Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 )

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Yudkbh30

@Yudkbh30

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Posted: 7 years ago

#761

Beautiful update

This story is literally stolen my heart

Love it

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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+ 29

Posted: 7 years ago

#762

perfect ending
loved this update

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shelly_nair

@shelly_nair

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Posted: 7 years ago

#763

Wonderful work Ashu. Beautiful ending... But I'm sad that this is concluding part.

Looking forward to read more n more from you.

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#764

Arey story finish ho gyi 😭 I was enjoying it .. Though ending was good finally sameer ki akal aayi and loved how preeti stood up for his sister .. I hope u write more stories. . Waiting for your new work

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Isha

@mystique123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#765

Every time I click on Post reply for the update, it is with the belief that there will be more magic woven by you in the next update. But this time it is with a heavy heart.😭😭

Having said this does not mean I dint love your update. It was fabulous as usual.

Sameer has finally become Naina's MAN. Happy to see him affected by Naina's thoughts, he really love for for sure.

Glad that chance encounter of Sameer with the people of NGO revealed the true nature of people whom he calls as his family. How much would have that poor soul Naina suffered silently.

So Sameer gave a piece of his mind to all those who have hurt Naina, the way you have shaped up those dialogues were 👏👏

Preeti, is world's best sister. She had all the right to yell at Sameer after what Naina has gone through and Rohan, the world's best brother. Sameer's maturity really saved Preeti's and Rohan's relation else word spoken in anger breaks any relation beyond repair.

And finally, Sameer, Naina and their love(Rohan and Preeti's too) has won all the battles.❤️

PS: The T-shirt idea was so cute😳

This story in whole was an amazing piece of work ⭐️

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#766

Loved the concluding part. It was sad to see how his parents choose their our interests over him and his new wife to the very last. I guess there is no redemption for all and that is a reality of life too.

Preeti is Naina's shadow even in her darkest moments. And she is so fiesty. Rohan has his work cut out for him!

Samaina have a wonderful understanding.. something that goes beyond words. And what Naina said is so true.. for most women when it comes to the love of their life forgiveness from their heart comes easy.

Really enjoyed this SS of yours! Looking forward to more :)

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kinnapatel

@kinnapatel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#767

😊wow what an update .Firstly Thanks for such a awesome long update.such a hard work u did and coems out perfectly .wow naina is pre't.lets see how thing comes out on right place and how sameer will take care of her .love the update .SORRY TO ASK BUT U DO PM .please add me .

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#768

Thank you Di for giving us such a beautiful story.I loved it.❤️

I saw the title concluding part and trust me my heart skipped a bit.But yes!all beautiful things come to an end and this end was so beautiful.

No longer it was mushy romance,it was all about responsibility that shows love and most importantly respect. Loved how both got together not because he was perfect, or because she was , but because their combined flaws were resolved in a way that allowed two separate beings to hinge together.

They got along again and just like reactions---Transformed in characteristic and better than their state.I absolutely loved the transformation.

As always I have said you are too good with the words and dialogues..👏👏

And Preeti was well portrayed.There was so much wrath and rightly so.Rohan and Preeti scenes stood out with their own boldness.

And the emotional meet ..Smile was on my lips,stubborn enough not to leave.I felt like standing outside their room and viewing this..That was the best one.No bhaari bharkam dialogues..only important,rightful and emotional talks.

Please Di come up with your next story soon..I don't mind an OS even.Its addictive yeah.😳

Thanks for the PM.

With love-

Minu

Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago

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ScarletNiki

@ScarletNiki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#769

Oh Ashu what a beautiful beautiful story!!! I am sad it has ended and happy that you concluded it so perfectly👏 As much as I enjoyed reading it, all good things must come to an end😛

The way Sameer found out the truth was perfect, also showed Naina had well wishers outside of the family due to her good nature.

The climax of how masks fell from the husband-wife duo's face was disgusting yet amazing. Guess Vishakha could never see beyond her husband and Sameer inherited some that spineless attitude. Thankfully Nanu's guidance, Rohan's support, and above all Naina's love helped him discover the real Sameer Maheshwari! Throwing the vase added a perfect touch, a bit of filmy drama never hurts😆

Preeti and Rohan are perfect for each other😳 Sameer and Naina have a solid support in them. Still can't believe Rohan is Somani's son. For me Rohan-Sameer brother bond is above the relation they shared with their parents, which tells a lot about Somani and Vishakha's nature.

Naina was a character you have to receive an applause for, what a woman! 👏Inspite of everything she had so much faith in Sameer and life, stood for herself, and was full of love. At the end she did get everything she deserved and much more. I loved how she knew Sameer was faithful but that would not suffice to live a respectable life. Sameer also did not disappoint, even though he was caught up in work till the last moment once he realized how Naina was treated nothing mattered to him.

I felt like all the loose ends were tied down and it was a wonderful ending. Twins was cherry on top of the iced chocolate cake⭐️ It was like reading romantic novel since you were always quick with updates. and kept us guessing with each part😊 I am a very impatient reader and usually lose interest if the story doesn't progress but that never happened; now we are at the end *sigh*

Thank you giving us this story, indeed my heart is stolen!

Edited by NikiAries - 7 years ago