Sameer-Naina SS: Lights of Eternity (Deleted...) - Page 7

Originally posted by: ITSABOUT_DMG

Amazing Part Sona Di

Loveddd it

i liked the part where arjun taking side of naina

it was sooo beautiful

n naina welcoming sameer

its just wowww.

update soon

loads of love

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

This is beautiful piece of work Moumita. 😊

As I read through the story, I was with them. With Sameer and his thoughts, with Munna, Pundit, and their concern. And with Naina through Sameer's eyes.

And then I waited with with my breath held, and my heart pounding, for them to meet. To find their home.

I am so glad to have found such excellent writers, like yourself, in this forum. I can learn so much from you all.

Will be waiting for your PM for the next part. 😃

Love

Kshithi

Originally posted by: angelic567

Fantastic update moumita... Loved this so much... You mqde me happy along with sameer in the end😊... Thanx for the long update... Arjun helping samaina is like a dream come true... Amazing story telling... Waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: moumita04

Thank you so much dear...!! 😳😳

Its my wish too to see Arjun supporting Naina in our show... It would mean so much to her to have her brother's support...

Please let me know what shall I call you..? 😊

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

In the words of poet Robert Frost, "Home is the place that, when you have to go there, they have to take you in."

His Naina was there ;right there to take him in.😳

Lovely update Mou.You are raising your own bars lady👏👏 Such fluid and impactful writing.So much to learn from you.😃

The apprehensive progression from home to heart and again heart in home is what takes the cake.Brilliantly done.Arjun is relatable here as an elder who is both concerned for her little sister but is ready to let her reigns of life to another man who brought the tinges of sparks in her eyes..😳

Munna and Pandit always the bridges to cement the relationship.The whole of it had a spell and loved it to core.

Thanks for the PM and update soon.

With love-

Minu😳

Originally posted by: ruchi3179

Hey i missed the story earlier.Its awesome

Originally posted by: Nandita123

It was so beautifully described. Read the both part together and i was in awe. The flow in your writing... amazing..simply amazing. Waiting for your next part. And please never stop writing.

P.s - me too a Bengali.😃

Originally posted by: msdfan

Nice update.. 👍🏼

Beautifully written..

Update soon

Originally posted by: angelic567

u can call me simi😊