#2 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Shifted to new thread- Link on Pg 1) - Page 82

Originally posted by: asma18

Hi.,di..
awesome update 👏 ...
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Gaur se dekhiye is chehre ko. Yahi hai wo zalim behen jo apne hi bhai ke dard par khush horahi hai. Jis bhai ne apni behen ki khushi keliye apna sab kuch daav pe laga diya, aaj wahi behen us bhai ke zakhm par has rahi hai. Ek berehem, nirdayi aur swarthi behen ko karenge benaqab aaj rath 9:30 baje sirf Ishita Iyer...oops...Bhalla News channel par...EK THI BEHEN'
Superb. ...
👏
...EK THI BEHEN 😛
...simmi n ishita convo superb tha. ...jis tarha se
woh ishita ko tease karrahi thi. ..bechari ishita
😳
simmi n gang ne kya mast plan banaya ishita raman
mila ne ka ...maza aaye ga jab raman ko iss baat ka
pata Chale ga. ..ki ye sab plan tha. .
...ab .tak maine jitne bhi stories padhi hai. ...This is my favourite. .
Aap bahut beautifully likhte ho. ...
👏
plzzz continue soon. ..

Originally posted by: maanvir

@bold: Thnks a lot fr the compliment dear...I am honoured

mera bhi favourite hai...

Originally posted by: rangeelaaa

Hey !! Great update ...when I was following some other story I always noticed that u update regularly ... It so happened that I was becoming soo impatient of the story I was reading as no updates were there soo started following urs... But I will tell u , u write really well .. I loved ur story ... And yeah I had read some 40 parts in one go 😛 I really really loved and enjoyed it ... And other thing is that I love the way u end it "did I/he/she just say that " ... Its awesome ... Once I used to think she always keeps writing or what soo many updates !!! 😲( prior to reading ur story ) but trust me after reading ur story I feel as if u update after decades although u update regularly .. Soo desperate and addicted I am to ur updates ... Keep updating and keep writing ... Again for ur writings👏👏 ... Ur truly a ⭐️

Originally posted by: Richajin

@maanvir: this one is specially on request..
Sorry for not commenting on earlier posts.. Just being lazy.. Earlier my indiaforum window used to show logged in everytime.. But think so i started spamming posts way too much.. Now i have to log in for every window i open.. So got all the more lazy... With ur pm akaashvani hui.. Some heavenly realizations.. For a writer har ek reader zaruri hota hai and isse bhi zada for a writer har ek reader ka comment bhi utna hi zaruri hota hai..
So coming to the updates.. I might not have commented but read each and every update..
And secrets flowing.. I didnot sleep on my wedding night..based on ur track record U took 1.5 threads almost to make them raman and ishita confess their feelings for each other... And to talk about their grand SR in view of the page no 116 so i am hoping not soon... Never mind.. In dono ko bhi apni SR ka itna intezaar nahi hoga jitna hum sab ko hai... U wanna bet... But seriously as i have mentioned earlier also i dont want chaar kadam to end.. I really wish this journey to continue forever and ever.. This too from the fact that i ll sort of stay in touch with you. Because i believe when you read a work you are somehow reading its creater's mind.. And from your updates u come across as a very lively person full of pjs.. Humour on each and every thing and dont know but really like u all the more when i read ur updates each and every one.. Mind it... Well need to go before my red indians start their hoola loo dance...bbbye...
P.S. I ll make sure that i do comment on ur every promise otherwise send the same spirits to haunt me... He he he he he

Hai di Ek minute Ek minute please ha is se pehle ki apki gussa border cross kar de let me explain
Extremely sorry for being late
Actually Delhi gayi thi for ten days
Just returned sterday n caught up with all PMs
Read all ur latest updates in one go
Kya likhte ho aap
U r a kamaal
This one definitely tops my list of favourites
I fall in love more n more with this story with ur every update
So wonderful updates
Simi Ishu convo was superb
At its best between sister in laws
Loved the way Simi teased
She is a sweetheart
N Ishita Ka blush toh dekhne layak hai
Omg the way Simi was teasing she must hav died blushing
N Ishu how much she wanted to make up for last nights
N the top of everything notes by Raman were simply awesome
I definitely wholeheartedly wish this from my future husband agar us buddhu ko itna Akal hai toh 😛
N yeh saari ideas laate kaha se ho aap???
I m spellbound with every update
N Raman reaction after meeting his favourite client wow superb
He must be definitely on cloud nine
Surprise hi itna bada tha ki uski hosh aur awaaz Ud Gaye honge
Ab itna Bhi mat tadapao di hume Ishra ki is raat ke liye
Getting bechain with every update
N when is ur next update
Waiting with all eyes
Jaldi Karo na apki behens ke liye
N bache ko aur mat tadapao I mean puttar ko
Again sry for late reply I guess apne maafkiya mujhe
Thanks for pms

