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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Its so painful..
I m crying...

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Originally posted by: discipline
Very emotional update 😭
This story made me cry
Thanks for the pm

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#32

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
emotional os...

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Originally posted by: sireesha76
Very emotional

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: yashivid
Thank u prabh for this OS.
I felt at peace after reading it coz I was so damn frustrated after that crap episode where raman declares his marriage with shagun.

I mean seriously when the are getting a second chance they are spoiling it with anger, ego n stupidity. Inspite is getting his drums beaten seven years back he repeated the same thing n the show also shows the same. So I would be so happy that raman dies in the show as well so that we stop getting frustrated by the shit that the CVs are throwing on us😡

Loved the note written by raman...that two the part written for ishu.

Love u prabh for writing this...u wrote ur frustration so beautifully.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially the note and the part that was for Ishita! This OS was a result of anger and frustration since I thought Raman's emotions weren't justified and his words were getting worse with each episode so there seemed like no better option to end his character! But thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ..sush..
uff prabh rula diya tumne!
omg i feel so emotional right now!

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Originally posted by: Divek-ishra
Its too emotional..
I can't read more when I read poison..
U make me cry..
I can't imagine ishita's lyf widout Raman.. Nd raman lyf's without ishita..

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#35

Originally posted by: kaa1202
SO emotional Prabh...

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Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
Yr tumne emotional krdia
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..luv it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Rkchinju
So heart wrenching update 😭
Raman's death...mein soch bhi nahi sakthi😭
Broke my heart 😭
Note part was fab 👏 ...
U wrote so beautifully...
The line he said"I couldn't see my name being removed from yours, so before you left my name and became Ishita Iyer once again I made you the widow of Raman Bhalla..."
I teared up... 😭 😭
Excellent writing dear 👏

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Originally posted by: cutekhusboo
Soo emotional..
Beautifully written

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: megha2227
And now after pouring buckets; very impressive the Is is. The last line of the letter made me tear up more. You are an amazing writer. Love all your works. You just put the emotions with meticulous care.

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Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
This is brilliant os
loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1
RES I'm gonna read this in relaxation

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First of all, I demand an epilogue... yeah ... I wanna know the aftermath ... cos this was REALLY PAINFUL ... seeing RKB so defeated is actually heartbreaking ... the guy has NEVER wished bad for anyone; not even his enemy and his behaviour stems from his disappointment at the woman he loves so dearly ...

... I won't lie; this gave me some sorta sadistic pleasure ...

Please give an epilogue Prabh 😳

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS even though it was emotional! I agree with how Raman's character is, he doesn't want bad for anyone, but when his emotions aren't shown and he is portrayed as monster, it becomes frustrating! Anyways thank you so much for liking and commenting! However I don't have an epilogue planned for this story, sorry!

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#39

Originally posted by: akriti154
Superb it was

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Originally posted by: ...Forever...
Beautiful Prabh
Emotional one
I have tears in my eyes
Awesome as always
You nailed it!!

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#40

Originally posted by: -K.13-
I loved this & somehow found it a fitting end to someone who emotions & hurt & guilt consumed him. What's the need to fight when you feel like you can't control yourself and end up destroying everyone? If there is a wild fire spreading - kill the source & prevent further damage, na?

For some weird reason I found the inclusion of the note to Shagun really nice bc it almost wasn't expected.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS and found it an appropriate end for Raman! He is carried by his emotions, and sometimes the way he is shown on screen and the way his emotions are treated, it seems like any person in his spot would be on the verge of ending themselves! Also glad you liked the small portion of the note for Shagun! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!