Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 ) - Page 79

Sorry for the super late response to the story!

Originally posted by: NainaSharma08

Wowww

Read all the 21 parts together ..from 9 pm and didn't regret missing today's episode on tv

It was absolutely amazing

Very emotional in the last two parts ...I was crying ...

Superb

God bless you

You hv Great talent

Thank you so much !! I am glad you liked it .

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

Hey Ashwathy.. I can't stop myself reading 'My Stolen Heart' again n again. I don't know how many times I have read all parts. Missing your stories. Earlier every week I was waiting for your update. Now feeling empty. Plz start another FF on Samaina. I want more n more from you.

Thank you so much !! I am glad you liked it . Thanks a lo for your encouraging words...hope I will be able to come up with more stories.

Originally posted by: aman.bindra

Sorry for the super late response to the story!

Part 21: Amazing end to a beautifully written story!!

Loveddd the journey of Sameer and Naina in your story! The depiction of the characters is soo good and real! Love the way you showed the progression in Sameer's character and their relationship throughout!

Finally Sameer realized and became the man Naina always wanted him to be! The soulmates are finally together!!

Superb story!!😊

Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I am glad you liked it. I love happy endings ;))

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Oh Ashu what a beautiful beautiful story!!! I am sad it has ended and happy that you concluded it so perfectly👏As much as I enjoyed reading it, all good things must come to an end😛

The way Sameer found out the truth was perfect, also showed Naina had well wishers outside of the family due to her good nature.

The climax of how masks fell from the husband-wife duo's face was disgusting yet amazing. Guess Vishakha could never see beyond her husband and Sameer inherited some that spineless attitude. Thankfully Nanu's guidance, Rohan's support, and above all Naina's love helped him discover the real Sameer Maheshwari! Throwing the vase added a perfect touch, a bit of filmy drama never hurts😆

Preeti and Rohan are perfect for each other😳Sameer and Naina have a solid support in them. Still can't believe Rohan is Somani's son. For me Rohan-Sameer brother bond is above the relation they shared with their parents, which tells a lot about Somani and Vishakha's nature.

Naina was a character you have to receive an applause for, what a woman! 👏Inspite of everything she had so much faith in Sameer and life, stood for herself, and was full of love. At the end she did get everything she deserved and much more. I loved how she knew Sameer was faithful but that would not suffice to live a respectable life. Sameer also did not disappoint, even though he was caught up in work till the last moment once he realized how Naina was treated nothing mattered to him.

I felt like all the loose ends were tied down and it was a wonderful ending. Twins was cherry on top of the iced chocolate cake⭐️It was like reading romantic novel since you were always quick with updates. and kept us guessing with each part😊 I am a very impatient reader and usually lose interest if the story doesn't progress but that never happened; now we are at the end *sigh*

Thank you giving us this story, indeed my heart is stolen!

Thank you so much for you encouraging words and I am glad you liked it. In a relationship there will be ups and downs but when things don't go your way , then we shouldn't loose hope on it . If we do then we wont have the courage to fight for that relationship to succeed. The best part of Sameer and Naina , is the trust they have inspite of all the insecurities and troubles ...they trusted each other and never lost hope in their relationship...

I wish we get to see the same hope between Sameer and Naina in our show too!!

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

<font size="2">Thank you Di for giving us such a beautiful story.I loved it.❤️</font>

<font size="2">I saw the title concluding part and trust me my heart skipped a bit.But yes!all beautiful things come to an end and this end was so beautiful.</font>

<font size="2">No longer it was mushy romance,it was all about responsibility that shows love and most importantly respect. Loved how both got together not because he was perfect, or because she was , but because their combined flaws were resolved in a way that allowed two separate beings to hinge together.</font>

<font color="#181818" size="2">They got along again and just like reactions---Transformed in characteristic and better than their state.I absolutely loved the transformation.</font>

<font color="#181818" size="2">As always I have said you are too good with the words and dialogues..👏👏</font>

<font color="#181818" size="2">And Preeti was well portrayed.There was so much wrath and rightly so.Rohan and Preeti scenes stood out with their own boldness.</font>

<font color="#181818" size="2">And the emotional meet ..Smile was on my lips,stubborn enough not to leave.I felt like standing outside their room and viewing this..That was the best one.No bhaari bharkam dialogues..only important,rightful and emotional talks.</font>

<font color="#181818" size="2">Please Di come up with your next story soon..I don't mind an OS even.Its addictive yeah.😳</font>

<font color="#181818" size="2">Thanks for the PM.</font>

<font color="#181818" size="2">With love-</font>

<font color="#181818" size="2">Minu</font>

Thank you so much Minu. Transformation had to happen . It was is a very natural process when a man and woman enters into a committed relationship. Because then its not just about one individual , we will need to think about two at the same time...but the journey of this transformation is not easy..it has its own sets of challenges and that's what I wanted to show in the story...I guess to some extant I was able to do justice...Thanks again for your encouraging words. I am glad you liked this story

Read the story twice.Waiting for the epilogue with cute babies of Samaina.

Originally posted by: ashu98

Read the story twice.Waiting for the epilogue with cute babies of Samaina.

Thank you so much !! Epilogue...hmmm...need to think about it... 😆

Originally posted by: Vidhimehra

Lovely write up.

Thank you so much !!

How did I miss this gem..this is one of the best written story on Samaina. The character sketch and the progress of their relationship wow!
My most fav is the hospital scene just before marriage..that was just perfect..please write an epilogue please this story certainly deserves one..
Waiting for your next story as I have become a fan of your writing 😊