Ishra TS: Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna Last part - Pg 25

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zindagi4pyaar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awsum wuld b a small wOrd...but I must say brilliant piece of writing...D writers shuld take note of ur writing n shuld implement it...plzzz continue..

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

amazng job vidya...

loved it...

fianlly raman's angry mode on...

nd shagun dumb...dont knw wht eh vl do if he loose ishita...

ishu kept all things to remaind him and raman taking all those so cute... nd raman by seeing her towel can recognise the modd of hers...hw romantic..

raman ko sarees distance bhi pasand nahi hain...thts so cute...

loved this phase of life...

updte nxt part soon...

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Amazingly written vidya...rula diya ya

loved it

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

That was yet another lovely update from your side..
when evry small thing reminded him off her 😳.. Awww that moment 😭..
Too emotional and also just showed how much they loved each other. They could read once thoughts and that was so well portrayed !..He is so desp waiting for her return.. I can go on and on ...
Loved shagun's band bhajoying 😆
Continue soon ! .. Waiting to read the next update..

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

So touching.I m eager to know what Raman does as he does nothing in the show.I hope its something big which could break all illusions of apshagun.I want her to beg,to shout,to reveal her true colours herself in front of everyone.wish of a frustrated mind.sigh!

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ishra00

@ishra00

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Wao its amazing. you have written it so beautiful. Its useless to expect this type of scene from our brainless CV

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

another brilliant update..

raman find ishita imprints everywhere..brilliant

shagun bajaoing was good..how can somebody be so full of themselves😕

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

That was soo emotional yet lovely n beautiful..loved every bit f it..how he got remainders f ishu everywhere...n their telepathy was amazingly beautiful.. How he handled shagun was superb... Great work vidyaa..plss update soon n plsss pm meee