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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: whitelily
beautiful os👏

Thank you so much!

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sinak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Brilliant update.

Your described each persons feeling so beautifully.

Hope they show something like the way you have written in the Serial.

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Sushma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Beautifully written prabh

the way u have explained is too good. .

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liveistolove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

A very good interpretation of effect of earthquake on people through YHM characters ..

Not only that the emotions are portrayed very well..

Raman's fear of losing his family which was not only because of EQ incident but many other previous incidents is written very well..

Even the struggle of Ishita to calm raman down and also handling their children is very much evident in this..

Also the thoughts in children's mind is expressed very well..

👏 for the writer.. 👏 👍🏼

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1023427

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

fabulous update continue soon. Absolutly brilliant.

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

This is so beautiful... and so very realistic, terrific job... I hope the CVs are just as sensitive in dealing with this...

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Anu_IshraDivan
This was beautiful..
Raw emotions.. Beautifully put together..
You did justice to all the emotions of every one of them..
It was really good to see Raman and Ishitas emotions as we'll, knowing its not easy for elders to come out of tragedies instantaneously either.!
Kids, yes it does effect them deeply but adults are no less vulnerable.!

And the way it came off as Ishita's POV was very well put together.!

Brilliant piece of work ⭐️

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it so much! For sure it's is difficult for the kids considaring they also had to witnessing Shagun abandoning them, but IshRa had to face equally trauma. Raman had to face almost losing his wife and kids while Ishita almost had lost her life. Glad you liked the way it was written, thank you so much!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sinak
Brilliant update.
Your described each persons feeling so beautifully.

Hope they show something like the way you have written in the Serial.

Thank you so much! I really hope the aftermath of everyone's feelings is dealt with properly on the show! Glad you liked this one!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sush_avina
Beautifully written prabh
the way u have explained is too good. .

Thank you so much! Glad you liked this one!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: liveistolove
A very good interpretation of effect of earthquake on people through YHM characters ..
Not only that the emotions are portrayed very well..
Raman's fear of losing his family which was not only because of EQ incident but many other previous incidents is written very well..

Even the struggle of Ishita to calm raman down and also handling their children is very much evident in this..

Also the thoughts in children's mind is expressed very well..

👏 for the writer.. 👏 👍🏼

Thank you so much! I wanted to some examples of when Raman almost lost someone close to him and wasn't able to talk about it. Ishita is still dealing with her own nightmares, but tries to calm down her family just like Raman does. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment!

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