NEW TS___MY DREAM GIRL part 16 up on Page 59 by ASHA - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Hi Kutties... 😃
Here goes the next part
Not proofread.
So ignore typos and other errors

Enjoy reading 🤗

PART-3


Raman looked on at the way she walked away which was followed by a lot of students, especially boys. Mihir was giving damn to all those drama and was about to leave.


"Ek minute Mihir...let's just take a peek"

(One minute)


"Hum vahan jaana...no way bhai!"

(We going there...)


"Beta hum jaaye ya phir koyi aye...baat toh ek hai..."

(It's the same thing if goes or they comes to us)


"So toh hai..."

(That's true)


Raman moved towards the crowd like a prince. Acknowledging his presence they split away to give him way. He walked in clapping his hands and chowing the chewing-gum lazily in his mouth. There was a hot girl in black jeans and sky blue sleeveless top. Her back facing him.


"So this is our Indian Madonna brought up in London!"


She turned to him with a fake smile.


"Thanks for that mock compliment Mr!"


"RKB"


"Yeah...whatever!'


"Kripa kare...apki naam jaanne ki?"

(Bless with hearing your name?)


"Shagun Arora"


He looked at his watch and then at the students around him completely ignoring her. Everyone slipped away bidding bye to him for which he just nodded. Mihir also sneaked out not wanting to be there. Shagun still stood there glaring at him.


"Kya ghurna? I know I'm hot and handsome. But sorry...time out!"

(Why staring?)


"Time out?"


"It's 9:55 you should go now to your class"


"Principal ho?" She asked
sarcastically.


"More than that..." He said raising his collar.


She turned to go in anger while he voiced out, "Which course...?"


"MBA"


"Same department"


"To hell with it!"


"Same to you"


Mihir was not the type of a bad boy who enjoys teasing others. But Raman was completely a unique piece. College topper and the active perfectionist guy whose weakness and timepass was seeing others bending their head in front of him.


When Mihir slipped away from the trouble, he saw a beautiful girl walking in wearing a white anarkali. His limp found their way towards her. She stopped seeing him dreamily walking to her. Before he could accidentally bump into her she waved her hand in front of him.


"What...? Are you there?"


"Voh...main...matlab...hi...first...day?"


"Oh...yeah..."


"Mihir Bohra"


"Ishita Iyer"


"Nice meeting you"


"Same here"


Till then Raman entered the scene inquiring her department. He didn't see her face but heard her saying MA.


"Arts...! Crap...aur kuch nahin mila..."

(Didn't get anything else?)


His words trailed off seeing her face. Before he could control his tongue he mouthed, "Sapna...!"

(Dream!)


"No bhai...she is Ishita Iyer. Ishita...meet my buddy RKB"


"Oh...RKB...may I call you just RK?"


"Sure.." He replied in a trance.


"I HATE people who desdain arts...maybe I HATE YOU the most"


"I LOVE people who talks openly...maybe I LOVE YOU the most"



TO BE CONTINUED BY ASHA...


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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Part 3 updated...
Enjoy reading... 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Hmmm shagun like 😲 chali koi Nahi I have a good role for her also but mba and shagun 😆 ok ok fine in this story she has some brain I guess 😉 I loved the last dialogue to the core 😳 u know what a 😉big big thank u mai soch hi rahi thi ki I would be awesome if ishu is a arts student 😉 u will understand y in my next part 😆 time to have some thing spicy 😉 don't u think 😉
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Yaay...i guessed it right(in my mind😆)... I knew the girl will not be Ishita since its twist devi gaya writing and see its bimbo shaggy...😆


Ohh god both mihir and raman intrested in Ishita iyer and Ishu in revenge...to isme shaggy kya karegi..

Itnu chotu update...
i want more...
Lovely update...

I didn't get meaning of last 2 lines...😕

Waiting for next Asha...😃
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Jab they meet very impressive from Ishra. And I did not guess about the owner of the voice to be Shagun but surprise he is not flirt with Shagun and he had open war with Ishita.😆 So little for update I am greedy. Will wait for Asha is the update continue everyday.😉 Thanks dear for the fast update.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Gaya mata aap twist ki rani ho...
hihi..
thought that it's not ishu n I was rgt..
Ashu waiting for ur update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
part 2 is interesting so nishita dead may be raman is the reason ishita came to take revenge too wow too good asha

I love it well written too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
part 3 gaya good as usewell dear ishra met n a war convo too n I have a doubt here may be ishita will try to be close most with mihir or it my imagination which make me feel it mihir has got attraction toward her n raman being his flirting way

shagun n mba wow thx raman dont show any interest in her

thx gaya n sorry gor late comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
very interesting ..Raman's dream comes true...ab Gaya jane aage keya hoga..continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
thx asha

part 2

nishita is dead now ishita want to revange her dead from raman it good to see her in this way too good

sorry for late comment nice part asha love it

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