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Posted: 10 years ago
Gaya, u r a brilliant writer!
U come up with such interesting concepts to explore and of course, u r the creator of these stories so we readers are left guessing.
I have a suggestion though...please don't have Ishita with a multiple personality disorder. Hollywood and Bollywood have over done that concept. In reality, this personality disorder is rare, and there are many OTHER mental disorders that will cover the same symptoms of short term memory lapses, personality changes, lack of inhibition, etc ...and are more common. Choose one of those.
Anyhow, I like how u keep us guessing.
In the end, I hope Raman and Ishita end up together, of course!!
Love it, Gaya! Keep doing what u r doing!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Indie2121

Gaya, u r a brilliant writer!

U come up with such interesting concepts to explore and of course, u r the creator of these stories so we readers are left guessing.
I have a suggestion though...please don't have Ishita with a multiple personality disorder. Hollywood and Bollywood have over done that concept. In reality, this personality disorder is rare, and there are many OTHER mental disorders that will cover the same symptoms of short term memory lapses, personality changes, lack of inhibition, etc ...and are more common. Choose one of those.
Anyhow, I like how u keep us guessing.
In the end, I hope Raman and Ishita end up together, of course!!
Love it, Gaya! Keep doing what u r doing!!


Glad you liked it dear...
And yeah...
I assure you it's not any of these diseases 👍🏼
So don't worry
I'm not going to bore you 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Strange is the word . During dinner and car ride was angry mode.but when reach the destination m the behavior change . So I much say the place that change her or not or something else to made her switch the Mode. Now RAM word feel like music of passion for me.😉 Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Intrigued !!! Is Ishita suffering a split personality here??? Omg. U left it in a cliffhanger
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Posted: 10 years ago
Gayu... Is she possessed by someone :P ... Behaviour bada weird hai yaar
Pal me shola pal me shabnam
Dhanay hai Raman...
I want to say the same thing that Raman said... U know hahaha...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice one i love this story the jealousy it has all thx gaya
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Posted: 10 years ago
U asked in last update I m replying now.
I m missing dialogues... Unka alag hi charm hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties... 😊

Just want to ask you one thing..
Please do either PM me or comment whether you want me to add both Hindi and English dialogues in this story.

I'm kinda missing it...
And I'd like to know if you're missing the same. So that I can work on it from the next part 😃

PLEASE DO COMMENT 😳

Gaya3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Hi Kutties... 😊

Just want to ask you one thing..
Please do either PM me or comment whether you want me to add both Hindi and English dialogues in this story.

I'm kinda missing it...
And I'd like to know if you're missing the same. So that I can work on it from the next part 😃

PLEASE DO COMMENT 😳



Gaya3


yes add both
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Hi Kutties... 😊

Just want to ask you one thing..
Please do either PM me or comment whether you want me to add both Hindi and English dialogues in this story.

I'm kinda missing it...
And I'd like to know if you're missing the same. So that I can work on it from the next part 😃

PLEASE DO COMMENT 😳

Gaya3


yes add both

note on pg 35
Edited by jaya1867 - 10 years ago

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