NEW TS___MY DREAM GIRL part 16 up on Page 59 by ASHA - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

thx gaya for pm

part 3 intersting i love it both raman n mihir are interested with ishu wow

raman dont interested in shagun

ishra awr was nice too


good updt
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
awsome updated
Shagun entery mujhe laga ishita hogi
but humari ishita simple n cute
loved ishra convo was nice
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Woh hottie Shagun thi.. Le us ka kya achaar daalna hai huh.
Indian madona singing was inspired from kuch kuch hota hai.. Tina Ki entry scene??

She Is indian beauty.. He is clean bowled already..

Aage kya hoga...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
thanx for da pm dear...
fablous update👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
oh that girl was shagun
what a twist gaya3👏
mihir also fall for ishita
w8ing for asha's twist😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Thanks Gaya ji for the pm. Nice new story from u. Brainy shaguniya! 😲A breath of fresh air! 😆
P.s:
I am impressed. How do u manage to write so many stories at a time. I will forget my own plot if I do so. 😳
Thanks again
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
So friends hear it goes wrote it in hurry
Plz excuse me for the mistakes as it is not proof read
Enjoy reading
Plz do leave ur reviews 😉
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Part 4
It starts from where it stops
Raman : "I LOVE people who talks openly...maybe I LOVE YOU the most"

Ishita chucked listening to that and replied well mr RK it depends on what does love mean to u
Raman was a little stunned listening to such a question and just stayed quite

Ishita : well that give me the answer and was above to leave when mihir s voice stopped her

Mihir : well shayad mai payar ki koi perfect definition Nahi de saktha because to me love is undefinable par ha kise ne kha hai ki payar dosthi hai par mai poochna chatha Hun ki payar na shi hum se dosthi tho kar hi sakthi hai na app

( well may be I can't give u a perfect definition of love as for me love is undefinable but yes some one said me that love is friendship but I wanted to ask not love but at least we can have ur friendship what say )

With that mihir forwarded his hand for a hand shake and ishita shook hands with him with a smile on her face

All this was witnessed by Raman who was now fuming in anger for some unknown reason or perhaps he knew it too well but was in denial mode

Raman : miss ishita Kay app ko apne class ke liye der Nahi ho rahi jantha hum arts mai Kuch kas padne layak Nahi hai par agar app ne yeh subject chuna hai tho hoga na koi reason us ke piche

( miss ishita aren't u getting late for the class I know their is nothing much to learn in art but now as u have selected this subject their must be some reason behind it right )

Ishita : samay sey phele aur Akal se zayada kisi ko aj Thai na Kuch samaj mey aya hai na hi ayega

( before time and more then brain no body understood anything nor wil they understand now )

Saying so ishita walked away and as she was going to enter the class a hand on her shoulder made her turn back it was none other than shagun

Shagun : good move girl mai ne tho socha tha ki hum pakde jayegey when he stopped u mari to sasey hi rook gaye thi

( I thought we will get caught and when he stopped u I almost stopped breathing )

Ishita : tho sas le lo darling kyu ki abhi kise aur ki sasey rakne wali hai

( then breath darling because some one else's breath is going to stop now )

Shagun : poor rkb use kya pata ki us ne kis se panga liya hai par I must say what a plan awaz teri aur shakal mari par us ne thumari awaz kaise Nahi phachani thum tho ...

But was cut by ishu in middle

( poor rkb he dosent know what he has gotten himself into but I must say nice plan ur voice and my face but how come he dosent remember ur voice u were. )

Ishita : haa par samay ke sath har yadd dhundli pad jathi hai rah jathi hai tho sirf nafrath

( yaa but with time all memories fade away the thing which is left back Is only hatred )

Shagun : yaa right so see u at rehearsals for musical drama par is drama mai kya drama hoga yeh tho bhagvan hi Jane no no correction ishita hi Jane ( and they both laughed )

( but what actual drama will happen in this drama only God knows no no correction only ishita knows )

With that shagun left it was evening when Raman and mihir were above to exit the collage when the head of drama department miss sunaina stopped them

Miss : Raman mihir. Ruko Zara mari bath suno na vo hum jo play kar rahe they na us mai hero ka par toot gaya hai he can't dance it is a musical play we need ur help and we need one more person as well to play the villen

( wait listen to me the person who was playing hero in our play his leg broke )

Raman: par mam hum kya kar saktey hai hum tho arts batch mai bhi Nahi hai

( but mam what can we do we r not even from the arts batch )

Mihir : arts batch ( as if thinking something ) mam we will help

Raman : what ????? ( shocked )

Mihir : haa samaj na bhai it is for our clg ( elbowing him with a wink )

( understand na bro it is for our clg )

Raman : hmm ok

Miss : oh thank u so much mihir and Raman we r so glad u r helping by the way the drama is Laila Majnu and hear is the script 2mora we will decide who is the hero and villen amongst u too
With that miss left and Raman turned to mihir

Raman: what the hell !!! Tuje kab se drama mai interest hone laga

( from when u started liking drama )

Mihir : relax bro u will understand ( and left from there in a dreamy trace with a smile on his face )

A few steps away ishita was seeing this and smiling

Ishita ( st) : abb thum dono khalna Laila Majnu aur mai apne game khelugi let the game begin

( now u two play Laila Majnu and I will play my game )

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Ok people that is all sry gaya3 I dint want to change ur twist of shagun singing but many told that they were expecting this and how can I let their expected thing come true

Next part by gaya3

Asha
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Res
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Awesome yar
*SHOCK*
I'd be your shishya...😳
What was that 😲
Laila Majnu?
IshGun friends and plotting against RKB? 😲
Chal koyi baat nahin.. 😉
Hum bhi kuch kam nahin 😈
See you tomorrow with the next part 👍🏼
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Thanks Gaya ji for the pm. Nice new story from u. Brainy shaguniya!😲A breath of fresh air!😆

P.s:
I am impressed. How do u manage to write so many stories at a time. I will forget my own plot if I do so.😳
Thanks again


Hahaha 😆
Sometimes I do forgets it 😆 🤣
This one is combined with Asha so little stress... 😳
Thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Asha updated part 4 on page 11
Do read and hit the like button...
Waiting for your comments 🤗

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