much of a fool he was, oblivious to his own heart's demands and he ignored the hints too that was right before him- Mr. and Mrs. Maheshwari and the three magical words.

Sameer breaking his promise to himself was so emotional and powerful. A promise to ourselves is the hardest to maintain as there's just our feelings concerned and it's considerably easy to back out if you keep aside the guilt. But it can be the powerful thing too if our resolve is strong and his promise was strong as he had kept his promise for years. It hit me so hard that he's completely broken to let go of that oath. Sur Di, you nailed it.

The last part left me uneasy, extra sleeping pills!!! And Naina gets up, sensing danger..

Nothing has lost as the connection of heart is still there, I am convincing myself as I know, the next chapter would be worth the wait. 😃

P.S. Loved the mention of Naina turning from shy to a bold woman in Sameer's point of view. 😳

Edited by Mayashika - 6 years ago

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 7 years ago

#337

Dnt make us cry dear..It hurts to see them crying.. though I loved their past beautiful memory it was so lovely but sameer ka ye hal I can't see.. crying me..

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#338

Resss😃

Unres

Surbhi, trust me you nailed it this time.. For two reasons!!

First, the hot romance, of course 😳

Itti barish mein bhi garmi lagne lagi, by God!!☺️

Second, the way you put the lovemaking part in this update.. It wasn't just to give us our asanskari dose.. It had a reason to be put in.. Plus, the way you related the passionate flashback to Sameer's shattered present, that was phenomenal👏

When I read the warning of mature content, I was like OK, he'll be reminiscing about one of their hot encounters maybe.. But girl!! This one was just awesome on another level😳

When Sameer called out to Nanu, kasam se mujhe rona aa jata😭

Ye kya yaar, Naina ek last ki do lines mein bhi, to aa k bhi ayi nhi.. Upar se you're saying ki aur 2-3 updates tak uska wait krna hoga!! This is not done🤔

Aur mere pyaare se doubt ka to tumko pata hi h.. 😆

Edited by Anjali33 - 7 years ago

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gugul

@gugul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#339

Beautiful update!! I was missing the story and was wondering where are you Sameer is going through so much of pain remembering his golden days with Naina... I will be praying that they meet soon... Can't tolerate more pain...

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Dr.DonnyJohn

@Dr.DonnyJohn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#340

Hi Sur aka Sam,

I did PM you that I will round up the story over the weekend, but then I just brushed through few lines ... and then I could not stop.

I have no additional words to praise you which others have not already said.

However, I will still mention some of the points that you have elaborated deliciously in your plot.

1. The Hunger of Body in love that feeds the soul:

I know the tag seems confusing. But that is how love is. When love is mutual, selfless and strong: when the lovers unite via their skins, curve to curve, angle to angle: It is not just the union of one body with another. In true sense, its the union of one being with the other.

I strongly believe that without a strong, uncontrollable attraction for your love to claim him/her and experience the bliss of being a man or a woman, no love can be complete in the whole sense.

Some time that true raw attraction comes after marriage (or from the first meeting) and sometimes it comes just like you have mentioned in your plot between Sameer & Naina.

Superb.

Now I understand the meaning of the statement you mentioned in my updated story - that the forum has lost its innocence long back. 😳

None the less it is good that people are appreciating the physical aspect of love.

P.S: (A hostel interaction that came to mind while reading your story) One point we realised from our seniors - during med grad days - during late night BOYS ramblings in the hostel. One of our famous seniors will say (who had a whirlwind love story and married the same girl): You will stay healthy, fit, attractive only when you are in Love & Attracted to your lover/wife and you want to be your best self when you are in your bare minimal in front of her. In fact that will spur her also to be in her best self possible. That time we laughed it off ... but today we feel its so true!

So, applauds to you for being gutsy and exploring the rawness of love.

2. Emotions that feed the love making:

But making love becomes the most amazing experience when the two individuals are truly in love. And that was abundantly mentioned and explained in your story. It was not only about the carnal desires. Under the layers of desires, there was an immense amount of love, care and concern by Sameer and Naina for each other. This aspect was superbly explored and that made the whole read an amazing experience.

You left the story on a cliffhanger. I guess all are just waiting when the next update comes.

Once again thank you for your PM and my apologies for the delayed response. Hope you did not mind it.

You writing skills are at level with any of the professional romantic fiction writers. You are ready to make the jump to serious professional writing now.

Keep writing and keep spreading blushes.

Regards

Edited by Dr.Don - 7 years ago