AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Wow, such a long update.. Majjo aa gayo😃

Aarti! My Madwadi Buddy! Chokho baat hai ke thane majjo aa gayo! 😆 Once I started writing, pata hi nahi chala kab estimated 3 pages ka double ho gaya! But aapne yeh bolke dil khush kar diya! 🤗

Aww, such sweet moments transpired between them.. His birthday celebrations couldn't get any more happening.. Everything was going so smoothly n romantically

Thank you so much! I know, Ashi totally made his day...a very unexpected one indeed! 😃

But Kristina at the beginning I was like what's wrong with this kid.. But ab samajh aya majra kya h.. I might be just a teenage infatuation from her side, but it has shaken the almost blossomed love of AshDeep

Wohi toh! Ab infatuation hai ya love woh toh last part mein hi pata chalega...maybe Kristina might be the problem and solution to things happening between AshDeep 😉

And Ashi is too sensitive to break her angel Kristina's heart!! But it's causing her heart to break, n Randeep's as well💔

Very true, indeed! She has to choose between Kristina and Randeep...between selflessness for her friend or selfishness for her and Randeep's probable future...

The punishment dialogue was so on point.. Randeep is chalu😆

Thank you so much! Ab Sameer Maheshwari ke sangat ka asar hai! Madwadis know how to get what they want! 😆😉

Update soon and I'm waiting for your FF too

I'll try my best to update both this and the FF...btw, eagerly waiting for aapka Roommates too...kab update kar rahe ho? 😃

Originally posted by: Anzum505

This was sooo beautiful 😭😭😭 👏👏

Please update soon...

Originally posted by: Ishh..

Muskan dear...it was amazing.

Ishha! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad to hear you liked it!

Just read both parts. You don't know what you have done to my heart.

Awww, thank you so much! All credits go to you all; my readers, and SamAina! Aaplog nahi, toh mere stories nahi...🤗

Actually i'm regretting for not reading it before. But its better to late than never, right? So here i'm Miss late lateez😆

No worries at all, Ishhu! Definitely better late than never! 😆 Late lateezes are also always welcome! 😃

It was wonderful...Randeep as usual Mr flirty. And that punishment is amazing😉

Ladke ne bhot accha punishment choose kiya...akhir woh Randeep hai..jo karta hai ulta sulta hi hota hai..😆

Thank you so much! Saare flirty and romantic scenes ka inspiration you can guess 😉 I'm glad to hear you liked the punishment dialogue...mujhe laga thoda over ho gaya 😕😆 Hayeee this 'ulta sulta' phrase reminded me of Mt. Abu; when Naina reprimands Sameer for not bringing a sweater! 😳😃

Waiting for next update eagerly!!

Thank you so much! Jald hi update karungi (fingers crossed)

With love,

Ishu.

Originally posted by: Radkam

Ohhh! This is so gona b happening... no words dear! Just superliciously awesome! Do here Kittu is the vamp...na plz dnt make a triangle & I dnt her heart to break too... just make it all nice nice

Originally posted by: 9211

Wow. I was expecting this only you know..

Glad that he cleared it already without any delay that he doesn't like her and loves ashi only.

Waiting to read next already..

Update soon❤️

Originally posted by: mystique123

Amazing update and the twist was unexpected.

The teaser teased a lot and the actual update gave too many feels.

I had questions in my mind about the weird behavior of ayesha and kristina and this update kind of answered all

The bit of punishment was really exiciting. Wanna know what happens next.

Love

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

Fab update

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

It was the best update .. but why the f you ended it .. I was so in to it .. urgghhh

Khair waise hi Kristina ke chal dhal theek Nahi lag rahi thi mujhe .. huh mere babies ke beech kyun aarahi hai ...

Ab maza aayega .. Ashi have to confess her feelings in front of everyone

. Yess yess yess

Rando did a right thing ..

I was expecting a kiss tbh ..

Hayee when we are getting a kiss ..

Hayeee I loved the update

Eagerly waiting for next part ..

Please do PM me

Originally posted by: saritaparab

2nd part is awesome. love triangle , RD confession to AS ... AS sacrifice her love for her friendship...

the story is all about true love and true friendship... wait to see who will win now RD is true LOVE or AS Frinship... but i want to know if kittu know about Ashdeep . or she just make fake frd to AS to get RD in life...

WAITING please post as soon as poosible