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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: mannat0010
NYC update
thanxx fr pm...

Thanks! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Sri1091
Very well witten

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ishra123
wow awesome beautiful

Thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: divazfankau
wow Beautiful update
I love the meaning sexy
super duper updated

Thank you very much! 😃 Glad you liked the new sexy!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: wrizaa
fabulous. ... i loved it a lot... 👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: nrn1486
Such a cute OS.. loved the little moments you described between Raman and Ishita. Could completely relate to their characters!
And nice song selection!😊

Thank you very much! 😃 I am so happy that you said you could relate to their characters, my biggest fear with this is writing something uncharacteristic for either Raman or Ishita.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh
Amazing.. The depth of Ishra's relationship is not only based on PDA which "Shabbu" were expecting.. Their love is more of divine.. More of serene and deeper.. Loved the transformed IshRa you depicted.. South Indian loving Raman and Punjabi lover Ishita.. The ease with which their life is flowing is the sweet fruit of life which they have got after lot of patience and wait.. Its true..
Sabra ka phal meetha hi hota hai...

Loved it.. I cannot even touch the way you wrote.. Hope i don't disappoint people out here..

Thank you for such a lovely comment and I can't wait to read your story, I am sure it's going to be excellent. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: janani_divan
@doc,what a adorable conversation B/w ishra..this os show there past never effect there future.great writer present a great os for us.raman described the word sexy in his own style is so different.murabba perfect title,first os suprb hit in pallu thread.
Thanks to @pallu who always entertain us and always satisfy us and always keep the forum active.
Thanks for pm @pallu.

Thank you so much! So happy you liked the song, title and new meaning of sexy! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: peace..
Doc, just read ur OS!
Firstly thank u for introducing me to this song( i dont listen to too many songs) and then using this kind of a song for d story. brilliant 👏

Loved how Shagun/Subbu were forced to see through their initial perceptions of Ishra's relationship..wow..how beautifully did u bring it out!.. Ishra convo was natural, so beautiful, so Ishraish! 😃. And that murabba song at the background added to the flavours so much more! (btw i hate murabbas 😆 😲 i loved it here)

this line:

One hushed interaction between Ishita and Raman was enough to check Subbu and Shagun's delusion and their exit much like their entry went unnoticed by the two people who were busy filling memories into their jar of life.
beautiful! 👏

and then how they dint notice the saree and the chashma 👏

All in all beautiful..very deep meaning.. loved d concept.

Thanks Pallavi for organizing this and letting me participate. I am so happy that you liked the song, this is one of this slice of life songs that I love and when I wrote the story it just fit in perfectly. Thank you once again! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: --Rashmi---
Wow...
What a start 4 this thread.
Awsm, Beautiful OS.
Love it.
Loved ishra's convo.
It's so lovely.
Tnx 4 the pm pallavi di.

Thank you Rashmi! I am glad you liked it, thank you pallavi for sending out the PM. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: misavelon789
👏Wow what a explanation to the sexy. really nice update and also a wonderful beginning to the thread.

Thank you for you kind words, I am glad you liked reading it. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Doc, that's just so awesome.

I've never eaten this murtabba, but now after reading your OS, I feel like flying to India and finding some. Why were you complaining, you didn't lose the plot, it flows beautifully, and it's so heartwarming ( ok. I'm a bit sadistic) to see Shagun and Subbu burn!!!!!

Beautiful story - haven't listened to the song yet, it's too early in the morning, but will let you know my feels about it after I do.

Hope you are feeling better.

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