#2 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Shifted to new thread- Link on Pg 1) - Page 81

Hey !! Great update ...when I was following some other story I always noticed that u update regularly ... It so happened that I was becoming soo impatient of the story I was reading as no updates were there soo started following urs... But I will tell u , u write really well .. I loved ur story ... And yeah I had read some 40 parts in one go 😛 I really really loved and enjoyed it ... And other thing is that I love the way u end it "did I/he/she just say that " ... Its awesome ... Once I used to think she always keeps writing or what soo many updates !!! 😲( prior to reading ur story ) but trust me after reading ur story I feel as if u update after decades although u update regularly .. Soo desperate and addicted I am to ur updates ... Keep updating and keep writing ... Again for ur writings👏👏 ... Ur truly a ⭐️

kyon ishra romnce mein haddi ab rahe hoon...

Outstanding

@maanvir: this one is specially on request..
Sorry for not commenting on earlier posts.. Just being lazy.. Earlier my indiaforum window used to show logged in everytime.. But think so i started spamming posts way too much.. Now i have to log in for every window i open.. So got all the more lazy... With ur pm akaashvani hui.. Some heavenly realizations.. For a writer har ek reader zaruri hota hai and isse bhi zada for a writer har ek reader ka comment bhi utna hi zaruri hota hai..
So coming to the updates.. I might not have commented but read each and every update..
And secrets flowing.. I didnot sleep on my wedding night..based on ur track record U took 1.5 threads almost to make them raman and ishita confess their feelings for each other... And to talk about their grand SR in view of the page no 116 so i am hoping not soon... Never mind.. In dono ko bhi apni SR ka itna intezaar nahi hoga jitna hum sab ko hai... U wanna bet... But seriously as i have mentioned earlier also i dont want chaar kadam to end.. I really wish this journey to continue forever and ever.. This too from the fact that i ll sort of stay in touch with you. Because i believe when you read a work you are somehow reading its creater's mind.. And from your updates u come across as a very lively person full of pjs.. Humour on each and every thing and dont know but really like u all the more when i read ur updates each and every one.. Mind it... Well need to go before my red indians start their hoola loo dance...bbbye...
P.S. I ll make sure that i do comment on ur every promise otherwise send the same spirits to haunt me... He he he he he

yayy!! finally u start without sorry note 😆 👍🏼 amd with dhamkdar update 😆
keep updating like this 😆

Awesome Update Di !!!!!!!!!👏

Yeah...Maine pehle hi Guess Kiya tha...Humare ...Bechare...Bhole Bhale...Newly Married Couple...IshRa ko ...EkDuare Se...Dur Rakhne Ki...Maaf Na kar sake aisi...Dil Dehla Dene wali...Khunkhar ...Saajish ...Karne wale ...koi aur nahi...par Dulhe ki...Khud ki Sagi Behen Simmi...& Hone wale Jijaji Abhi hai...
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. abhi abhi sutro ke mutabiq pata chala hai ki...iss khunkhar saajish me ek Gunehgaar aur hai...
Kaun ...kaun...kaun...😕

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OMG.!!!! What a Breaking News...!!!!...
Iss khunkhar saajish me Simmi & Abhi ka saath dene wali tisri Saksh...koi aur nahi...
Balki...RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA...ki sagi Maa...Toshi Bhalla hai...

Apne Khud Ke Bete...Bhai...& Hone wale Sale ke Khilaaf ...Itni Badi...DilDehla Dene wali saajish..

Par Kyon ...Kyon...Kyon...

.Aisi Family Bhagwaan Dushman ko bhi naa de...


I know...Thoda Jyada Dramatic Ho Gaya ...hai na...
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But Sach me muje Samaj me nahi aaya...

Yeh Simmi & Abhi ne jo kiya...wo Raman ko Surprise Dene ke liye tha...Tease karne ke liye...yaa Badla lene ke liye...

Yeh Joke tha!!!!!

