Sameer-Naina SS: Lights of Eternity (Deleted...) - Page 60

I'm just fed up of this increasing humidity n I still hv one more day to be passed in the train😭

Thankfully the update was a relief!!

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Last part😭 Ye ek hi baat h jo mujhe acchi nhi lagi

Swati ki swagger dadi😎 reminded me of Preeti's Nani in Roommates (self-promotion😉)

Sameer asked her out!! aur Naina maan bhi gyi.. That was very sweet that she trusts him enough to spend a night with him, alone!!

Arjun's concern for Naina was very nicely expressed.. Phone call wala idea bhi accha tha

Sameer ko car chalate hue aur wo kuch papers dikha ke wahan entry lete hue dekh k ekdum business tycoon wali vibes ayi mujhe😃

But Wohi business man apni heroine k liye paani bhar k laya aur kitta kuch kiya.. It touched my heart

Dil le lo Moumita❤️

Their heartful conversation was just👏 Sameer ko sirf Naina se pyaar hua h.. Na uske pehle kisi se hua na uske baad kisi se hoga😊 That conversation had a sense of assurance n commitment!!

Last mein wo kiss, hayee☺️ zyada nhi bolna mujhe us bare mein.. Na kehna hi thik h😳

I'll really miss this story.. No matter how much guttermind thoughts I hv or 18+ OSs you give us, Lights of Eternity will be my favourite amongst your stories😊

Congregation you completed your first story

And what a beautiful ending

Apt name " lights of eternity "

As usual my words will not be able to do justice to your writing

Its simply beautiful

Even I was as amused as Naina reading his planning about their special day .. And from how long he was Willing to take her out ..

His preparation was just awesome

For a second I was like is he going to propose her .. The way he was all nervous but no it was a date in night ..

Naina's reaction on listen it .. Well banta tha

Whole night .. So technically it was their first night together

Sameer just can't have enough of his girl ..

He extended the time period of date even more

That's like my sameer

The little awkwardness between both of them was so adorable

She was Feeling so nervous ...

But no fear when sameer is here ..

You made fell for him even more

It was so cute to see Naina being all scared of wild animals

Lol .. And sameer took full advantage of it

And the last sequence is my most favorite

Sameer is seriously a gem of a person

The way you describe smallest of detail in your update amezes me ..

It was seriously a beautiful journey reading this story

Your update always brings a smile to my face

And I'm looking forward to smiling more and more

Waiting for your updates

Love

Laalchi reader

Just love ur penning...

Now coming to the update.

Distance makes heart grow fonder and desperate. Well that is just the case here. While the entire world awaits vacations here out hero is busy cursing them. To him vacations mean staying away from his love, getting to see her only twice a week that too in wake of temple visits. The telephonic conversations too cannot compensate for the growing fondness that the hearts now harbour for one another.

I guess this is where friends come in as saviours. The party at sawti's place was just the breathe of fresh air that the two souls were pining for. The perfect timing of it and daadi's cool attitude towards girls and boys mingling together felt like some sundae treat. The love and now the intimacy that charges the love doves are creating a havoc on their minds why else do you think naina's dishevelled, untidy self is so appealing to sameer..its not only the mere fact that she as taking heat pains to cater to the boys but also the attraction that sparks the battery of love and in just a few minutes we find naina in sameer's arms. It was beautiful to read about.

The date. Well back in the 90's the mere mention of having a boyfriend castigated a girl in the society and here our love doves were talking of indulging in an overnight date. Well I never thought it could be possible but when the questions of sameer and naina even the impossible is possible. The hesitation and then the display of trust by them both not only in each other but their relationship was heartwarming to read about. Though initially sameer has mumbled about a date and somewhere trying to gauge her reaction but the fact that he actually could think of an overnight date with naina shows his confidence in her and their relationship. Naina too while it took time for her to register and when she came to know of the plan initially, had a plethora of doubts raging in her mind but only one name made here doubts and anxiety vanish, that of Sameer. Her trust and confidence in him and that he probably must have thought everything out before asking her out spoke volumes about their love and trust for each other.

The restlessness before the Date, it is one of those times when you have plenty of butterflies scurrying in about in your stomach while your mind is in a jumble thinking about all the possibilities and your body's semblance has gone haywire in anxiety. One question that looks overhead is how would it be? It was very well portrayed. I loved it. The fact that both wanted to make the day special commemorate it with special gestures that it remained firmly etched out in their minds for eons to come was delightful to read about. Naina's keychain against those roses that sameer brought were perfect.

