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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting update gaya...
But with damn confusion...

Is ishita have some kind of multiple personalty disorder???

Anyway loved how the story going on romance with suspense...

Waiting for revelation of suspense...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
batao na!!! in wa please
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres pg 29... plzzz check...
give longish reply ok...😳😆😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
kya hua sushiii...
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Posted: 10 years ago
seriously is ishita is hving multiple personality disorder ??
she is behacing like that
hope so in all this raman should not get hurt
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh. The update was awesome. Loved Jealous Raman. Ohh, loved their passion outside of the guest house. I don't understand why can't Ishu remember Raman? 🤔 continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part
ishita is doing childish antics
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Res..</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">---------------------------------------------</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Chapter-5

MI-I-I-INE
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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">First of all I am angry...I typed longish review and it get deleted...</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">I am here again...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">OMGGG !!!!!!!! I love u yar...What an update,...Beautifully written...Beautiful storyline...The way it is dealt is exceptional...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">I am adddicted yar...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">The sudden transition was the hit point...The split personality/sub-conscious mind as I felt of Ishitaa is really intresting and i am so excited to read...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">The passion and love followed was☺️☺️☺️</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">The jealousy and owness Raman showed over her...Loved it...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">I am so excited to know what follows...How it follows...What will happen when Raman come to know...How will he deal with her problems, insecurity...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">I know i am evil...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">But kya karooon yar...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">I am so addicted to whatever u write...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Give whenever u want next update...</font>


It's not a long comment 😆
Split personality yaa subconsciousness or whatever you say is the core of the story
The humorous part of your comment was "Give whenever u want next update..."
Are you sure...
I'd love to take a long leave from updating...
Two months? 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Superb part

ishita is doing childish antics


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

seriously is ishita is hving multiple personality disorder ??
she is behacing like that
hope so in all this raman should not get hurt


Sure dear 😉
Glad you liked it 😃

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