Ishra TS: Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna Last part - Pg 25

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Bombaytola

@Bombaytola

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Posted: 10 years ago

😃👏 Such a lovely play of words. Vidya I ve read most of ur work and liked it but this track is so close to my heart. I love your interpretation of it. Cant' t wait for ur update. I wish CVS are reading closely and try to handle this in a matured manner like this.

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-DivAn-

@DivAnii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Fan Start Vidya..

Continue Soon

Loved Raman's Dialogue at the end

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Vidyaaa I want next part soon. This obese is so addictive. <3

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Paru

@paru_rox

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Edited on Pg1 😳

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namratha

@NSB7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

There is a perfect song I found for Raman's condition as per your TS
Ain't no sunshine when she's gone - http://www.lyrics007.com/Bill%20Withers%20Lyrics/Ain't%20No%20Sunshine%20Lyrics.html

I loved the content of your work...keep going on 👏

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sweetiepiee090

@sweetiepiee090

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

lovely start vidya 👏👏 d way u shw ishita's turmoil nd her decision it was awsome wld lk 2 c sumthng like tat n shw too(par koi barosa nai cv's ka)... ruhi decision was superb to go wth her ishima, luvd raman last line.. plz continue nxt prt soon..

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swathin

@swathin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

superb start
d way ishu expressed her feelings
was too good
its high time to give her a break
waiting ...

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Thaslima

@PinkRose95

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

hi di😊

i'm always a silent reader of ur writing but nw i cant resist myself..

its awesome story di hope something like tis happns in the show but sigh(cvs na)

really raman needs a reality check😡

he cant take ishu and ruhi for granted as if tey wer some punching bags

aft watching olv,its really getting on my nerves...some says tat he is just pretending even though he is acting tis is not the way u treat ur wife in front of ur ex and wacko kid

watever the reason may b it is not justified

i know its lil long but have to vent out smewer na di so y nt to u...

update soon di...waiting