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rufana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

brilliantly written prabh👏
d way u show their trauma after d earthquake
it was very realistic
loved it
thnk u 4 pm

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Brilliant!!!! You captured the emotions exquisitely. I loved reading it! 👏 (sorry for being brief, so very tired)

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neet135712

@neet135712

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

nice update
emotional and heart touching
as elder son raman has the responsibility to take care of every one..but his own worries fear of losing his family u explained it very well
ruhi and adi...their nightmares... what they experienced in one day.
poor ishita she worried herself.. loved her for selfless nature.

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

This was beautiful..
Raw emotions.. Beautifully put together..
You did justice to all the emotions of every one of them..
It was really good to see Raman and Ishitas emotions as we'll, knowing its not easy for elders to come out of tragedies instantaneously either.!
Kids, yes it does effect them deeply but adults are no less vulnerable.!

And the way it came off as Ishita's POV was very well put together.!

Brilliant piece of work ⭐️

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Loved the emotions in this OS. All four of their emotions. Awesome job.

Edited by ..Mehak.. - 10 years ago

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Wow prabh brilliantly written:-):-):-)
every one trauma u described it very well.
Being the man of the house, raman want to protect every 1..:-(
ishita fear is justified ,as she whole and solely faced the terrible situation.as a mother she protect her childrens..
Ruhi and adi know and realise about their real mother ;-(
thanks for pm dear.:-)

Thank you so much! You've commented about everyone's state perfectly. Raman doesn't cry in front others only in front of Ishita or alone while she is almost faced death. The kids are probably scarred seeing their biological mother just walk out leaving them in the fire.

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nitii
Res😊

Unres soon!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SA1234
Wow! This was really good! U didn't rush to paint a happy reunited family picture at the end of it..because that's not how it happens most of the time..and that's what makes this OS different.

Thank you so much! After something like this you may have momentarily happiness to be with your family, but in the long run a tragedy like earthquakes aren't easy to forget.Thank you for the comment!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: shravsss
Beautifully written...
As you said writing or bringing in the true essence is a very big task... But still you managed it well...
Raman's fears n that feeling of being separated from family was very heart wrenching to see...
Ishita's situation was even more worse than raman's... She was herself having nightmares... But she had to see her strength crying n breaking down as well...

Kids situation was amazingly explained... My heart went out to the kid...

Amazing work...

Thank you so much. Glad you thought I could somewhat bring out some of the real feelings. I felt Raman hasn't been able to ever talk to anyone about all the instances he could have lost either Ishita or his kids, hence it's mentioned in this OS. Ishita is likely to be terrified after almost facing death, but despite that she has to play her role of a mother and wife. The kids I think have suffered the most based on what they have shown in the show and in reality they would take a long time to get over this. Thank you so much again!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: dundumol96
Sooo sensible story... Thats how victims family suffered... U write their emotions very well...

I just wish they saw ramans breakdown tooo... In serial

Thank you so much! glad you liked the emotions written! I don't watch the show anymore, but I really really hope since they have shown an earthquake, the CVs don't make mockery of the seriousness and really shown the character's emotions afterwards instead of them being all happy in a day or 2.

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