OS - The Aftermath (May 29) COMPLETED

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: krishy13
This was wonderfully written! It gave beautiful justice to every character's emotion and was so realistic bc no one bounces back from a tragedy like this. To see Raman break down, after many instances of not getting closure over almost losses, from Ishita's POV was beautifully pieced together!

Absolutely beautiful!

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Thank you so much! I tried to keep realistic to somewhat show the actual effect of an earthquake and I said before, you may get momentarily happiness of you and your family being safe, but it fades away soon and takes a long time to overcome the actual tragedy. About Raman, in my opinion he has always kept all the emotions of those instances in him by never talking about them with anyone and he needs to get them out. Thank you so much again, it means a lot!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY
A very different approach to the plot and must say you beautifully delivered it!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sapna_22
You have described everybody ' s condition so sensibly
Each and every line that you wrote is perfect
Mindblowing

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Wow.. Prabh.. Brilliant work.
You have described each and every members feelings trauma fear.
You know on the show they make them overcome very fastly.
But actually especially Raman. .. He had seen the most...
I love it.
Thank you thank you so much for writing and sharing

Thank you so much! I hope on the show they show them not getting over this easily and I feel Raman's feelings after so many times of almost losing his family haven't been shown often. Anyways I am glad you liked this OS so much!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: cutieruhi
Simply beautiful brilliantly written d way u have described their situation is awesome thanks for pm 👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rufana10
brilliantly written prabh👏
d way u show their trauma after d earthquake
it was very realistic
loved it
thnk u 4 pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sidivyapall
Brilliant!!!! You captured the emotions exquisitely. I loved reading it! 👏 (sorry for being brief, so very tired)

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the emotions! Thanks again for liking it and commenting!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: lourel24
Beautifully written

Thank you so much!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: neet135712
nice update
emotional and heart touching
as elder son raman has the responsibility to take care of every one..but his own worries fear of losing his family u explained it very well
ruhi and adi...their nightmares... what they experienced in one day.
poor ishita she worried herself.. loved her for selfless nature.

Thank you so much! You've commented perfectly on all the characters and their feelings! Thank you for the lovely comment!