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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

U made me cry bcz of ur wrings...
Well written..

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lakshmi

@maduragymhasium

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

extremely sorry for late reply dear

what an update

its really raman dead

he has so much pain inside

i hate him how would he give up his life moreover he is rkb he has to fight

loved his apologize to everyone its show how much he loves all

what i love most are last part apologize to his love and doesn't want to hear her calling ishu iyer so just end up his life and made her widow of raman bhalla excellent dear

so emotional heart wrenching

unable to control my tears while reading dear

outstanding written dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

you are the best in conveying emotion through your writing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Mukphu

@maya.leish

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Its a nice and emotional OS...but I always love Raman character more than Ishita..he is the most lonely person...feeling really bad...no one to understand and tame him...he is just like a hungry lion...hungry for a shoulder to cry out...hungry for to be loved...I really feel pity of him...

Nice update but ending is 😭😭😭

Thank you

With lots of love

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Maar daala tune Raman ko hi maar daala ...

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nizaha

@nizaha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

u made me cry

an emotional well written story :)

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..
Amazing Prabh🤗
I had tears in my eyes 😭
Subah subah kya emotional kar diya😆
Bt we luv Raman a lot ye sab aur aise bahut depressing hai fr a IshRa fan😳
Again👏👏👏

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS even though it was emotional! And I would never want this either, but it just happened to be my frustration on the show coming out in the form of this OS! But thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: Mdwst
It was emotional ...
So Raman is no more ...looks like you love him more and you relieved him from his misery. I love RKB too...but still...This really hurt me. I feel terrible for Ishu too. 😭

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS even though it was emotional! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: snehaseshan
Fantastic,emotional just luvd d way u had shown d pain 👏

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially all the emotions and the pain! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: sririt
It was so sad and emotional, especially the letter. Feeling bad for all specially Ishita and Adi.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS though it was sad and emotional! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Been n meaning to comment on this piece forever now..😛

Loved it prabh...😛👏

Its rare when i feel that characters deserve a reprieve... the reality of their lives is so emotionally exhausting you just wish they ended the torture once and for all..

And no I do not support suicide as an option but RKB to me..has had the most emotionally vexing life i have seen even in fiction for a long long timr..add to it tjhe cvs reluctance to show his point of view and even if they do ..make everyone else turn it into a joke...is sadism at its worst...

I feel for both these characters- ishita and raman- in your piece..but thanks to how irrelevant and mercilessly ignored raman's emotions are off late in the narrative..I confess i often fantasize about 'the end' that your piece described. ..

Thanks for writing this😊

Edited by bscorp13 - 9 years ago

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: kingmanu
Raman lived in more pain than ishu past seven years. It's not easy to live with the guilt of killing your loved ones.If not for children, Raman would have died the day, when both iishuand ruhi died. If not for his words, Raman's anger is 100% justified.
You made me cry girl😭
Thanks to trp, for such things never happen in the show😃
Sorry to say, I didn't like this one. Of course no one would like raman's death.😆
But for me, Raman might have had these feelings of killing himself for the past seven years, he lived in his shell, stayed numb, didn't speak to anyone,lived in his own world.
But when his JKR is back, he started responding, started shouting, yesterday he was even making nok-jhok😆
Surely if your reason to live is back, you don't wanna die.
Even Raman wanted to live, the day he saw ishu, his expressions told it😳
And leaving him for seven years, living with mani, all these can be sorted out, if you love each other. I don't think Raman would have killed himself even after seeing ishita.
No doubt you have great writing skills, but the way this OSwas taken, I didn't like it.
Sorry for the long rant. WHEN YOUR REASON FOR LIVING IS BACK, YOU DON'T WANNA DIE.
That's true,trust me.

Hey Kingmanu, sorry I don't know your name. And I'm glad you liked the writing of the OS even though you didn't like the storyline itself. I understand what you're saying and I do agree that just seeing Ishita has brought an energy in Raman and brought him from the dark place he had been in for 7 years, but this OS as I mentioned was a result of my frustration. It seemed like Raman's feelings had no place and he was repeatedly shown as someone who couldn't show or connect to emotions. Hence I took my anger out on this OS, but I'm sorry that you didn't like the OS and it upset, that was not what I intended to do.