New IshRa OS: A date to remember

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ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

OMG.

I Loved this! Absolutely beautiful

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Aaahh I'm glad sleep didn't come to you so soon tonight.

What a brilliant piece of writing! You did a splendid job writing from Raman's POV.

Raman in a black tuxedo and Ishita in a blue lace dress, what a dreamy sight!

My bubble burst along with Raman's when Ishita yelled 'dinner'.. that was a hell of a dream.

This was a perfect date to remember and with this I'm going to surrender to Morpheus too😳.
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Thank u Srishty for ur awesome comments. I always look forward to it. Glad that u like it.

Haha! I guess that was too hot a dream to b true. Ishita would literally have a heart attack if Raman jumps on her on the first romantic date😆

Wish u sweet IshRa dreams! 😃

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Ghosh this was soo beautiful raman in black tux and clean shaven,nothing can be more hotter than this guy☺️...he just wanted everything to be perfect as finally they were Couple❤️...like real ones...and then ishita's entry....i must say he just go to some other world with his imaginations wenever he see his wifey in western dress😆 and the way he was checking her out, i can imagine how hard he was trying to controlling himself😆 well he actually did wat he wanted in his thoughts☺️😆...ishita cant even think in her wildest dream that wat her husband was dreaming while standing in front of her😆 abd after that their perfectly arranged dinner date he was trying to make her comfortable😳 this is what raman is!!...and their cute light talks...finally their hug

It was just beautifully described!!plain perfect❤️ you are one of my fav writers on this forum😳 i have read many of your work...and they are fabb👏...m really sorry for not commenting😳 its just that i am overlyloaded with my studiesand addition to that is my lazinesss😛😆 but yah i never miss to read your OS's😳 and yeah please PM me next time😳 i'll surely be commenting as now my exams are over😃

Jenny🤗

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Wow Osj this was so very cute and romantic ..and yes hot too at the same time...
u r such a pro at this👏
loved it

Thank u Dips! 😳 I am so blushing reading some of the comments here! I am glad to see mist of my readers in such a teasing n good mood. I guess confession effect which is just round the corner!! 😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: cool_aparna
Aww...loved it 😳

Aparna! 😃 Happy to see u here.

Glad u like it!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: shavi2311
excellnt...
loved it truly...
best date evr on ishra...

Thank u so much shavi n congrats for turning dazzler!!😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
☺️❤️
this is romantic and cute! Raman's thoughts were too fast for her! 🤣

😆😆😆

Fast n steady Raman! Slow and clueless Ishita!

I just love them!!

Thanks for being here!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Awww.. that was such a cute OS! :) <3

Thanks dear😊

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -Raz-
OMG.

I Loved this! Absolutely beautiful

Thank u so much Raz!

Long time! Happy to see u here.

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

OSJ, that was sizzling hot romantic OS.
Loved it !! from Puttar's point of view.. All the more special 😳😳
I could imagine both of them easily.. I found it realistic cos I felt RKB will have all this self talk and these ideas running in his mind. Dhakkan that she is 😆😆
Glad you did not feel sleepy last night and came up with such a OS !
Thanks a lot for this one