New IshRa OS: A date to remember

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Rashmika

@RashmikaMG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Beautiful OS dr.
In RKB's POV.
Love it.
Thank you 4 not sleeping yday night.
Hey can't u b awake every night like yday? 😉
Tnx 4 pm.

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twerping

@twerping

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

OSJ! You wizard with words , you! This was perfect! Just perfect! Totally swept me off to IshRa land! The humour, the intensity, the passion, the love! Everything was just spot on! Boy am I glad that sleep was eluding you that night!

😳☺️

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

First of all OJu, take a BOW girl. That was sooo romantic. You really are the Queen of Romance.😳 Both of them are nervous. Both of them are desperate. Both of them are lovers. Both of them have confessed. I was blushing throughout.☺️

Stepping into RKBs shoes, i knw how that feels🥱. Have started writing a SS in his POV and it is seeming to be a brainstorming session for me🥱

Even if the girl in front is blushing, it doesn't mean that the guy's knees are strong and steady.😳 You brought that out soo beautifully😳.

It was really a date to remember😳

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Beautifully written. Enjoyed it.

It doesn't seem like you have written from Raman's perspective the first time. It was perfect.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awesome os
beautiful

ThNks dear! 😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Jenny..
Ghosh this was soo beautiful raman in black tux and clean shaven,nothing can be more hotter than this guy☺️...he just wanted everything to be perfect as finally they were Couple❤️...like real ones...and then ishita's entry....i must say he just go to some other world with his imaginations wenever he see his wifey in western dress😆 and the way he was checking her out, i can imagine how hard he was trying to controlling himself😆 well he actually did wat he wanted in his thoughts☺️😆...ishita cant even think in her wildest dream that wat her husband was dreaming while standing in front of her😆 abd after that their perfectly arranged dinner date he was trying to make her comfortable😳 this is what raman is!!...and their cute light talks...finally their hug
It was just beautifully described!!plain perfect❤️ you are one of my fav writers on this forum😳 i have read many of your work...and they are fabb👏...m really sorry for not commenting😳 its just that i am overlyloaded with my studiesand addition to that is my lazinesss😛😆 but yah i never miss to read your OS's😳 and yeah please PM me next time😳 i'll surely be commenting as now my exams are over😃
Jenny🤗

Giggling as I am reading ur review on the story Jenny! Yes our hero did whatever he wanted to do in his dreams n imagination! N our heroine is as clueless as she was before😆

Awww thank u so much for your love n appreciation. N I am very honoured. Of course I will pm u if u r really interested to read my works. I understand. Studies first n as for laziness, I am myself a very lazy person taking ages to reply in my own threads. 😳

Looking forward to ur feedback in my future works.

Take care. 🤗

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: arunabhi
OSJ, that was sizzling hot romantic OS.
Loved it !! from Puttar's point of view.. All the more special 😳😳
I could imagine both of them easily.. I found it realistic cos I felt RKB will have all this self talk and these ideas running in his mind. Dhakkan that she is 😆😆
Glad you did not feel sleepy last night and came up with such a OS !
Thanks a lot for this one

Thanks Aruna. Really glad that u could relate to the characters in my write up.

As for last night, I am happy too that my imagination worked overtime. It is a pleasure to write n then being so appreciated 😳

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Wow, this was so romantic.. Loved how well you portrayed Raman's love for his Ishita. Really well written😊

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Sunita

@avni_19

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

OMGGG!!! WOWW!! OSJ!! how come i skiped ur story!

totallyy lovedd itt!! Beautifullyyy writtenn!!! such an awesumm night u decribedd!! when i was reading this, the sbs segment poped up on my head! hahah! wahan interpruption aur yahan NO one! :P

im totally in love with this take! <3 :D

do writee moree!!! <3