Sameer-Naina SS: Lights of Eternity (Deleted...)

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toshibelekar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Very well written keep it up.

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Tannu18

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Ohh god it was excellent 👏 I had tears in my eyes when sameer sees naina and when arjun supports naina. CVs should read this as they will have an idea on how the story should progress.

Very well done dear 👏

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Humera

@ITSABOUT_DMG

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Amazing Part Sona Di

Loveddd it

i liked the part where arjun taking side of naina

it was sooo beautiful

n naina welcoming sameer

its just wowww.

update soon

loads of love

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Kshithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

This is beautiful piece of work Moumita. 😊

As I read through the story, I was with them. With Sameer and his thoughts, with Munna, Pundit, and their concern. And with Naina through Sameer's eyes.

And then I waited with with my breath held, and my heart pounding, for them to meet. To find their home.

I am so glad to have found such excellent writers, like yourself, in this forum. I can learn so much from you all.

Will be waiting for your PM for the next part. 😃

Love

Kshithi

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: shelly_nair
Great work👏

Thank you so much Shelly! 😊

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Niakhush
Omg such a beautiful updates...n I must say at such a perfect timing!!

I so so wish to see some scenes in show...like arjun melting...n naina's welcome gift for sameer!

The story had so deep emotions just like wht CVS show us...u r a brilliant vwriter who cn touch the readers heart with words!!!
Wonderful update!!!

Thanks Nia... I also wish to see Arjun supporting Naina... Sameer has done so much to win Arjun's heart, that I strongly feel it's time he did something for SamAina... 😊

@Bold: Really...? Thank you so much for this appreciation! 😳

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: surbharati
Excellent is very small word...

Please update soon next part...we want school...Naina Sameer
and everything that is related to Samiana...

very nicely written

Update soon next part please

Thank you so much dear...! 😊

Don't worry... school is definitely on the cards... 😃

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Fantastic update moumita... Loved this so much... You mqde me happy along with sameer in the end😊... Thanx for the long update... Arjun helping samaina is like a dream come true... Amazing story telling... Waiting for the next update.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

In the words of poet Robert Frost, "Home is the place that, when you have to go there, they have to take you in."

His Naina was there ;right there to take him in.😳

Lovely update Mou.You are raising your own bars lady👏👏 Such fluid and impactful writing.So much to learn from you.😃

The apprehensive progression from home to heart and again heart in home is what takes the cake.Brilliantly done.Arjun is relatable here as an elder who is both concerned for her little sister but is ready to let her reigns of life to another man who brought the tinges of sparks in her eyes..😳

Munna and Pandit always the bridges to cement the relationship.The whole of it had a spell and loved it to core.

Thanks for the PM and update soon.

With love-

Minu😳

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: dilse99
Wow, I am speechless! You write so well, and your descriptions of every detail makes it so easy to imagine the characters and their thoughts. You make it all come to life!

How beautiful it would be to see these kinds of scenes transpire in the show?

Really loving every word of your story - superb effort! 😊

Thank you so much dear! 🤗

@Bold: It feels so good to know that my efforts to make you all a part of the story paid off... 😳

I would personally love to see Arjun supporting Naina in the show too...