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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#631

Chapter Eight.

Short and wonderful. It seems like a nice build up towards the end. I like how you show the two to be at ease around each other, with no constraints.

And the speech on tears was the highlight of the update. Bravo!

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#632

beautiful is the word for the part...

u made me speechless again...

lovely story

sad it ended..but enjoyed it!!!!

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-Srishty-

@-Srishty-

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#633

Aani you just outdo every chapter you write!

Last part was so beautiful that even words fail to describe it. Hats off for all the effort in making the last part like the way it turn out.

Keep rocking YHM section with your writing skills and thank you for making so many people happy with your stories.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#634

Chapter Nine.

I had a good time reading the chapter and I took it slow to absorb tthat its the end of it. I must say you are a commendable author and this work is enough evidence of it. The journey of the story was beautiful, and in no where did it feel over the top OR mush. You write romance well.

I hope you come up with a new work soon, I'd be very much interested to read It.

Love and Best wishes.

NIV 🤗

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#635

There are some emotions, some confusions, some moments that can't be explained, but just felt by a person undergoing them. But its the success of a writer when he/she can express that moment so beautifully that the reader can understand all of it in one read.

Raman and Ishita here are going about a simple task of wanting to get Ishita changed. But just doing that has made them go throw a volley of emotions. From facing the ghosts of their past, to getting closer emotionally and finally physically, they've gone through a journey of a lifetime just in a day, just in a moment rather.

Their love is defined by the amount of trust they have in each other, the closeness they share emotionally by always being there for the other. But as husband and wife/man and woman they definitely have moments when they feel physically attracted and today was one such moment when they want to cross that barrier and give each other that love they've both craved for. Raman wants to make her feel wanted, wants to feel accepted as unlike how he was with Shagun. Ishita wants to feel desired by him and wants to be loved , to be healed and wants to give him the acceptance. Not wanting to reject the moment and cause him more pain. They almost go about it.. but there lies the beauty where they think more for the other than themselves.

Loved how he stopped, loved how she apologized, fearful for having hurt him. Just mesmerized by how he calmed her. Raman's maturity and sensitivity in the approach was splendid.

I've loved every part of the short story Aani .. didn't want it to be over. It was beautiful, mature and dealt with the complexities of a growing relation.

Please continue writing 😃I think I am going to get withdrawal symptoms 😆

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#636

Aani only you could have made a short story, when the protagonists were in the same room, same clothes, during the same day and time! Wow!

The intimate moments between them were so hot, yet so beautiful. Her innocence and his efforts to not pounce on her. The last chapter more than made up for all the wait, at least I did to get them change. Thoroughly enjoyed it. And I know I'm soon going to read it again because it deserves at least a second read.

Kudos!

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#637

gosh, such an amazing, sensuous part☺️☺️☺️
thanks a ton for making it lengthy 🤗. i was taking my time in reading it . it was so so beautiful...❤️

finally they got down to changing the clothes 😆... i must applaud Raman's controlling abilities. he proceeded to change Ishita in such a deliciously, achingly slow way that no wonder both were turned on ☺️. its great that they found solace in those hot kisses☺️
i just dont have the correct words right now to describe how mind-blowing the entire scene was. i will never get tired of typing that you are so brilliant at this👏👏

what a lovely journey this has been. Am gonna miss it, but will keep coming back every time to read it all over again😃

thanks for sharing it with us
take care🤗

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#638

Oh god..u r an amazing writer...your style of writing and the beauty of each word..I don't know how to appreciate it...it's just beautiful the way you portray emotions through words...truly gifted ...