Valentine Spl IshRa FS - A Day 2 Forget? part 5A & B pg 16

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Just lovely

Simple yet sweet

Loved it

Raman worried about her

Continue really soon

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KP_DT_Fan

@KP_DT_Fan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

A simple love story but very beautifully written.Please continue asap and request you to send me PM for the next update.Thanks for the lovely story.

Edited by KP_DT_Fan - 9 years ago

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Rina

@super_cutie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

This update is simply awesome yaar

Very very beautifully written

Can't wait for the next update

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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chami sanjeewani

@ranisa123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

awww nice update dr.continue soon.thanks for the pm

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nafnaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

That was absolutely brilliant I loved it!!!

LOved how he was worried about her sadness and hid to listen to Vandu and Mihika's conversation and felt so bad for his JKR!!!!

His plan is excellent and Ishita gets excited hearing it and get ready so quick and he gets a shock and is mesmerised making Ishita feel even more better!!!!

"Raman was back to her witty mode and said-"arre paagal aurat agar aise suit pant pehen ke tumhare saath bahar gaya na toh log sochenge koi badi umar ka aadmi ghar par biwi ko chodkar bahar ek college girl ke saath maze kar raha hai , samjhi."😆🤣 Excellent line!!!!!!😉

Please update soon I cannot wait for their "date" !!!!! They are going to have the best day ever right?!?!?!?!??!?!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!🤗

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Cute update! Can't wait to read more

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Shivangi Agarwal

@shivangi838

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Roohachu
ressy
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Unres
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Superb Update
Hope Raman helps Ishu get over her sadness
Aisa kuch hua nahi hai na show mein?
I lvd it
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But I'm sad that I can't torture U for the updates of ur SS till 14th Feb😭
Waise continue soon

thanks yaar nahi show mein aisa kuch kabhi nahi hua 😊 why torture waise??😕 will update 2day

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Shivangi Agarwal

@shivangi838

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: agm1998
Great part
Raman trying 2 make ishita happy
Is d is b4 raman realised his love for ishita? ?
Plz update d next fast. .

thanks yaar😃 not really before realization but surely before they confessed. 😉

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Shivangi Agarwal

@shivangi838

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Shivangi,
This story is so cute.

Raman is worried with her changed behavior.

Raman is trying to make his madrasan happy. I am guessing he is love with his madrasan and poor puttar doesn't know about it.

Thanks for the pm

thanks alot 4 reading maya , u r most welcome 4 pm😃