Breaking Away or Breaking Apart? An IshRa TS - Part 4 updated on pg 11

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
Awesome...
Waiting for next update

Thanks😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mayasundar
tear box was a nice touch

Thanks. .I thought the 'saving his tears' was a very poignant scene..hope cvs do remember it later😛

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shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Awesome.. Love how Ishra are replaying the memories of the painful 7 years that they lived without each other. Continue soon

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: -K.13-
First of all - thank you for the update! 😳

If I had to describe this update in any word - it would be beautiful! You took this "Ishita vs. Raman" scenario and made it real and just to both. I absolutely loved the inclusion of the tear box from Shanaya track!

How I wish you were a writer for the show bc I would love to see KP & DT enact something like this'. 😃

Awww..thanks ..glad you like it.😛

The purpose of writing this TS was to get raman and ishita to talk and open their hearts to each other after all the heavy duty drama and constant interferences of everyone possible in their lives...they needed to take a step back and think of whether 'they' still made sense.

Writer for the show. , hahaha...Dunno About that but yes I do visualize KP and DT as raman and ishita when i write😊

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Mdwst
Whoa what a fantastic update
Loved the tear box effect
Ishita Raman Bhalla could live , live and love again ..,, loved that line .
I can see the leads playing this scene in yhm .. It will be beautiful... They will rock it .
Thank you for this beautiful update

Thank you😛..glad you liked it...

Yes ishita raman bhalla died on that day 7 yrs back. ..and with her the ability for ishita to love again. .yes she had mani and aliya..but thek couldn't help her love again either.

You imagined KP and DT in the scene? Glad that came through.i do imagine them while writing and so include some of their trait's n this version of ramann and ishita.😊

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: s2397
lovely update
waiting for next part
update soon

Thanks, will try and update soon

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--
Very good pb

Not something expected

Interesting

Thanks vyas, did you expect more drama😉😆

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arooshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Wow...awsome...intense...this shows how deeply they love each other!!!!!!!!

Pls cvs show something like this!!""

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: sumita_ghosh
beautiful and very emotional..

Thanks😛

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Shre28
Awesome.. Love how Ishra are replaying the memories of the painful 7 years that they lived without each other. Continue soon

It would make for awesome viewing if cvs manage ho get ishra recollect a lot of those painful 7 years without each other. ..just tried to verbalize some of it...

Thanks for liking it😊