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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi kutties...

I'm so happy to open the new thread of this story. I never expected to continue this one and see what happened 😲 Well...it's good.

Firstly, I would like to thank Jaanz for giving me such a wonderful theme. Big huggies girl 🤗

Secondly a big huggie for Abha who constantly asked me to continue this one as I was holding it for more than a month. Thank you babe...🤗

I can't mention every single one who showered their immense love and support on me...Hope you'll be there with me until the journey (of this story) would come to a closure 😳

Love you all...

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Posted: 9 years ago

For those who want a mockup of the story until now...🤗

Synopsis

Dr Ishita Iyer, the sole daughter of Mr Viswanathan Iyer, is trying all possible ways to court the astute business tycoon and her next-door neighbor Raman Kumar Bhalla from the past five years without any success. She is a crazy girl who does not mind throwing herself on him, but the man seems to be nonchalant of her proximity. It was when her appa starts to search a suitor for his daughter and gives her five days deadline to agree to marry his friend's son Ashish Acharya that she and her team, Mihir, Mihika and Ruhi [Romi and (late) Sarika's daughter] plans a fake kidnap of Ishita which they could not work out.

Ishita sneak into Raman's bedroom one night and the man of her dreams kisses her and says, "I love you" to her but the next instant his disposition changes and he acts rudely with her. Disheartened, she decides to move on other than stalking a rude and ruthless man. On the other side, Raman is keeping away from Ishita all because he cannot be a father. His papa encourages him to accept Ishita and tell her his reasons. However, he was scared of her rejection after listening to his part of the story. In spite of all this, he decides to apologize to her for his action that he could not do in time.

The next thing Ishita does is accepting Ashish who in fact loves her from the past ten years and knows that she is in love with Raman Bhalla from the past five years. Though he loves her, he is not a possessive lover but a good friend who wants the other one to be happy. However, he feels delighted and confused at Ishita's decision. He wants her to rethink!

Raman sees the two friends and follows them out of curiosity to find what kind of a relationship they shares and hides to watch on. Ishita asks Ashish to kiss her in the turn of the moment to prove herself that she can place him where Raman is ruling. Him being a gentleman, kisses her forehead and leaves. On the other side, Raman's blood boils watching the scene and the couple has a confrontation.

Raman caught Ishita in their corridor and confessed his love, but she walks away. He stands heartbroken only to see her coming back to him and venting out all her love and frustration on him. It was that moment when Raman going on kissing her forgetting the place that she tries to back off. She fakes anger and he continues to get intimate with her playfully. This has witnessed by Ishita's appa who misinterprets the scene and beats Raman black and blue. He stops Ishita from telling anything thinking that her appa will feel bad that his daughter is such a "shameless girl".

Later on, Ishita again sneaks into Raman's room, nurses his wounds in the night, and sleeps off there itself. Next day, Raman panics watching her in his room and hears that her appa and amma are suspecting him on Ishita's sudden missing. The duo hides in the bathroom and saves themselves, but appa believes that Raman kidnapped Ishita.

This hide and seek love story continues. In between all these, Om tells Ishita that Raman is impotent, but she does not give a damn about that. She decides to marry him at any cost and waits for him to open up to her. Everything turns upside down when the family decides to get Ishita married to Romi whom Ishita's appa likes because of his polite nature. However, Mihika, Ishita's cousin, loves Romi and is stalking him from a while which no one knows. He is continuing to reject her because he thinks that she is not mature enough to look after his five-year-old daughter.

On hearing the proposition, Raman feels broken and decides not to interfere on watching his own father supporting others other than him. He thinks that if his father is considering his flaws, how Ishita can love him and goes from there. Nevertheless, Romi rejects the idea of getting married to Ishita and talks to her in person. There, both of them share their personal love interests (Mihika and Raman). Romi becomes happy to know that Ishita loves his brother even after knowing everything about him. He discloses how in an accident Raman has become impotent and they join hands to break this new proposal at any cost.

