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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

Hai di Ek minute Ek minute please ha is se pehle ki apki gussa border cross kar de let me explain
Extremely sorry for being late
Actually Delhi gayi thi for ten days
Just returned sterday n caught up with all PMs
Read all ur latest updates in one go
Kya likhte ho aap
U r a kamaal
This one definitely tops my list of favourites
I fall in love more n more with this story with ur every update
So wonderful updates
Simi Ishu convo was superb
At its best between sister in laws
Loved the way Simi teased
She is a sweetheart
N Ishita Ka blush toh dekhne layak hai
Omg the way Simi was teasing she must hav died blushing
N Ishu how much she wanted to make up for last nights
N the top of everything notes by Raman were simply awesome
I definitely wholeheartedly wish this from my future husband agar us buddhu ko itna Akal hai toh 😛
N yeh saari ideas laate kaha se ho aap???
I m spellbound with every update
N Raman reaction after meeting his favourite client wow superb
He must be definitely on cloud nine
Surprise hi itna bada tha ki uski hosh aur awaaz Ud Gaye honge
Ab itna Bhi mat tadapao di hume Ishra ki is raat ke liye
Getting bechain with every update
N when is ur next update
Waiting with all eyes
Jaldi Karo na apki behens ke liye
N bache ko aur mat tadapao I mean puttar ko
Again sry for late reply I guess apne maafkiya mujhe
Thanks for pms



As I alwys say LAMBAWALA cmnt do to sari galtiyan maaf...

Aur tune itna pyara cmnt likha hai ke mai gussa hona chahoon to bhi nahi ho sakti...

@bold: I really hope & wish ke tujhe koi aisa hi mile...

Soch rahi hun aaj ek update likh dun...its 10 pm here now...hubby ne 11 pm ka deadline diya hua hai jo mai aksar break kar deti hun😛

So I am hoping to gv a quick short update...lets c if i vl b successful

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Posted: 10 years ago
''ek thi behen''...😆
so all these were planned
blushing ishita😛
w8ing 4 raman's reaction when he
ll come 2 know about this planning...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir




As I alwys say LAMBAWALA cmnt do to sari galtiyan maaf...

Aur tune itna pyara cmnt likha hai ke mai gussa hona chahoon to bhi nahi ho sakti...

@bold: I really hope & wish ke tujhe koi aisa hi mile...

Soch rahi hun aaj ek update likh dun...its 10 pm here now...hubby ne 11 pm ka deadline diya hua hai jo mai aksar break kar deti hun😛

So I am hoping to gv a quick short update...lets c if i vl b successful

koi baat nahi jiju important hai
Aap deadline mat cross karna
Aur apna RaaaT enjoy karna I mean ache se Sona
Hum kal tak wait kar sakte hai no problem
U just go 😳
Please di ab Chappal Leke mere peeche bhagna nahi 😉
Edited by Ishradivani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir



Hi!
Firstly thanks to u fr the cmnt😃
Secondly thnks to the writer of the story u used to follow bfr Char Kadam fr nt gvng regular updates😛
It is his/her delay that brought u towards Char Kadam😆

40 parts in one go😲 Well honestly this is a huge compliment in itself...No one would spend hours reading 40 chaps at a tym unless u find it intrstng...so thnks again

Nw wen I luk back at the speed of my writing in the initial chaps of Char Kadam, I too am amazed that I used to gv an update every day mostly...bt nw I am stuck badly...Its getting difficult to write even a short update these days...

Anyways thnk u dear fr all the kind words

Trust me u really write well and yeah I hope and pray u come out of whatever u r stuck and I get the char kadam update 😛 ... I know I am selfish here but u r too good in ur writing that I am addicted ..😛. .. I always check if u have updated 😃 ... Thanks for the reply ... Gn
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi All!
I am happy today! I am happy today!

Thanks for the amazing response...

I have tried to reply to most(not all) of the comments...

Those who did not get a reply please don't get disheartened...

I hv read each & every cmnt and I honestly I love them...

I will try rplyng to the ones I hv missed if I finish this update within the deadline given to me by my hubby dearest...

Plz keep showering ur love...

Thanks

Here comes a quick short update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey!
I read all you're parts in a go!
Loving this SS.
Would u please send me a pm? :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
See i stayed true to my promise...
Ek baar jo maine commitment kar di phir main haunted spirits ki bhi nahi sunti 😆 well update update update kahan hai update... Post karo then i ll write ek bada sa comment... 😉
Edited by Richajin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir





Hahaha...Prayosha I am glad ke tumne cmnt karna start kiya...

U knw mai aaj kal mere bahut sare readers ko miss kar rahi hun...

Jaise ke Harshita jo lambe cmnts diya krti thi jisme o quotes bhi add karti thi...Kal ki tumhari cmnt ne uski kasar poori kar di...

Meri ek aur regular commentor thi sulo jo ek number ki melodrama thi...aaj ki tumhari cmnt ne mujhe uski yaad dila di...

Sincere advice derahi hun tu na padhayi chodke News channel keliye audition de de...By god tu cha jayegi...Kya khatarnak words ka istemal kiya hai tune...Jis b channel pe tu ye news padhegi na uski TRP pakka badhegi😆

@ bold: Zarur zarur kyun nahi! Plz send in ur requests...Maine already kuch plan kiya hua hai aage ke updates keliye so i wont promise bt koshish zarur karungi usko poora karneka...

No no no...
Muje reporter Banane ka koi Shauq nahi hai...& I am happy...meri koshish aap ko achchi lagi...

& rahi baat meri wish ki to mai & meri Friend hai...Asma...hum dono ki ek hi wish hai...IshRa ka romantic Bin mausm barish wala scene...

