SongOSthon#2- my note on Pg 22

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nitii-76

@nitii-76

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

it was excellent dear..👏

very emotional..😭😭

"Finally...you will get...rid of me.".. it was so sad😭

"Hey! No...lecture. Just promise. Do...do you...promise?".. 😆😭

"I love you too Ishita..." his last words 😭

you just made me cry..😭

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

hey prabh, you made me cry yaar.

my eyes was moist throughout the update

the departure of your love one is a only thing which only thought made me cry...

the girl who dreamt her whole life with a man its very hard for her to live with his memories but girl hats off you. you completely justified with the song and its content
lots of loves and hugs to you but my eyes are still moist

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sukanksha
@smilesforever98. Plz update soon. Part one was emotional one. What happened to Raman. He died in an accident or what? Don't let that happen. Can't even imagine

Thank you so much! Glad you could feel the emotions in the story!

Originally posted by: yhmfflover
Interestingly emotional part prabh!
Continue soon...

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu
Hey good start will comment on full ts 😉

Thank you so much! Will wait for your full comment!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Emotional update prabh;-(u made me cry.what happen to raman?thanks for pm dear.im happy that u choose to write in this thread.continue soon

Thank you for the comment! Awww didn't want to make anyone cry! And glad you wanted me to write on this thread!

Originally posted by: sush_avina
Nice update... prabh U made me emotional...
Please update soon

Thank you so much! Glad you felt the emotions in the writing!

Originally posted by: whitelily
smilesforever98 - fabulous update👍🏼

Thank you!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad
@smilesforever98
prabh... it was so emotional
where is raman???
hope is well and good and is on a trip or something...
thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thank you so much for the comment! Glad you liked it and felt the emotions of the story!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: rufana10
@ prabh beautiful part 😊...saiyaara is 1 of my fav song😊 w8ing 4 next part 2 know what happened 2 raman 😕

Thank you so much! Saiyaara is one of my favourite songs as well!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: nitii
Nice one dear..but sad yaar..
why they are separated..
update the next one soon..
again you write wonderfullyhope u don't mind😆

Thank you so much! Glad you like my writing so much, and I don't mind at all. Who doesn't like compliments😆 .

Originally posted by: nitii
it was excellent dear..👏
very emotional..😭😭
"Finally...you will get...rid of me.".. it was so sad😭
"Hey! No...lecture. Just promise. Do...do you...promise?".. 😆😭
"I love you too Ishita..." his last words 😭
you just made me cry..😭

So much crying! Thank you so much and glad you could feel the emotions of the story! Never thought or wanted anyone to cry because of my writing, but it's a huge compliment!! Thank you so much for the comment!

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florine_20

@florine_20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

It was beautiful parbh.
true all stories do not have a happy ending.
things as such a meant to happen. Humans are mortal but love is immortal and memories keep them alive for ever in our heart

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: aarohi26
hey prabh, you made me cry yaar.

my eyes was moist throughout the update

the departure of your love one is a only thing which only thought made me cry...

the girl who dreamt her whole life with a man its very hard for her to live with his memories but girl hats off you. you completely justified with the song and its content
lots of loves and hugs to you but my eyes are still moist

Hey! I didn't want to make anyone cry😲! And you're right, losing a loved one is tough, I didn't know after I wrote about Raman in this story, something similar would happen in my own life!

Anyways glad you liked the story and thought it went with the song! Loads of 🤗 for you, always look forward to your comments, they brighten up my day!!