SongOSthon#2- my note on Pg 22 - Page 16

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@DipaRB6 - Subhanallah - this was so so so beautiful!!
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I am posting this OS on behalf of margo40
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This os is my imagination!! A chirpy girl met a khaddoos boy!! Lets see what happens!!!




LOVE : THE UNITY OF TWO SOULS

GOD!!! I'm LATE!! AMMA IS GONNA KILL ME NOW.


Madhavi iyer, ishita's mother had invited the boy's family. She wanted her daughter to settle down with the richest, most handsome yet most humble boy of DELHI.
'Aiyo murugan!! Help me!!'

Like a reply from GOD almighty!! A luxurious BMW passed by. Ishita signalled for lift.

Raman had noticed the beautiful girl standing all alone on the roadside.GOD stop this shitty romantic types games with me!! But he stopped his car. To leave a lady alone on the roadside was not at all a gentleman's deed!!

'Thank you so much!!' Ishita expressed gratitude as soon as she took her seat beside him.

She waited for him to say something but no!! He's hopeless!! She thought.

'I'm ishita iyer!!'

'Raman BHALLA !!'

'Oh are you a punjabi ?? Guess what my mother wants me to marry a punjabi!! What a strange co-incidence!!'

'Oh yes !!' Raman said.

Ishita was irritated with his very conservative behaviour. What a boring man??!!

'So what do you do??'

'I'm a businessman!!'

'You know my to-be-fianc is also businessman of some drink company. I mean what a mismatch!! A doctor and a CEO??'

'Proffession doesn't matter miss ishita!! There should be love care and understanding for each other!!'

'Ya whatever!!' GOD!! So much knowledge!! Why isn't he an encyclopaedia??!!

Suddenly it started raining!! Rain!! Wow!!

'I love rain!! Don't you??'

'Hmm it's good!!'

OH HOW UNROMANTIC ANSWER IT IS!! She thought.

She opened her tiffin box as she was too hungry. Oh!! She had finished all her idlis in lunch break!!

'Do you like pani-puri??'

She was startled!! For the first time he was showing his human side of nature!! She nodded. He stopped the car near a pani-puri stall. The stall had a large umbrella as a roof on it.

She also came outside the car and rushed into the roof.

'Bhaiya!! Two plate pani-puri please!!'

He attacked pani-puri like a child. She was looking at him in surprise!! She still couldn't get it which one was the REAL RAMAN!!

'Are eat it miss iyer!! It's puri not idli!!'

She laughed and joined him.

Suddenly-

'What the hell is happening over here??' A harsh voice came!!

Ishita was literally trembling with fear seeing policemen in front of her. But raman was relaxed!!

'Come on sit in the van. Come to police-station.' The policeman mistook them as college couple romancing publically as the place was favourite for 'naughty couples'.

'Sir you're getting us wrong!! We're engaged!!' Ishita looked at him in shock!! WHAT THE HELL WAS HE SAYING??

'Everybody says that. We're not fools alright??'

'You can call my home. Here take my number.'

The policeman was convinced with raman's confidence.

'Why did you speak lie??!! And what if he had really called your parents??'

Raman had his identic smirk on his face.

'Then what?? The police would have left the place without any fuss. '

'What are you saying??'

'You know what madrasan?? The punjabi boy you are going to marry Is none other than mr RAMAN BHALLA. Even my mother had ordered me to come to your home ASAP . But these meetings!! I was late!! But see the co-incidence!! '

Ishita felt awestruck.
'I .. I'm sorry!!'

'Are what sorry!! You know today for the first time I've felt that madrasi sambhar has way more Tadka than punjabi kukkad!!'

Ishita blushed hard. Her cheeks became crimson red. She looked down in embarrassment.

'You look so beautiful while being shy!! Will you marry me miss ishita iyer!! I don't like no!!'

She nodded. He made her look in his eyes. His intense brown eyes were speaking unspoken words of love to her...

ZARA ZARA BEHAKTA HAI MEHAKTA HAI
AAJ TO MERA TANN BADAN MEIN PYAASI HOON
MUJHE BHAR LE APNI BAAHON MEIN
HAI MERI KASAM TUJHKO SANAM
DOOR KAHIN NA JA
YEH DOORI KEHTI HAI PAAS MERE AA JA RE


He put his lips on her. Their kiss!! Their seal of the new relationship they were tying into. So pure!! So magical!!

YUHI BARAS BARAS KAALI GHATA BARSE
HUM YAAR BHEEG JAAYEIN
IS CHAAHAT KI BAARISH MEIN

They broke apart for some oxygen. Her messed up hair!! He adjusted her hairstrands at back of her ears gently.

MERI KHULI KHULI LATON KO SULJHAYEIN
TU APNI UNGLIYON SE
MEIN TO HU ISI KHWAAHISH MEIN
SARDI KI RAATON MEIN
HUM SOYE RAHE EK CHADAR MEIN
HUM DONO TANHA HO
NA KOI BHI RAHE IS GHAR MEIN

She was feeling divine pure and sophisticated under his touch. She never knew her life would have sudden romantic turn.

TADPAAYEIN MUJHE TERI SABHI BAATEIN
EK BAAR E DEEWANE JHUTHA HI SAHI
PYAAR TO KAR!!
MEIN BHULI NAHI HASI MULAKATEIN
BECHAIN KAR KE MUJHKO
MUJHSE YU NA PHER NAZAR

RUTHEGA NA MUJHSE MERE SAATHIYA YEH WAADA KAR
TERE BINA MUSHKIL HAI
JEENA MERA MERE DILBAR

'Chalo ghar chale!! Families have to hear good news! '
They sat back in the car and drove to their new joyful life!!

*****
Hope you liked it!! Na pasand aye to bachi Samaj ke maaf kar dena

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Okay song translation is here

I'm craving for you take me in your arms
It's my promise to you please don't go far anywhere
This distance is saying come to me

It's raining and we will get wet in the rain of love
My wish is that you will adjust my open hair-strands with your fingers
We will sleep together in a sheet in cold winter night
We will be alone there'll be nobody else in the home

Your talks make me crave for you
Please love me once even if its fake
I've not forgotten that romantic meetings
Don't look away from me it makes me anxious
Make promise that you'll never get angry with me
It's really hard for me to live without you.
Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago
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People,

I have just updated today's OS by Margo40 above
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@margo40 lovely OS 😊...loved it
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Margi lovely and cute OS dear. They did not meet in official meeting like suppose to be .But god bring them to another route to meet outside and they spend lovely time of eating food at the stall. I have a doubt how Raman know Ishu will be his fiance may be he had seen her photo.He tell a lie to police but actually is not a lie I love to see Ishu expression how her face will be in a shock.😲 But the biggest surprise is that you make them kiss from first time meeting.😳😳 Thank you for write this lovely OS dear.🤗
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@margo aws0meee yarr.. S0 sweeet OS. L0ved it
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@margo40
cute, filmy os
I liked it 😃
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Hello all,

I hope u guys know tht the song-OSthon is not yet over! Actually for 4 days in btw people were not supposed to update. Plus I have been keeping extremely busy lately and i am unable to run after u guys to force u to write ( a couple of u hv missed their slots in btw n hvnt been in touch with me either)
Anyway, I hope the writers who r left to write will be regular and will not disappoint.. a lot of readers r waiting n PMing me yaaron!
Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago

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