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yashivid

@yashivid

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Thank u prabh for this OS.

I felt at peace after reading it coz I was so damn frustrated after that crap episode where raman declares his marriage with shagun.

I mean seriously when the are getting a second chance they are spoiling it with anger, ego n stupidity. Inspite is getting his drums beaten seven years back he repeated the same thing n the show also shows the same. So I would be so happy that raman dies in the show as well so that we stop getting frustrated by the shit that the CVs are throwing on us😡

Loved the note written by raman...that two the part written for ishu.

Love u prabh for writing this...u wrote ur frustration so beautifully.

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

uff prabh rula diya tumne!

omg i feel so emotional right now!

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Sweta

@Divek-ishra

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Its too emotional..

I can't read more when I read poison..

U make me cry..

I can't imagine ishita's lyf widout Raman.. Nd raman lyf's without ishita..

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Yr tumne emotional krdia

..luv it

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Rkchinju

@Rkchinju

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

So heart wrenching update 😭
Raman's death...mein soch bhi nahi sakthi😭
Broke my heart 😭
Note part was fab 👏 ...
U wrote so beautifully...
The line he said"I couldn't see my name being removed from yours, so before you left my name and became Ishita Iyer once again I made you the widow of Raman Bhalla..."
I teared up... 😭 😭
Excellent writing dear 👏

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megha2227

@megha2227

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

And now after pouring buckets; very impressive the Is is. The last line of the letter made me tear up more. You are an amazing writer. Love all your works. You just put the emotions with meticulous care.

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This is brilliant os

loved it

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Pasoori

@ChanChanMan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

RES I'm gonna read this in relaxation

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EDITED

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First of all, I demand an epilogue... yeah ... I wanna know the aftermath ... cos this was REALLY PAINFUL ... seeing RKB so defeated is actually heartbreaking ... the guy has NEVER wished bad for anyone; not even his enemy and his behaviour stems from his disappointment at the woman he loves so dearly ...

... I won't lie; this gave me some sorta sadistic pleasure ...

Please give an epilogue Prabh 😳

Edited by Badtameez_Dil_1 - 9 years ago

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Sonal

@...Forever...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Beautiful Prabh

Emotional one

I have tears in my eyes

Awesome as always

You nailed it!!

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

I loved this & somehow found it a fitting end to someone who emotions & hurt & guilt consumed him. What's the need to fight when you feel like you can't control yourself and end up destroying everyone? If there is a wild fire spreading - kill the source & prevent further damage, na?

For some weird reason I found the inclusion of the note to Shagun really nice bc it almost wasn't expected.

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