Yeh CVs ...Jab Delhi me Earthquake aaya to wo dikhayenge...twist ke liye...par Romantic Barish aai to wo nahi dikhayenge...

Bas ek yeh wish hai...ho sake to puri karna...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Note on Pg 119😃

Part 58

"All the best Mrs. Ishita Raman Bhalla"


Did I just say that!?


Come on Ishita! You can do it! I told myself.


I hugged my new found sister-in-deed for all the help I got from her, took blessings from Mummyji, got Good Lucks from Mihir and Abhi setting off to conquer PAY BACK SLEEPING OFF THE WEDDING NIGHT MISSION.


I drove to his office. As I entered the confines of his office I remembered my last visit to this very place when I was on an Avoid Talking and Continue Ignoring Spree. I felt remorseful about the silent tantrums I had been throwing at him and spoiling his plans of a perfect romantic date.

The memory of that day definitely increased my guilt but at the same time I was more determined and enthusiastic about making this a special day for him.


I just hope everything goes as planned and this visit of mine will be surprise and not a shock for him.


"Hi I am here to meet Mr.Bhalla" I told the receptionist


"Sorry Ma'am! Mr.Bhalla is not available for any meeting today" she said ever so politely


"Actually he is here to meet me" I said


She checked me out from head to toe. Looks like she was not convinced with what I said as my appearance definitely did not match with that of a client.


"Ermmm Mr.Bhalla is waiting for an investor" she said


"Yeah I am the one he is waiting for"


"Are you sure Ma'am?"


"Yes I am"


"Ermmm you are sure Ma'am?"


"Yes I am! Now please call Mr.Bhalla and tell that I am here" I was irked with her behaviour. Who was she to stop me from meeting my husband? I wanted to tell her Mind your own business! but then I controlled myself.


FYI Ishu! She was minding her own business. That's her job and she is doing just that!


Whatever! I don't care...
All that matters to me is that I want to meet my husband. I haven't seen him since our wedding.
Ok...I saw him this morning but then I was in a sleepy state and then the guilt trip didn't let me look at him properly.



"You may go in Miss?"


"Its Mrs" I said showing my chooda and the mangalsutra


"Oh Mrs?" she asked


"Ishita Raman Bhalla" I said shrugging proudly and her jaw dropped to the floor


With a huge smile, I left her alone to recover from the surprise (shock) she just encountered and walked towards my permanent destination My husband😳


I knew he must be waiting impatiently for the client to get back home as Abhi had briefed me rather teased me about Raman's desperation to be with me☺️


So I entered his cabin without knocking on it.
I appeared determined and confident but within I was a bundle of nerves.


The look on his face said that he was pleasantly surprised which made me happy.
But the way his gaze traveled through my entire frame made me nervous.


No doubt I was wearing his favorite dress of his favorite colour, yet I was scared if I fit into his imagination of me in this dress or not.
I have disappointed him in many ways until now, I didn't intend to do that anymore.


A smile of contentment appeared on his face after a while and I rejoiced as my first attempt of MISSION PAY BACK SLEEPING OFF THE WEDDING NIGHT was successful!


"By God Bhai tujhe dekhenge na teri tareef me poori book likh dalenge."

Simmi's words rang in my ears. You were wrong Simmi. Kahan tum poori book likh dalne ki bath kar rahi thi aur yahan tumhare Bhai ne meri tareef me apna moo tak nahi khola. Bas besharmon ki tarah ghoore jarahe hain aur pagalon ki tarah muskura rahe hain. Maana ki unhe achhi lagi hogi isiliye muskura rahe hain par moo se kuch to bolna chahiye na I mentally communicated my disappointment to her



"Rath ko jo nahi kiya bhai tujhe dekh ge abhi wo kar dega."

"I doubt ke aaj sara din Bhai tujhe kamre se bahar aane dega bhi ya nahi"

"Teri sari mehnat bekar honewali hai. Dress choose karne me tune itni der lagayi usko utarne me bhai seconds bhi nahi lagayega."


Kya tu chahti hai ke meri ye wali bahvishyavani sach ho? I heard her telepathic conversation.


Nahi nahi...aisa hua to mere poore surprise ka pachka hojayega...I conveyed to her through telepathy


Raman's POV


Uhu Uhu the sound of coughing brought me out of reverie.


"Ishita tum yahan?" I asked walking towards her


"Apko yaad hai aapne mujhse kaha tha ke jab bhi mujhe kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to mujhe yahan aana chahiye?"


"Haan mujhe yaad hai" Why was she reminding me of that conversation we had 2 days back?


"Aapne kaha tha ke no matter what aap mera sath doge"


"Haan kaha tha. Par..." I started to raise a doubt but she stopped me midway


"Kya aap bina koi sawal kare mera sath doge?"


"Haan par hua kya..."


"Shhh..." she said keeping her index finger on my lips and then extended her hand towards me


"Kya aap bina kuch kahe mere sath chaloge?"


Did she just say that!?


----------------------------To be continued--------------------------


The beginning of another Char Kadam?
Or the end of Char Kadam: IshRa FF?😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir




Haaaye mai mar jaawaan! Suki loves me😳
Iska matlab Raman out aur Maanvir in???

Bt ye baat Raj aur Simran ko na bataiyyo warna wo to kuch aur hi samajh baithenge😉

Waise ek bat tujhe b clear kar dun...I am happily married and I AM STRAIGHT!

Did I just say that!?😆



Yes yes yes its true... You can celebrate that I love youuu...

No Raman is always in... I adjusted you too.

Na baba na raj or simran naam k logo se toh mujhe real life me darr lagne laga hai.

Lol... I am straight too.

Its behno wala sisters wala friend wala love lol

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