My Forever Valentine (Naina Sameer Fs)updated last part on page 11

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Phoenix

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Wow... What an update... Palangtod ws just amazing 😉😳

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IThinkALot

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Swatiraii
Nice updates
Beautifully written

Thank you 😃

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IThinkALot

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: crzsadiya
no words for it.so beautiful story awww...touched my heart...enjoyed so much..every bit of this story was so beautiful..just speechless...
very well done..felt every single thing u wrote. just amazing...loved the last line u said..""when they are together life isn't a fairytale but way more better... way more beautiful.""
so true..
plz come back with another awesome story like this plz..

Thnx for this lovely comment dear. 😃

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Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Fantastic update

I loved their celebration..ria is such a cutie

Palangtod was hawttt.. someone gimme a pankha

Sameer has got everything..family, love, children everything

Last line was just❤️

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IThinkALot

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: angelic567
Wow... What an update... Palangtod ws just amazing 😉😳

Thank you 😃

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Hmm..Okay to finally aapne ''bomb'' gira hi diya..😉 Kya dhamaka kiya..👏👏

Valentines day kum Diwali lagi..😉

Okay Jokes apart..

That was intense man.You started with wisp light and ended with consuming flame.Some brilliant writing was that ..👏👏 Each word had their own effect and spell.

Loved the photo frame scene.That was so cute and creative.😃 Ria is so creative like her Papa.And that cake scene too was done beautifully.

The way she broke the news scratch that the biggest and happiest news to him was lit.Being already a father that was so quick and expected of him.Loved that witty writing there.👍🏼

Aapne to unke pyaar ka jhanda gad diya...Aapke charan kahan hai..dhoke pina chahati hoon..😉

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suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

Omg that was Soo passionate ... Well I belong to that asanskaari lot sooo your warning was ignored by me 🤣

The cute part was both fighting whether it will be a girl or a boy ... I was expecting Sameer to say lagi shart ladki ki hogi ... And Naina baby's reaction ... For sure she would have thrown her out of the blanket 🤣

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Radhika

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Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Wow written so beautifully... Loved it...keep writing more⭐️

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Wie..

Wonderful..I really don't have words.i loved it so much...

It was too too good.

I m feeling sad that this part is the end.

Please do write more..

U have an amazing talent..

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IThinkALot

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Posted: 7 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Fantastic update
I loved their celebration..ria is such a cutie
Palangtod was hawttt.. someone gimme a pankha
Sameer has got everything..family, love, children everything
Last line was just❤️

Thank you Anjali. 😃 I've really tried to keep palang tod romance from XXX rating. 😆