Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected #2 (Part 25 on Page 130) - Page 35

Originally posted by: Mayashika

What do I say Sur Di? This chapter was so heartbreaking and emotional to read, every word making my heart bleed. Di, you have written this one amazingly but as a reader if I review, this one is sorrow filled. We, writers live our characters so I can understand how much pain you would have also gone through. 👏

I know right...if as a reader you felt so sad...imagine my plight when I had to pen this piece down...that too on Sameer...somehow I love Sameer more than even Naina! So to put him in this mess! Ahhh...but the story called for it!

Multiple doors are knocking which just have sadness and grief to offer. Sameer, he is totally numb, two most precious person in his life is away from him, one who has left the world leaving his soul behind to watch over him and the one who left his world, leaving him blank and whose destination suddenly seemed to be unclear, the familiar loneliness entering his life through on of the doors.

True yaar...wo kehte hain na kabhi musibat aati hai to sab ek saath aa jata hai sar pe...aur aisa bhi kehte hain jab khushiyaan aati hai tab bhi ek saath aa jati hain! Sam is in phase 1 now...phase 2 aayega ki nahi I can't promise...but I hope you enjoy the story as it proceeds!

The heaviness in my chest reappears every time I read the state of Sam when Nanu passed away, the numb feeling that runs throughout your body, your mind screams and cries and the refusal to believe the truth, eyes may not water but thats another sign of denial, the truth sinks after one day or few days, when you no more find them in your daily life, the simplest things remind you of them and then you feel like to share how you was reminded of them, their absence not only from our side but from our life, from the world greet us and then the realisation sinks, the void created becomes so deep and some people slips into slow depression.

Liked how you didn't stretch Nanu's death, honestly I couldn't have taken that suspense too. And also loved how subtly you brought the reason for Sam to get out of his grief and take a look at his life, Naina. His Naina.

I know yaar...you've put the situation in perspective...Sam isn't even crying now..the wound is so new...he's unable to get a grip on himself since Nanu left...on top of it, he's being given the news about Naina..socho kya haal hoga bande ka...as you said, in situations like these, a person can really slip into depression! Coz by the time you realized what has happened, you just cannot get on with life!

Apart from Munna and Pandit, I declare Rahul and Sudhir also as true friends to Sameer. After all, the one who stand beside us during our bad times deserve the title 'A true friend.'

That's true! 😊 They did help him when he needed them!

Di! Naina's marraige is making me feel so uncomfortable, it's just not right and I feel there's a need to dig further into this matter. Arvind guy was mentioned to Sam as a part of an act to accept his love. I will wait for the next one, I trust you Sur Di!

Yes dear...I know I haven't told you guys about the circumstances revolving around Naina n her decision to get married! There's a lot to it than meets the eye! 😊

The only solace is the kiss they shared at the stroke of the midnight during the New Year.

That was supposed to be lucky for them! 😊

Originally posted by: A.Green

Res

Aa gyaaa 😃

Unres!!

Cheating! 😭 you promised me more of Naina and you gave her at the last 3 lines!! 😆😛 Pata hai reading this story from the start, I could never have imagined ek din ye turn bhi aayega 😉 You are such a fab story teller

Thank you so much sweetheart!!! 😳😳🤗I'm glad that you enjoying the story despite the sad twists n turns too! Haha...well actually tumhe bola tha isliye wo teen lines add ki thi! 😆 Just to let you know ki Naina hai...is alive and breathing! 😃

This update was so much needed! Sameer ka realization was one in a billion but this was his moment of realization of his own words, his inner self had acknowledged his feelings long back, he had muttered the words to her, he had spoken it in his mind, his actions had always made it clear 😳

I loved it!! You don't need to be even one bit apprehensive if you are! :)) It was written so beautifully 👏

Thanks dear! I'm feeling flattered! Darr rahi thi main ki ek to sad n suicidal update...upar se the physical aspects are quite explicit here! Kayi baar the reality is right in front of us...but we don't realize it then...and baad mein...we think arey how could I not see it that time? It was so obvious!

