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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Farheenshaikh

Soon... Update soo... CCan't wait to read next part


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Awesome update
Ishita is cooking for raman wow so sweet of you ishita 😳
Ishita misunderstood him 😲😲 What will happen now
Continue soon
Thanks for pm


thank you so much for comment 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely one
ishita is so innocent
she cooked food
poor Raman had to eat
this shagun na
hope Raman sort out everything
update soon
thnxx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DivanShireen

lovely one
ishita is so innocent
she cooked food
poor Raman had to eat
this shagun na
hope Raman sort out everything
update soon
thnxx for pm



thank you for comment next is laughing pearl
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Posted: 8 years ago
Before reading it please listen to me, if you feel it bakwas please throw tomatoes not eggs because today is Friday. And if you liked this update than I'm so lucky to have you'll here.

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After hearing his conversation with shagun, Ishitha couldn't stand in that place anymore and made a run while Raman was running behind her cursing shagun in his mind.

"Ishita, please listen to me" He screamed but she didn't pay any heed to him and kept on running.

As they reached the parking lot there were many vehicles moving making him difficult to reach her. Suddenly there was a speedy vehicle coming towards ishita but she didn't recognize it as she was busy crying and running.

As soon as Raman saw the vehicle he screamed ishitas name so that she could sense her surroundings but everything went in vain. As the vehicle is getting near her, Ramans heartbeat stopped for a second thinking about the upcoming scene.

With his full strength he screamed her name "Ishita!." And finally she turned to the source of the voice and was shocked to see a speedy vehicle coming towards her.

She tried to move from the place but her legs didnt cooperate with her and she was glued to the ground. She knew she is gonna get hit by this vehicle and closed her eyes to embrace the pain while uttering Raman's name.

"Ram...Raman."

She opened her eyes feeling a strong muscular arms pulling her by the her waist to another side. And both of them fell on the ground as they couldn't balance properly.

Ishita kept her head on his chest and she could clearly figure out that it's Raman , no Her Raman. She lifted her head to look at his face and both of them shared an eye lock. He caressed her palm which was on his chest while she gripped his palm tighter.

Their moment was spoiled by a mans voice who drove the vehicle and both of them woke up and straightened themselves.

"Sir, are you OK." He enquired them and that's the limit Raman lost his temper and marched towards him and held his collar.

"What the hell do you mean by are we OK ,huh? What if she gets hurt. Dammit, what if I loose her. What if..." He trailed of and punched him with every sentence.

Ishitha tried to stop Raman from getting into fight but he didn't stop as he was scared of loosing her.

"Raman, please stop." She shouted to him.

"No. How dare he hurt you, huh. I'll not leave him." He barked.

"At least for me, leave him" she said in a small voice and it really worked.

As soon as Raman left him the man ran away thanking Ishita while he was fuming in anger.

"What the hell are you doing? Don't you use your small brain huh? What if something happens to you?" Raman grabbed her shoulders roughly while she winced in pain.

"Why does it matter to you, huh? You have your nidhi right, go and party with her. Leave me." She struggled in his arms and his hold became more tighter.

"Of course, it matters to me. You are My Wife and whatever you are thinking is not true." He explained her and noticed her forehead having a small scratch.

"Ishita, your forehead is bleeding. Is it paining. Why don't you take care of yourself. What if it was a deep cut,huh?" Raman blew the air on her forehead trying to sooth her pain and immediately she removed his hands roughly.

"Why does it matters to you if I dies or live." The soft spoken Ishitha was screaming like a wounded tigress and raman was taken aback.

"Yes it matters to me because I love you. Did you get it?" He screamed loudly which resounded in the open place.

Two souls were dumbstruck with this scene one doesn't understand what's happening while other one is surprised thinking what he blurted.

"But shagun...said... Nidhi and... You..." She struggled for words as its very difficult for her to utter his name with another woman.

Raman softened instantly and cupped her cheeks understanding her emotions "Ishitha, I know you have the every right to know about my past. But it isn't normal dear, my life is so complicated until you entered my life. My past makes me difficult to breathe and your presence gives me hope to live."

He took a deep breathe and continued "Do you think I'll cheat you Ishitha?" She nodded a No.

"Do you trust me?" He asked her and continued as she nodded positively "Then listen, I'll tell you my past my self. I don't have such courage to open my painful wounds.

She gave a small nod understanding him and willing to give him time to share his past with her. And this act of her made him to brush away all his fears and regain his playful mood.

