#2 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Shifted to new thread- Link on Pg 1) - Page 80

Lovely parts...
Caught all the last three parts together...
Congo for not starting with a sorry note.But i'm afraid I have to...

Part 55

Short yet sweet
Hayee... The way you described the beauty was extremely perfect
Loved it to the core

Part 56

oh my !
Notes on each dress... Cool
God... This Simmi...too good
she was laughing 😆
All the dresses were pretty

Part 57

oh! Now I get it
Everything was planned ha?
I didn't know sleeping in wedding night could be compensated in this way
So yeh sab Hamari crazy bhalla parivar ka kartoot hai
Loved it

Agle update bhi Jaldi se...
Continue soon

Originally posted by: ishra7

This is the first time I'm commenting...I have read all the parts it's very interesting and different story ...I like the way u express each one's point of view...thanks for pm dear ...and I must say it was a surprise for me to see the update so early..well written about ishita and simmi bonding ...how simmi was teasing her... Ur SIL is lucky to have u I guess... 😊 😊 😊

Crazy family
I liked Simmi very well.
Continue soon

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

im actually surprised u knw itna jaldi update wow
so coming to chap it was a full proff plan of this crazy family
bechara raman ...
awesome update

Originally posted by: Sri1091

Thnks for d surprise dear... And all dat was a plan... Bechara raman atleast now ishita shld make up to him for all dis torture...

Originally posted by: cutie782

Awesome twist di...!!!! Didn't expect dat d entire part of raman going to office is planned ... loved it... and I guess this is ur first back to back updates within 24 hrs after many weeks ie., without 'SORRY'...😆😉😊 now waiting what wuld b puttar's reaction if he knows dat it is planned...!!! Do update next part soon...

Hi.,di..
awesome update 👏 ...
...
Gaur se dekhiye is chehre ko. Yahi hai wo zalim behen jo apne hi bhai ke dard par khush horahi hai. Jis bhai ne apni behen ki khushi keliye apna sab kuch daav pe laga diya, aaj wahi behen us bhai ke zakhm par has rahi hai. Ek berehem, nirdayi aur swarthi behen ko karenge benaqab aaj rath 9:30 baje sirf Ishita Iyer...oops...Bhalla News channel par...EK THI BEHEN'
Superb. ...
👏
...EK THI BEHEN 😛
...simmi n ishita convo superb tha. ...jis tarha se
woh ishita ko tease karrahi thi. ..bechari ishita
😳
simmi n gang ne kya mast plan banaya ishita raman
mila ne ka ...maza aaye ga jab raman ko iss baat ka
pata Chale ga. ..ki ye sab plan tha. .
...ab .tak maine jitne bhi stories padhi hai. ...This is my favourite. .
Aap bahut beautifully likhte ho. ...
👏
plzzz continue soon. ..

Nice twist pls continue soon

WOW!

an unexpected update di and also an unexpected turn in d story so all this was d plan of bhalla's amazing waiting for d nxt part it will be amazing to see how raman react to all this plan ... atlast thanks for d pm