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Hi everyone... thank you for the appreciating my work... Part 2 is all about Raman... Hope you like it... Enjoy!!!

PART 2

RAMAN -

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"Madrasan... wake up... your tuntuna is howling... yaar... get up na..." The alarm has been ringing for the last 10 minutes... it feels like someone is using a hammer on my head... Why is my head hurting so much... I move towards my Madrasan ready to wake her up and ask for an Asprin when I fall down with a thud... I open my eyes to realise that Ishita is not there... in fact it looks like she didn't sleep here yesterday night... I grab the alarm clock and rip out the batteries in frustration... this beeping sound is killing me... why can't I remember what happened yesterday night... I think I drank a bit too much... I remember getting a gajra for her... and then...

Oh shit!!! I suddenly remember everything that happened yesterday night... Mummy ji telling me about the camera... Adi being upset... me yelling at Ishita... I sit on the floor recalling my words... how could I??? Every time I promise her happiness and then I do something like this... I agree she went overboard with the CCTV but I could have handled it better... yesterday when I saw Adi sitting there all dejected and upset I panicked... what if he chose to go back to Shagun because of Ishita's interference... I don't even want to think of that situation... it has taken me six years to get my son back... and I can't lose him again... so I yelled at her... I shouldn't have been so rude... Now I will have to apologize... Chal Bhai Raman... get back to work... apologize to Biwi... looks like she slept in Ruhi's room... I am gonna go and find her... and this time I will not let her leave till she forgives me...

I walk down the stairs calling her name... suddenly the doorbell rings... I open the door to find Neelu standing there holding the milk packet... "Bhaiya... is Bhabhi alright??? How come she still hasn't taken the milk packet inside?" She just voiced my own thoughts... looks like my JKR is still angry about yesterday's spat... I cook up some excuse and go around searching for her... I ask Mummy Ji if she has seen her Bahu... all I get is an angry stare in return as she walks away... I move to Ruhi's room... I brace myself as I open the door and immediately start apologizing only to find Mihir and Rinki sleeping... I immediately walk out and move towards Adi's room... She is not there also... Adi's room is a mess... there is a movie running on the flat screen... loud music is playing... all his clothes and toys are in a mess... the new iPad that I got him is on the floor with a slice of Pizza on it... and somewhere in this mess is my son... if this is the sight that greets her every day then no wonder she wants to be more strict with him... I walk to Simmi's room and see that she is already ready for her first day of training... even Ananya is ready... eating a banana in her high chair... I ask her if she has seen Ishita but she ignores me... there is this feeling of emptiness in my stomach which is growing with every second that is can't see her... a part of me knows that she is not at home but I still look for her everywhere... Pagal madrasan... who does she think she is... as if this "leaving the house" blackmail is going to work... I walk back to my room and get ready for the day... it is 7 by the time I come down... clearly I am not welcome at the dining table... so I ask Neelu to give my tea in the living area as I sit on the sofa to read the news... in fact... I ask her to put an extra spoon of sugar... take that Madrasan!!!

Just as I am about to take the first sip I see Adi rush into the hall yelling for Ishima... he can't find his swimming gear... Ma tells him that she is not at home... and that he should ask me... after all he is my son!!! That is when it hits me... yesterday I crossed a line... I lean back on the sofa and think about what I said yesterday... how could I??? she deserves better... how could I say that she was not Adi's mother... she was his mother even when he did not accept her... and don't I know... that when it came to Adi she could go to extremes... the crazy woman went on to celebrate mine and Shagun's anniversary... only for Adi... she gave up Ruhi's custody for me and Adi... and I questioned her identity as a mother... I can feel an invisible hand squeezing my heart... I was so rude to her... yes she went overboard... yes she should not have done that... yes I had the right to stop her... but I did not have the right to hurt her like this... she never asked to become Adi's Ishima... I wanted that to happen... I wanted Adi to have the mother that Ruhi had... and then I do this... she is correct... I want her to have all the responsibility of being a mother... but not the authority... one mistake and I called her a stranger... I need to see her... she must be hurting real bad... I need to talk to her... I get up to go next door when I see Mihika... I hear her ask for her Akka and I feel a buzz in my ears... Ishita never went to Appa's house yesterday... Mihika doesn't know what happened yesterday and she thinks Ishita is here... Oh God!!! Where did this Madrasan go???

I begin to panic... flashes of the morgue... the earth quake rubble... the hospital come back and I begin to fall... I can feel Romi and Mihir supporting me while Ma and Simmi ask Mihika if she saw Ishita yesterday... I can hear Ma crying... I can hear Simmi yelling at me... telling me that I am responsible... that I never realize how much I hurt her... that what I said yesterday would have broken her... I want to defend myself... I want to tell my sister that I realize my mistake... but my body seems to be frozen... I can't lose her... I can't lose her... that is all I can say... I need to do something... I push Romi and Mihir away and run to grab my keys... I need to find her...

In all this chaos I hear the doorbell ring... for some reason I freeze... I can see Neelu open the door and hug the person standing there... I see all my family members rush towards the door... Ma is crying... Simmi can't seem to let go of her... Romi and Mihir are yelling at her for being so careless... and then I hear her say - "I need to speak to Adi... Alone... I will drop him to his swimming class... his swimming gear is in the car." She asks Adi to follow her and leaves... She did not enter the house... She did not even look at me... her voice had a steel resolve... I slowly sit on the couch as I realize that something has changed between us... that the words I spoke yesterday in the heat of the moment may have created a crack in the most precious relationship that I was ever a part of... that my anger yesterday has managed to shake the very foundation of my life... I will never regret standing up for my son... but I do regret not standing up for my wife... yesterday I hit her where it would hurt her the most... and now... I don't know what to do... how do I pick up and join back the pieces of her trust that I so ruthlessly broke yesterday??? How???..

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Awesome update both parts are wonderful👏👏

Readed both d parts..

Both the parts are awesomely written... Now am eager to see hw raman makes up to ishita...

Wow yaar u r really writing so beautifully

Wow !! This is so perfect and sensible! Loved Raman's POV in this one. We will never get to see such stuff on this show. Even the smallest detail of Raman adding that extra spoon of sugar. When you are angry with ur partner u delibrately do things they wouldn't like or approve of even when they are not around to see you do that.

I am curious for next part !!!
You have described the situation so well
I wanted raman to realize his mistake. Everytime he just cant walk away after saying anything to her .
I liked yr first part in which ishita realized her fault of being overprotective towards adi

Cant wait
update soon

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