OS - The Aftermath (May 29) COMPLETED

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123
fabulous update continue soon. Absolutly brilliant.

Thank you so much! This is just a OS so this was the only part!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Abhinaiscool
Heart warming os smiles...

Thank you so much!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you so much!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: RomComFan
This is so beautiful... and so very realistic, terrific job... I hope the CVs are just as sensitive in dealing with this...

Thank you so much! Glad you really liked this one! I also really hope CVs deal with the feelings of the characters in a proper manner after presenting a tragedy like this one.

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xBabyAngelx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

That was simply beautiful

Loved it very much

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx
That was simply beautiful
Loved it very much

Thank you so much! Glad you loved it!

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liveistolove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: smilesforever98

Thank you so much! I wanted to some examples of when Raman almost lost someone close to him and wasn't able to talk about it. Ishita is still dealing with her own nightmares, but tries to calm down her family just like Raman does. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment!

That is the beauty of marriage..when wife needs some assurance it can be given only by her husband and when husband is totally collapsed only wife can rebuild his confidence.. 😊

Ishra are the very good example of such a relationship.. 😊

Always welcome..

Thank you for such an amazing os 😊

Keep writing.. 👍🏼

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Prabh you prove it again that you are brilliant writer dear. I told you earlier before it is not easy to write emotional story cause when we read we can feel all the emotion that the writer want us to feel and connect to it and you did it girl. Agree with you the aftermath had effect very badly for the victims and their family either you face it by yourself or your family along with you. It is not that easy to come out of fear will take sometime or longer time. This time Raman Ishita Adi Ruhi they get hit directly and the family member to witness all this incident it was heartbreaking to see them like this. Thank you for briNging out the emotion of all the charectors of this show come to live and made us connect with them. Thanks again for wonderful OS. Have a wonderful weekend dear.👏👏👏

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996541

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Originally posted by: usaonly
Prabh you prove it again that you are brilliant writer dear. I told you earlier before it is not easy to write emotional story cause when we read we can feel all the emotion that the writer want us to feel and connect to it and you did it girl. Agree with you the aftermath had effect very badly for the victims and their family either you face it by yourself or your family along with you. It is not that easy to come out of fear will take sometime or longer time. This time Raman Ishita Adi Ruhi they get hit directly and the family member to witness all this incident it was heartbreaking to see them like this. Thank you for briNging out the emotion of all the charectors of this show come to live and made us connect with them. Thanks again for wonderful OS. Have a wonderful weekend dear.👏👏👏

Thank you so much! I am always nervous about writing emotional parts because like you said it is extremely difficult to get people to connect with it, but am glad you thought I did a good job with it! And earthquakes and other natural disasters are very difficult to get over, Living an earthquake zone where we have an earthquake way overdue, it scary seeing what happens in places like Nepal and what's left behind. I can't even imagine what the people there are going through.

Coming to the OS, Ishita, Ruhi, and Adi not only saw an earthquake, but a fire as well which is equally scary while Raman had to face the fear of losing the three of them which is no less terrifying than being the tragic situation itself. I really think these things aren't easy forget so I wrote this impromptu OS after reading the WU of the show because I just couldn't stop myself from writing about the possible feelings they went through after this incident. Am really glad you liked it and connected to it! Thank you so much and have a great weekend as well!

P.S Sorry for the long response, I kinda got carried away...