My Forever Valentine (Naina Sameer Fs)updated last part on page 11 - Page 11

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hmm..Okay to finally aapne ''bomb'' gira hi diya..😉 Kya dhamaka kiya..👏👏

Valentines day kum Diwali lagi..😉

Okay Jokes apart..

That was intense man.You started with wisp light and ended with consuming flame.Some brilliant writing was that ..👏👏 Each word had their own effect and spell.

Loved the photo frame scene.That was so cute and creative.😃 Ria is so creative like her Papa.And that cake scene too was done beautifully.

The way she broke the news scratch that the biggest and happiest news to him was lit.Being already a father that was so quick and expected of him.Loved that witty writing there.👍🏼

Aapne to unke pyaar ka jhanda gad diya...Aapke charan kahan hai..dhoke pina chahati hoon..😉

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Omg that was Soo passionate ... Well I belong to that asanskaari lot sooo your warning was ignored by me 🤣

The cute part was both fighting whether it will be a girl or a boy ... I was expecting Sameer to say lagi shart ladki ki hogi ... And Naina baby's reaction ... For sure she would have thrown her out of the blanket 🤣

Originally posted by: Radhika03

Wow written so beautifully... Loved it...keep writing more⭐️

Originally posted by: lakku19

Wie..

Wonderful..I really don't have words.i loved it so much...

It was too too good.

I m feeling sad that this part is the end.

Please do write more..

U have an amazing talent..

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Awesome piece dear!! I really enjoyed reading it...both the sanskari and the asanskari parts...😆 (damn our minds have gotten dirty from the dose of masoom pyaar)...

Really well written- I loved the surprise (both by Naina and Sameer)...the card, the letter...aww!!

and Riya is to completely adorable...loved the papa ki jaan...Sameer is going to be a great father like you portrayed it...😳

I'll look forward to more from you...do PM me next time you write a story! 😊

Originally posted by: sonakshi02

Lovely.. Enjoyed reading it

Update is awesome

Make more like this 😳

Originally posted by: raghavkalpi

I can't stop blushing 😳

You have described each and every scene very well 👏