The date was the real clincher. Wow I must say it depicts not only sameer 's romantic self but talks volumes for you. Such a thoughtful concept. The fact that Sameer thought of sanctuary for their first date bowled me over. The sheer thought of spending a day and night amidst exotic birds while gazing at constellations was something seldom a man would think even today. The date was a perfect blend of romance dipped in care and heart to heart conversations. It felt like the two souls came in unravelling each other pouring their hearts out while rediscovering their love amidst those sweet touches caresses and intimacy. It felt like sheer bliss. Sameer's confession regarding his fake girlfriend and how he had fallen in love but was in denial in long is something I still pine to watch on our show. It was mesmerizing especially when he described their time together in mount abu to be the best. The fact that their first star gazing at mount abu is the most cherished memory of theirs together was heartwarming to read about. Naina's confession of love at first sight and sameer's expression after knowing about her feelings were sheer bliss to read about. The depth of naina's love for him is displayed in that one confession of naina when she had to tell him how that one encounter changed her life forever. How that encounter changed her stance towards love, a girl who had promised never to indulge in such feelings was ready To throw caution to the wind and live and love. It was simply beautiful.

Sameer's care for naina could be seen in a number of missives. Especially when he implores her to use the bathroom since she hadn't used one since their journey or the fact where he reassures her about not bothering to waste water since he could get anytime any amount they pleased from the nearby pump have gave me husband feels. Even when he had to give the towel he turned his head around, that was plain adorable. Keeping in mind naina's comfort he left the cabin every time she had to use the loo. Even while she bathed, he waited outside telling her to lock the cabin from within. It was all so thoughtful. It depicted a sensitive sensible and responsible side of sameer never seen before.

Their kisses, the new found intimacy, is a delight to read about. Naina taking the initiative and sameer surrendering to her whims is always something I enjoy the most reading. The kisses felt like those rains that come after long where parched souls bask in the sheer watery glory of it all. Their thirst for one another, the lips when they come in touch with other they are on an overdrive for exploration where in the moans and groans decide in their boundaries and also depict the inner turmoil and pleasure that these two experience. When naina was leaning in for more and sameer knew that he had to stop depicts the slow transition of their intimacy which is now ready to move towards those unchartered territories one step at a time.

This update made me cry not because of its sensitivity but also because it's the last update. I have loved this story right from the start. The simplicity of its concept yet the beautiful track which depicts the transition of the characters and their life while they traversed on their journey of love.

I will return for more so this isn't my last comment

Wonderful!

u ended this😆

i don't have words for this update mou... it was so so beautiful... especially the last part

this ff will always be special as it introduced you to me...

love you for penning this down so beatifully

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here comes my detailed reply for this update

love you for keeping the temple dates intact... there's a beauty in those meetings😳

they say the way to a man's heart is through his stomach... and u portrayed it so beautifully...naina cooking for sameer...and then asking him if he wanted more wen he took her to the kitchen... it can't get any cuter😳

i loved the trust naina has in sam...and i feel deep within he knew naina trusts him to spend a night with him... alone...thats why he dared to plan this date... he got the strength from naina herself...

the fact that arjun did not stop naina from going with sam... just focuses on the kind of impression sam has on him... imagine giving permission in those days to spend a day and night with a guy...

and sam did full justice to that trust... except their friends... nobody got a wind of this special date...

sameer maheshwari... bass dil le lo😆

his preparation was bang on... right from the food to the coil😆

but more than that... i loved how he was aware and concious of naina's unspoken needs...

no matter how close you are to ur bf... things like using the washroom etc becomes quite awkward... but sameer saw to it that this awkwardness was not there... he was so casual about it... making naina totally comfortable...

loved how the mention of the nainital girl was a matter of sadness for sam... coz he knew how much it would've hurt naina... this guy is seriously bf goals

i was amazed that sam was planning this date since months

i was awed that it was naina who initiated the kiss at night and demanded more...

it just made the date all the more beautiful...

and this is wat made this whole story come to a full circle for me

as all good things must come to an end... so did this ff...

you know... the first part of this update was the first piece of your writing that i had ever read... and you won't believe wat caught my eye and got me hooked to you as a writer...

the fact that u mentioned sameer's sweaty shirt made a screeching sound as it unstuck from the rexine of the side lower berth😆

i was awed by your detailing...

eternity... has given an insight into the time period of the most frustrating and unsuccessful tracks of the show...

i so wish the cvs could've drawn some sort of inspiration from your writing and incorporated it in the track...

you have covered the journey of sameer becoming sameer jaiprakash maheshwari...and becoming his naina's sameer in the most aesthetic way possible...

i loved how you nurtured their love...helped it bloom and made their relationship so strong that it can withstand any storm in future.

thank you so much for this journey...

there have been so many of my fav moments in this ff...

sameer sharing his grief with naina and then falling asleep on her lap...

loved how you covered the progression of their physical intimacy...right from that peck on his cheeks to their first kiss...

loved how sameer was so concious about their first kiss... protecting her from himself... and then as he realised that it was naina's desire too...it became the most natural thing for him...and how he always made sure naina was comfortable with watever advances they made...

and yes... congratulations on ur idea of covering face with dupatta during bike ride being churaoed by the cvs 🥳

coming to the last update of this series... i simply loved how you closed that loop of the realisation of sameer's love for naina on that night in mount abu gazing the stars... with them sealing their future under the same stars...

thank you so much mou for this beauty...

i'm going to save it on my phone for future reads wenever i am travelling coz i know that each time i read,... i will discover a new aspect to love it more