"So, Ishitha. You didn't answer me." He asked with a naughty glint in his eyes.

"What Raman?" She asked feeling confused.

"You still didn't tell me how you feel for me. Not bad, I had already opened my feelings to you but you..." He trailed off as he saw her blushing hard and hugged him in response making him feel elated.

As if the heaven is blessing this star crossed lovers it started raining making them drench completely but they are too lost in each other that they forgot their surroundings.

A sudden thunderstorm made them to land on earth and realized their position. While Ishita is blushing making Raman's desire to grow more.

He caressed her cheek with one palm while bringing her more close to her by her waist. He looked intently in her eyes asking for permission while she blushed crimson red giving him a signal to proceed.

He accepted with smile and placed his lips on her softly kissing every bit of her lips while ishita wants him to deepen the kiss. Understanding her excitement he deepened the kiss while she participated equally as if there is no tomorrow.

Finally after few minutes they broke the kiss feeling out of their breath and held each other arms as if promising each other not leave at any circumstances.

"I love you Raman." He heard her soft voice.

He lifted her face to meet her eyes only to witness it getting moist and she continued "Please dont leave me Raman. I can't even breathe without you."

"You'll find me always beside you Ishita and this is Raman Kumar bhalla promise." He said and hugged her tight securing her in his arms and sealing their bond with their selfless love on each other.

On the other side a pair of eyes are burning with rage looking at the couple hugging each other forgetting the world. It really brought the person many memories which is adding fuel to her rage.

"You were never like this with me Raman, then how could you fall head over heels over this girl whom I hate the most." She broke the wine glass in her fist and vowed to herself.

"I'll never let you go away from me raman. Never! You are only mine and someone is going to pay heavily for this moment. Remember one thing Sanaya is my name and I get anything by hook or crook. Mind it." With that she strode away from the place leaving the two pure souls undisturbed.

Shagun stamped her foot on the ground seeing their bond and ashok pulled her aside.

"What the hell are you doing there" ashok questioned her.

"Didn't you see those two, they are so happy and look at me even after marrying one of the richest man I'm not happy." she screamed on his face.

"Because you never gave a chance to our relationship. You always think how to compete Raman from your childhood. That's all. "

"Huh yes, I need to win. I can't loose in front of him because it hurts my ego. And listen I'll be the first person who will be happy with his sadness." Saying that she stormed away along with ashok who followed her to cool her mood.

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"Oh so, Mrs shagun is also here. Mind you both(Raman and shagun) I'll never let you all be happy with your respective spouses. You have done a grave mistake by ignoring my situation and I'll make sure you both along with your partners will suffer." Sanaya said to herself and took out a phone from her shimmery dress pocket.

"Thank you so much Nidhi for informing about Raman's whereabouts. I'm not going to spare him." she gritted through her teeth while nidhi smirked evilly.

"Dont worry babe. I'm on the way I'll reach to your suite within an hour and we both can plot a danger to him."

"It isn't that easy nidhi. Raman is married to that orphan ishita and shagun is also here."

"What? Sanaya then we can't do anything if those two persons are there. Our complete plan got waste. Now if Raman meets shagun then our truth will come out. I think we need to go back." nidhi said fearing for her life.

"Don't worry. I don't think Raman and shagun would speak to shagun after what we have done. And did you forgot what I did to shagun's pihu, now they wont even dare to look at each other. And when that orphan ishita knows his past she will spit on him and leave So he must comeback to me. "She spoke with confidence while nidhi appreciated her thoughts not knowing the bond between Raman ishita is something that a death also couldn't separate them.
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I thought to forward ishra relation a little so this update. It's only a outline of their past so you must continue the remaining.


Now who is sanaya? Why is nidhi helping her? What did sanaya do with pihu? How is pihu related to ishra, AshAgun? How did Ishra meet and why is sanaya effected by it?

All these questions will be answered by ishrasoul. Thank you hansa ji for asking her.




Edited by laughingpearls - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
me too ress
unres
lovely updt pearl
ishita was about get hit by the car
bt raman saved her in the nick of time
fibally d confession
ishra kissed
so I guess raman's past is gonna b really complicated
wid pihu sanaya shagun n nidhi
cont soon rida di
thnxx in advance 4 d pm😊
Edited by akriti154 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
You took my chance Di
I'm second 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unrest and update soonish pearl 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_pearl

You took my chance Di
I'm second 😭


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Posted: 8 years ago
congo👍🏼

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