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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: fSharm
U made me cry bcz of ur wrings...
Well written..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: maya.leish
Its a nice and emotional OS...but I always love Raman character more than Ishita..he is the most lonely person...feeling really bad...no one to understand and tame him...he is just like a hungry lion...hungry for a shoulder to cry out...hungry for to be loved...I really feel pity of him...
Nice update but ending is 😭😭😭
Thank you
With lots of love

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially the emotions! I do tend to favour Raman's character more than Ishita, but I don't know why I wanted to write this OS! And I completely agree with how his character is! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium
extremely sorry for late reply dear

what an update

its really raman dead

he has so much pain inside

i hate him how would he give up his life moreover he is rkb he has to fight

loved his apologize to everyone its show how much he loves all

what i love most are last part apologize to his love and doesn't want to hear her calling ishu iyer so just end up his life and made her widow of raman bhalla excellent dear

so emotional heart wrenching

unable to control my tears while reading dear

outstanding written dear 👏

you are the best in conveying emotion through your writing 👏

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS even though it was sad especially his note and the part of it for Ishita including the last line! Happy you liked the emotions and the writing! And even RKB, who always fight, is a human at the end of the day who has a breaking point! But thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Maar daala tune Raman ko hi maar daala ...

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS! And now when I looked at it, this is the 3rd time Raman has died in one of my stories. So more of that will be coming now! But thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Par I loved his last note

Glad you liked his last note!

Originally posted by: nizaha
u made me cry
an emotional well written story :)

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially all the emotions! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: bscorp13
Been n meaning to comment on this piece forever now..😛
Loved it prabh...😛👏
Its rare when i feel that characters deserve a reprieve... the reality of their lives is so emotionally exhausting you just wish they ended the torture once and for all..
And no I do not support suicide as an option but RKB to me..has had the most emotionally vexing life i have seen even in fiction for a long long timr..add to it tjhe cvs reluctance to show his point of view and even if they do ..make everyone else turn it into a joke...is sadism at its worst...

I feel for both these characters- ishita and raman- in your piece..but thanks to how irrelevant and mercilessly ignored raman's emotions are off late in the narrative..I confess i often fantasize about 'the end' that your piece described. ..

Thanks for writing this😊

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS! And I don't support suicide as an answer to anything ever, but like you said there are times where I believe that Raman, if a real person, would have had enough by now! There has to be a breaking point for each person, and this time I really felt like Raman's end would have come had he not been fictional! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

For some strange reason. I did miss out on this OS and I thank God for it. I was very frustrated with the show then but the past 4-5 days have given me hope and this OS didn't make me as sad.

Apart from this, it was very very emotional. My eyes welled up at the last para of the letter especially. Raman and Ishita both deserve better but I agree with you, there is a limit to how much a person can take.

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