Writing Treasts : welcoming all (updated part 6) and note on page 52

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone 😊
Well this one is for story only😆
I started to write a new story and I got stuck in between
( I know some of you might say that it's not a new thing😉)
But I have a good solution now
I am starting a new thread
Here I will post the story and I'll leave it at some point
Then...
Then I'll pass it on to another writer and this goes on till we reach to a satisfied end😃
So be aware of your buddies 😆
And please if anyone wants pm buddy me
Writers will send PMS to their buddies as well as me so I can tell others
So let's start

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So here we go...
Let's start the journey
ISHRA: MOMENTS OF LOVE

Ishita was sitting in her bedroom all decked up beautifully waiting for her husband. Well taoday was her first night with him and like every girl she was quiet nervous and equally excited for it. It was certainly one hour or more when he came in the room.

Here Ishita being tired of all the rituals had dozed in her sitting position. He saw her and mentally slapped himself for being late on their special night.
" Raman tu sach main gadha hai... Koi apani suhaagraat ko itni der se ata hai kya ? Pata nahi bechari kitna intazaar kar rahi hogi. Ab bhugat beta... "
He made her sleep properly and tucked her in blanket with so much care as if she was a glass doll and would break down. Then he went and freshened himself and lied next to her.

In the morning Ishita was first to wake up. She was firstly shocked to find herself caged in a firm hold but after realising who it actually was a blush started to adore her cheeks. She tried to get free from him but his hold became more firm and she couldn't stop the red hue crepting on her cheeks yet again.

Here Raman was on cloud nine seeing his effect on her. Well he was awake already but when he sensed her getting up he had faked to sleep and it indeed prooved a good idea as he could see his wife getting red coloured just because of his mere presence when he had slightly opened his eyes. But then he thought not to trouble her more and loosened his grip. As soon as Ishita realised this she freed herself carefully and rushed to bathroom. Raman saw this and unknkowingly his lips curled into a bright smile.
" This was the best start of the day... " he thought to himself and ruffled his hair.

When Ishita came after taking shower she felt a strong gaze on her and she started to feel different kind of feelings in her.
" ufff this blush would never go. Why am i always like this when he is around ? Murgan please save me " Ishita thought and mentally preparing herself she moved to the dressing table.

Raman had to force himself to look somewhere other when he saw Ishita coming out from the bathroom. She was wearing blue sari... His favorite colour which he liked even more , her long hair blocking his path of her beautiful face. "Oh god she looks ravishing... " Raman thought to himself. But seeing her uncomfortable he thought that she needed some time to take their relationship forward . so he decided to give her some space and hurriedly moved from there.

Ishita was confused seeing him. She was now being slightly unsure about him being happy about them
" Is he happy with this marriage ? Kahi kuch gadbad toh nahi ? Ayyo murgan please sab sambhal lena... "

It was evening time... Thier reception. Ramam was already there and everyone was now waiting for Ishita... And she came looking breathtakingly stunning. Raman wanted to make her his then and there but he somehow controlled himself.

Slowly guests started to arrive. Raman was being a perfect host till one couple arrived. It were Mr and Mrs Ashok khanna. Raman's anger started to rise but somehow controlling himself he welcomed them too. But the couple had other plans.

( well all would wonder why so ... actually not cause they are shagun and ashok but let's go to their story)

Raman, Ashok and Shagun were college mates. And due to Raman's popularity Ashok was always jealous of him. Moreover Shagun was high over hills with Raman. The girl whom Ashok liked. But soon Shagun understood that there was no place for her in Raman's life so she went to Ashok... coming to present, Now Raman was CEO and Ashok was still jealous of him cause he couldn't be. And Shagun...well she was curious to see whom Raman bhalla was married.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Index
Part 1 : above

Part 2 : page 6

Part 3 : page 20

Part 4 : page 35

Part 5 : page 40

Part 6 : page 48
Edited by Love_pearl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for the next part?
Toh ask akku Di 😆
She will cont
I don't know what will happen next😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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And yes
All the writers please make sure that you post your story within 4 to 5 days
Don't make us wait 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishrasoul

Nice idea...

Akku update soon

Thanks 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Start is really interesting
ishra married
mrng scene was sweet
shaggy & ashok here too ashok jealous .. 😆
waiting for nxt part
Akku diii update sooon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you Di
Your turn😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: gunita_ishra

nice idea aruna yrr 👍🏼

Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: gunita_ishra

Start is really interesting
ishra married
mrng scene was sweet
shaggy & ashok here too ashok jealous .. 😆
waiting for nxt part
Akku diii update sooon...

Yup
Me too waiting 😆

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