Originally posted by: prayosha

Awesome Update Di !!!!!!!!!👏

Yeah...Maine pehle hi Guess Kiya tha...Humare ...Bechare...Bhole Bhale...Newly Married Couple...IshRa ko ...EkDuare Se...Dur Rakhne Ki...Maaf Na kar sake aisi...Dil Dehla Dene wali...Khunkhar ...Saajish ...Karne wale ...koi aur nahi...par Dulhe ki...Khud ki Sagi Behen Simmi...& Hone wale Jijaji Abhi hai...
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. abhi abhi sutro ke mutabiq pata chala hai ki...iss khunkhar saajish me ek Gunehgaar aur hai...
Kaun ...kaun...kaun...😕

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OMG.!!!! What a Breaking News...!!!!...
Iss khunkhar saajish me Simmi & Abhi ka saath dene wali tisri Saksh...koi aur nahi...
Balki...RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA...ki sagi Maa...Toshi Bhalla hai...

Apne Khud Ke Bete...Bhai...& Hone wale Sale ke Khilaaf ...Itni Badi...DilDehla Dene wali saajish..

Par Kyon ...Kyon...Kyon...

.Aisi Family Bhagwaan Dushman ko bhi naa de...


I know...Thoda Jyada Dramatic Ho Gaya ...hai na...
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But Sach me muje Samaj me nahi aaya...

Yeh Simmi & Abhi ne jo kiya...wo Raman ko Surprise Dene ke liye tha...Tease karne ke liye...yaa Badla lene ke liye...

Yeh Joke tha!!!!!

'Gaur se dekhiye is chehre ko. Yahi hai wo zalim behen jo apne hi bhai ke dard par khush horahi hai. Jis bhai ne apni behen ki khushi keliye apna sab kuch daav pe laga diya, aaj wahi behen us bhai ke zakhm par has rahi hai. Ek berehem, nirdayi aur swarthi behen ko karenge benaqab aaj rath 9:30 baje sirf Ishita Iyer...oops...Bhalla News channel par...EK THI BEHEN'


Nice Joke... ...👏



& ab Ishita ki Khubsurti ki aapne itni tarif ki hai to muje lagta hai...Raman ki yeh Haalat hone wali hai...

TERE CHEHRE SE...TERE CHEHRE SE...NAJAR NAHI HATATI...NAJAARE HUM KYA DEKHE...😆

Kaash...Hum Raman ke expressios...dekh pate...😭

Muje lagta hai...ab Ishita ki khubsurti hi... Raman ke Gusse se Sab ko bachayegi...😳

GOD Bless Them...

& muje Ishita Simmi ki Bonding...achchi lagi...Sasural me aisi ek friend...Nanad Jethani yaa Devrani ke rup me mil jaye...to life set ho jaye...

& Congratulations..👏...aap ke paas bhi aisi ek friend...SIL ke rup me hai...

Ek request & wish hai...ho sake to puri karna...😃

Ab Raman ko & hume bahot tadpa liya...ab ho sake to achche wale IshRa scene de do...& pls...CVs ki tarha...IshRa ke romantic scene ko Comedy scene mat bana na...

& ek question bhi hai...

Hum CVs se to kuch nahi keh sakte...par kya aap se apne pasnad ke IshRa scene ki demand kar sakte hai??????????

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Before starting about chapter I wanna ask u something n that is

Agr Mai kahu... Mujhe tumse mohabbat hai.
Meri bas yahi chaahat hai toh tum kya kahogi?????????


Part 56.

Agar you will be before me right now I am just gonna do one thing... Just pull your cheeks and say you are Cho Cho Cho cute...

I love this note attaching thing
I love all the dresses.
I love simmi
I love her reaction
I love their convo.
I love her repeated I SLEPT ON MY WEDDING NIGHT.
I love this chap
I love you
Did i say that? :P
Did I confess my love for the second time in the same post

loved update
simmi full teasing mood
family plan superb
continue soon

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Part 57.


'Gaur se dekhiye is chehre ko. Yahi hai wo zalim behen jo apne hi bhai ke dard par khush horahi hai. Jis bhai ne apni behen ki khushi keliye apna sab kuch daav pe laga diya, aaj wahi behen us bhai ke zakhm par has rahi hai. Ek berehem, nirdayi aur swarthi behen ko karenge benaqab aaj rath 9:30 baje sirf Ishita Iyer...oops...Bhalla News channel par...EK THI BEHEN'---- ROTFL...

SHE IS NOT MY SISTER-IN-LAW BUT SISTER-IN-DEED!---- awww... Dill khush kar ditta with this line.
You know what di... Agar sab sis in law ko sis maane toh kabhi nanad bhabhi k jhagre na ho. I always ask my di .. K di log sis in law ko sis q Ni maante. Khud Ki sis k saath sharing allowed but why not with pati Ki sis. Khud Ki sis kuch kahe toh suggestion pati Ki sis kahe toh us baat ko direct rejection.

Back to track

So it was all planned hmmmnm...

Waiting for ishra meeting now...

Ab mere sabar ka baandh toot raha hai

Originally posted by: prayosha

mera bhi favourite hai...