'Gaur se dekhiye is chehre ko. Yahi hai wo zalim behen jo apne hi bhai ke dard par khush horahi hai. Jis bhai ne apni behen ki khushi keliye apna sab kuch daav pe laga diya, aaj wahi behen us bhai ke zakhm par has rahi hai. Ek berehem, nirdayi aur swarthi behen ko karenge benaqab aaj rath 9:30 baje sirf Ishita Iyer...oops...Bhalla News channel par...EK THI BEHEN'


Nice Joke... ...👏



& ab Ishita ki Khubsurti ki aapne itni tarif ki hai to muje lagta hai...Raman ki yeh Haalat hone wali hai...

TERE CHEHRE SE...TERE CHEHRE SE...NAJAR NAHI HATATI...NAJAARE HUM KYA DEKHE...😆

Kaash...Hum Raman ke expressios...dekh pate...😭

Muje lagta hai...ab Ishita ki khubsurti hi... Raman ke Gusse se Sab ko bachayegi...😳

GOD Bless Them...

& muje Ishita Simmi ki Bonding...achchi lagi...Sasural me aisi ek friend...Nanad Jethani yaa Devrani ke rup me mil jaye...to life set ho jaye...

& Congratulations..👏...aap ke paas bhi aisi ek friend...SIL ke rup me hai...

Ek request & wish hai...ho sake to puri karna...😃

Ab Raman ko & hume bahot tadpa liya...ab ho sake to achche wale IshRa scene de do...& pls...CVs ki tarha...IshRa ke romantic scene ko Comedy scene mat bana na...

& ek question bhi hai...

Hum CVs se to kuch nahi keh sakte...par kya aap se apne pasnad ke IshRa scene ki demand kar sakte hai??????????

I am so so late .. I know... Sorry cant help it.
So the thing is i have three parts to read.

Will read one by one n comment.

Part 55
Yes yes yes ... I was right it is Ishita *dancing *

Omg the anarkali.. Its so pretty yaar.

My most favourite Line from this chap was following

what attracted me the most were 3 simple things: The pinch of vermilion on her forehead, the Chooda in her hands and the Mangalsutra in her neck.

Its...the most romantic... Most possessive most authorative yet so loveable line... One ever said.

Before starting about chapter I wanna ask u something n that is

Agr Mai kahu... Mujhe tumse mohabbat hai.
Meri bas yahi chaahat hai toh tum kya kahogi?????????


Part 56.

Agar you will be before me right now I am just gonna do one thing... Just pull your cheeks and say you are Cho Cho Cho cute...

I love this note attaching thing
I love all the dresses.
I love simmi
I love her reaction
I love their convo.
I love her repeated I SLEPT ON MY WEDDING NIGHT.
I love this chap
I love you
Did i say that? :P
Did I confess my love for the second time in the same post

Part 57.


'Gaur se dekhiye is chehre ko. Yahi hai wo zalim behen jo apne hi bhai ke dard par khush horahi hai. Jis bhai ne apni behen ki khushi keliye apna sab kuch daav pe laga diya, aaj wahi behen us bhai ke zakhm par has rahi hai. Ek berehem, nirdayi aur swarthi behen ko karenge benaqab aaj rath 9:30 baje sirf Ishita Iyer...oops...Bhalla News channel par...EK THI BEHEN'---- ROTFL...

SHE IS NOT MY SISTER-IN-LAW BUT SISTER-IN-DEED!---- awww... Dill khush kar ditta with this line.
You know what di... Agar sab sis in law ko sis maane toh kabhi nanad bhabhi k jhagre na ho. I always ask my di .. K di log sis in law ko sis q Ni maante. Khud Ki sis k saath sharing allowed but why not with pati Ki sis. Khud Ki sis kuch kahe toh suggestion pati Ki sis kahe toh us baat ko direct rejection.

Back to track

So it was all planned hmmmnm...

Waiting for ishra meeting now...

Ab mere sabar ka baandh toot raha hai

At last bada a update...