Romi confronts Ishita's appa and tells him that Ishita and Raman loves each other and wants to get married, but appa ignores the whole idea thinking that Raman is not a suitable suitor for his daughter. Then the two families had a hard time because of the problems cropped up between them while Raman goes back to his old self. He completely ignores Ishita.

One night, she calls him to accompany her for a movie. He did not heed but come down to check on her if her really waiting for him. Finding her standing near his car in that late night, he promises to take her wherever she wants on the word that she will not come after him anymore. They have a long drive. All the while, Ishita keeps mute which makes Raman worried and he pours out his frustration and longing when he finds that she would not talk to him if he would not do anything.

They had an intimate moment inside his car. She asks him to make her his but he stops himself in time. Meanwhile, Ashish and his mother come there and appa comes down to take them home. He sees Raman's "dancing car" and feels disgusted. He pledges that he will not let him come near his daughter. However, he is unmindful of the reality that his "naive" daughter is the one inside Raman's car.

After that, Raman tells Ishita that he does not want to marry her, which makes her cry over it. He gets out of the car and walks away followed by a crying Ishita. This incident makes them apart and lonely. Ashish tries his luck to get them together and appa accept them by asking Raman to tell that "if he misbehaved with Isihta." He lies that he misbehaved which creates more detestation in appa's heart towards him. Ishita acts mad on hearing it and declares that she is the one who forced him and he is lying, but appa ignores her words.

Ashish along with Mihir and Mihika consoles Ishita. One day, Ashish calls Raman when he was coming out of his house. Ishita hides behind the door and watches over when Ashish asks Raman to mend their problems before him (Ashish) and Ishita's marriage. Raman gets furious hearing that and was about to beat Ashish saying, "She is mine." Ishita smirks watching this and Raman understands her play. He again walks away.

Then, Ishita's family goes to Chennai for attending a marriage of her cousin. She stays back stating busy. It was when she invites Ashok, her colleague, to come home to have some tea that Raman becomes possessive and jealous again. He slips out of his home saying that he is going to his friend and business partner, Suraj. Then he barges into Iyer's but keeps calm until he gets provoked to see Ashok and Ishita in a not-so-compromising position. He gets furious and throws Ashok away. Ishita gets happy to see his possessiveness and at the same time sad, that he does not want to marry her for his baseless insecurities. In the fit of the moment, Raman opens up to her, this makes her happy. They revive their love and consummate.

Next day, Raman goes home and takes his mother to a temple to visit a swami who says that Raman cannot get married which makes him worry over his and Ishita's relationship. He goes to her clinic straight away and asks her if she is ready to get married tomorrow. She accepts it, as she is also scared of losing him. When Raman wants a secret marriage, Ishita informs his entire family because everyone there knows about them. They get happy and decide to get them married by doing all the rituals in their home.

Their marriage takes place in a very delightful atmosphere other than one thing that Ishita's leg got fractured on falling in the bathroom. She hides it from Raman with the support of the ladies and Toshi until the rituals are over. Raman finds her leg in a worst condition, gets furious on everyone, and takes her to the hospital. However, she calms him down and makes him do the legal formalities before heading to the hospital.

The next day Ishita's family comes home and finds it closed. Appa calls Ishita, hears Raman say that she is with him, and is asleep. Appa again misinterprets and gets furious on the Bhallas. They explain the situation and he calms down a bit while Ishita and Raman have a very light moment in the hospital!

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"Ramann..." She called him softly and pulled him in her embrace. He stayed in her arms and let go of all his tension.

"I hope your appa will accept me..." Raman said near her heart.

"Hmm..." She hummed and tightened her grip around him.

"Are your trying to kill me?" He asked unable to catch his breath in her arms.

"Mmm-hmm..." She again hummed naughtily pushing him back and looking deeply on his lips.

"Horny madrasan..." He chuckled pulling her cheeks when he found that her hands are trying to unbutton his shirt.

I hope this is a near-good draft of the story😆

Gaya3

Edited by Gaya3sb - 9 years ago