I really really liked the starting, how he searched for his Nanu, his dad left him, his mom did, then Nanu and finally even Naina is gone, he feels he deserves the pain, I feel so bad for him Bichara bachhaa!

Yes dear...I was trying to show his state of mind...due to the circumstances n his past life, he's kind of blaming everything on his misfortune n the fact that he's not good enough to deserve any happiness in life. Toot gaya hai wo bilkul! 😕

I could relate to how he was so absent-minded and kept on doing things out of nowhere. Jab usne sleeping pills li I was like, ohh mere suicide ka direction sahi toh nahi? 😆

Direction sahi pakdi tumne...again uske sub-conscious mein bhi yahi tha...lekin actually wo so nahi paa raha tha itne din se...so he thought nind ki goliyan asar kar jayein shayad!

Munna-Pandit 😡 Pata wata hai nahi, bichari Naina ko kya kya bol rhe the, maaf kar rhi hun main kyunki Sameer ke saath the bure times mein.

Hehe...yaar is story mein Mundit Naina ko school ke baad se nahi jaante...n school mein Sameer n Naina were not close here...so Mundit don't know ki Naina Sameer se kitna pyaar karti hai...like show's Mundit yahan bhi wo apne dost Sameer ko pain mein nahi dekh paa rahe! 😊

I loved the car scene too too much In dono ko car mein yehi sab karna chahiye ☺️

That moment when she makes him face the road instead of her awww ❤️

Hehe...car mein sab karna chahiye se mujhe PK movie ki dancing cars yaad aa gayi! 😆 Wo bhi daal hi deti...hehe I loved that scene in the show n here too wanted to show that Sameer was smitten by her already! 😳

Then the resort wala part! He made the booking as Mr. And Mrs. Sameer Maheshwari.!! Gadhe ladkeee 😡😆 Chalo aaj wala Sameer smart ho gya hai, samjh gya he had even accepted them back then! 😳

Hehe...tab to wo gadha tha! Usne khud bhi maan liya! 😆

Thereafter the shower scene ☺️ Kya tha wohh, so so hot ❤️ You wrote the desire in them so brilliantly and the transformation of Naina, from the shy girl to the bold one. I am glad Sameer talked about that coz even I had that thought lingering in the back of my mind 😛

Hehe...mujhe lag raha tha daalun nahi daalun ye part forum pe...😆 but the response has inspired me now! 😆 Yes dheere dheere...as they became more comfortable with their physicality, the initial hesitation also went away...same happened with Naina too! 😳

Bahut hi badhiya tha, how he realized he had spoken love that day also. So surreal how he is realizing, thode ache time par realize krta toh aur maze aate, abhi toh he is hurting a lot! 😲

True that! Glad you liked the realization part of it as well dear! 😃

And kya connection hai dono ka! Yahan inhone extra sleeping pills khai and wahan madam darr gyi! 😉 Pyaar

Ahaan...dil se dil ka connection! 😉 Nind se jaag gayi Naina...bura sapna aaya usi waqt!

Pleaseee agle mein Naina de dena, warna main marr jaungi 😆🤣

Haha...arey tension mat lo yaar! Naina aayegi toh...bas shayad 1 aur update ka intezaar...want to show ki Sameer ka aage kya hota hai...fir their paths will cross again!

Loved the update as usual! <3

Thank you so much dear!

Much love 🤗

Oh and and and!! I am first 🥳

Yes you are! And thank you for that love! 😊🤗

P.S. I forgot writing the best part of the update for me. It was when he realizes he has broken his promise of never crying again, just for her! That point in the story was love, because he had faced bullying but a girl made him forget everything, but to shed his pain, finally ❤️

Yes dear...somehow I wanted to relate his life from childhood in hostel...all alone...bearing the pain in solitude to now...he broke the promise to himself n let himself cry for her...coz the burden was too much to bear...Nanu ke liye bhi itna nahi roya jitna Naina ke liye! So happy that you liked that memory! 😊

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Dnt make us cry dear..It hurts to see them crying.. though I loved their past beautiful memory it was so lovely but sameer ka ye hal I can't see.. crying me..