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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res 😃

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Loved it Vids. I knew it would be written well by you but then you already know that ⭐️.

Sometimes in life the best thing to do is take a step back, breath & think. Ishita is doing the same. Perhaps Raman should sort out his family situation and its ensuing confusions too with the right perspective. Loved the part where Raman is shocked with Adi's deluded attempt to remove Ishita from the fram (literally too) and his last dialogue was 👏.

Honestly believe that the show needs this too. Both IShita & Raman know they love each other but still the present situation in their home is hardly ideal. Ek mini separation/ step back and both get their priorities right and also set it right for everyone within their house including wacko kid.

Can't wait to read the next part 😃

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Paru kahan hai res nahi kar rahi, so I will. 😃

Ha ha, you beat me !!!!!!

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Love it Vi. You've brought out Ishita's angst and her need for distance so well, and yet without labouring the point. Love how Raman realises how he can't really be genuinely happy without his 2 angels and how Ruhi insists on going with her Ishima.

Going to read part 2 straightaway now.

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

Brilliant start!!

Ruhi is an angel :)

Loved Raman's dialogue at the end!

Please continue soon!

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iamrabia

@iamrabia

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

Well saying that it is superb would be an understatement!
Its beautiful all emotions r perfect to the t eagerly waiting for next update!

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

amazing!! luking 4wrd 4 another upd8 :)

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome vidyaaa...fantastic track..n its so emotional that my eyes welled up..loved it so much vidyaaa..plsss zyaada waqt na lagado update karne mein..waiting for the update.plsss update soon... U hv a great talent vidyaaa