Ishra TS: Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna Last part - Pg 25

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Once again, vidya ji.. u r back in action! awesummm story.. this was much needed! looks like Cvs will apply this in their script! its way too real to happen in the serial!

all the unsaid emotions held by ishita was described beautifully.. i could literally imagine ishita tadapfying!!

Raman's fake smile and Bhalla members sulking mode to tv and dinner was the BEST! loved it.. they realized without Ishita, there is no Life!

brilliant again and the title...superbb!!

cont soon! eager to read the next part!

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Akshatha

@Akshatha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Excellent update...

Ishita turmoil has been pictured magnificent awesome, her each and every line was just so perfectly written...

Ruhi is an sweetheart, love her matured behavior... .

Ishita needed a break from this kind of atmosphere ...

Nobody is understanding ishita's pain/sadness, except Ruhi...

IshRu scene always heart touching...

Ishita convo with Raman was so touching esp this line by ishita - "main kabhi aapke majhboori nahi banna chaahti Raman...

the last line was just amazing by raman👏...

beautifully written👏

continue soon...

i wish to see same seq in serial too ...

waiting for next update...

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Beautiful story Vidya! It was a pleasure to read, and amazing song selection, very apt for the poignant situation of separation. Thank you for making Ishita vocal yet sticking to her true characteristics, I really enjoyed the conversation between puttar and the missus.

Will wait eagerly for the update. Thanks.

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Abhinaiscool

@Abhinaiscool

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Hi I loved this ishita... could relate to what she was feeling... hope something like this happens on the show...

N you r an amazing writer... 👏

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

This is great!!! Please continue :)

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Vidya 👏👏👏.. What a story you have come up with !!
CVs please make use of this ..
So realistic and you made her vocal. You still kept Ishitha to her true nature ..
Such a beauty.. Continue soon 😳

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Super duper awesome.adi is getting on my nerves.He sucks really.I like the scene where Raman finds hard to fake smile which ishu has been doing frequently.

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

I hate to say ths s gud decision of ishita...
Raman need to see th truth f adi..
If ishu thr it wont happen.. As she wont tell abt her sadness..

I feel in yhm , it will b ruhi who s goin to take ishu from bhallass...

She s finding th things elders nt seeing... Her ishimaa's tears... Next week goin to b more complicated

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ANU

@banksii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

BRILLIANTLY CONTCEPTULIZED...FANTASTIC TS...LOVED ISHITA'S DECISION..WISH SOMETHING LIKE THIS HAPPENS IN THE SHOW. .LAST LINE OF RAMAN WAS CHERRY ON THE CAKE...PLZ UPDATE SOON...

Edited by banana.ishra - 10 years ago