Breaking Away or Breaking Apart? An IshRa TS - Part 4 updated on pg 11

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Vijaya Priyadarshini

@ishra_bestluv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awesome...

Waiting for next update😊

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Part 2 is wow!!...its awsm..
Ishita iyer is trying to find again ishita raman bhalla..
Jst loved raman...his every dlg superb..
His pain anger hurt everything ws visible
Madrasan samne n glimpse of ishita's raman is coming...uske taunts me b ek alag hi nasha hai
Yes his soul ws died that day...
He didnt want to live bt cudnt die...

"Have you ever lived in the guilt of having to live Ishita? ..I have..I have been for the last 7 years..."

This line superb...

With the last para u nailed it...u r still my legally wedded wife...haaye show me ek baar raman ye bol de...
Finally she found her raman...
Raman has to found his ishita now..
Loved it

Cont soon!

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Part 2 is wow!!...its awsm..
Ishita iyer is trying to find again ishita raman bhalla..
Jst loved raman...his every dlg superb..
His pain anger hurt everything ws visible
Madrasan samne n glimpse of ishita's raman is coming...uske taunts me b ek alag hi nasha hai
Yes his soul ws died that day...
He didnt want to live bt cudnt die...

"Have you ever lived in the guilt of having to live Ishita? ..I have..I have been for the last 7 years..."

This line superb...

With the last para u nailed it...u r still my legally wedded wife...haaye show me ek baar raman ye bol de...
Finally she found her raman...
Raman has to found his ishita now..
Loved
Cont soon!

Hey thanks for liking it...part 3 is on pg 6..let me know what you think of it too😛

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: ishra_bestluv
Awesome...
Waiting for next update😊

Thanks😛

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

I m sleepy bt cudnt wait to read ..
U r such an awsm writer..
U made me cry with this part 3...
He again tried to mask the real raman
I loved ishita bcs she wants to b selfish...she wants her love her life her raman back...
She still had that box...his tears...kash cvs b ye precious things yaad rakhte...
She showed the box n got her raman back .
Seriously he married a mad woman..
Aussie toh kya he can go to end of the world to get her..it ws Awww
I m glad ishita finally opened up to him..
Their hug...finally they got back their life they can make as well as break each other
He accepted he ws beast that night bt expected her to fight back...bt she chose to end her life n he too died..
He too tried committing suicide?? Omg
Loved it to the core
Waiting for next...
Wish something like this intense v get on screen..

Edited by gargpoo - 9 years ago

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

First of all - thank you for the update! 😳

If I had to describe this update in any word - it would be beautiful! You took this "Ishita vs. Raman" scenario and made it real and just to both. I absolutely loved the inclusion of the tear box from Shanaya track!

How I wish you were a writer for the show bc I would love to see KP & DT enact something like this'. 😃

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Whoa what a fantastic update
Loved the tear box effect
Ishita Raman Bhalla could live , live and love again ..,, loved that line .
I can see the leads playing this scene in yhm .. It will be beautiful... They will rock it .
Thank you for this beautiful update

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s2397

@s2397

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

lovely update
waiting for next part
update soon

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BombayTroll

@BombayTroll

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Very good pb

Not something expected

Interesting

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: gargpoo
I m sleepy bt cudnt wait to read ..
U r such an awsm writer..
U made me cry with this part 3...
He again tried to mask the real raman
I loved ishita bcs she wants to b selfish...she wants her love her life her raman back...
She still had that box...his tears...kash cvs b ye precious things yaad rakhte...
She showed the box n got her raman back .
Seriously he married a mad woman..
Aussie toh kya he can go to end of the world to get her..it ws Awww
I m glad ishita finally opened up to him..
Their hug...finally they got back their life they can make as well as break each other
He accepted he ws beast that night bt expected her to fight back...bt she chose to end her life n he too died..
He too tried committing suicide?? Omg
Loved it to the core
Waiting for next...
Wish something like this intense v get on screen..