New IshRa OS: A date to remember

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dazzzling

@dazzzling

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Wow OSJ! Tum kya ho? A wizard?
Everytime you come up with a romantic shot and every time it has this special something which makes you go awww.
I love the shot from the start to the end. I can't say which part was better or best. Raman's fantasy, his monologue with your touch of humour in it or the last part so IshRalicious. Perfect blend.
May god give you more sleepless nights and you in turn give us such amazing creation.
Thank you for being there to relive in us the essence of IshRa and the beautiful mohabattein they share.
Love you OSJ
God bless.

Edited by dazzzling - 10 years ago

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Awwwiiieee...It was awsum OS di..!! 😳 It was just beyond perfect ..!! A perfect date..!!

Raman's wild thoughts...uff...!! 😆 For once i really thought that Raman and Ishita were really making out on their first date... But then...how can we forget that she is "bholi bhali madrasan" 😉 Poor raman...😆 Awww...love the way Raman undersatnds her so much...He made her comfortable near him...being her Ravaan Kumar...😳 Loved their simple yet romantic convo...And Raman's POV...ahhh it was awsummm...😳 Sometimes it's good to know about what Raman thinks...What he feels...And i loved it alot..!1 For me it was the best thing that u wrote this OS in his POV..!! 😳 I really enjoyed whenever his naughty mind turns out to be active..mocking at her actions...😆 Their first kiss...awww...i wish we could have get something like that in episode too..😉 Well i know it's something we could not get ever...we are still waiting for confession...😆 But loved it..! It was just Perfect..!! Indeed a date to remember...😳 Awsumm...👏👏

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@Zola029

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Awesome OS !

It is so funny how Raman is so nervous ! 😆

He is even day dreaming ! ☺️🤣

But he knows she must be nervous too !

Indeed it is a date to remember !

Beautifully written !

Thanks for the pm

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

That was a really beautiful first date and kiss. My favourite part was when Ishita put her palm on Raman's chest to let him know that she's comfortable, that she wants this as much as he does. It was really written well.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Oh this is just perfect!

Thanks so much for the PM-I love it !

So sweet and believable... including Raman's imagination.

If only they do private dates- but it seems we're stuck with dates in the house interrupted by Exes...

Atleast you showed us what could have been!😊

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Ohh..amazingly romantic and lovely.

loved it..

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: RMGT
Beautiful OS dr.
In RKB's POV.
Love it.
Thank you 4 not sleeping yday night.
Hey can't u b awake every night like yday? 😉
Tnx 4 pm.

Thanks dear

Ur comments made me giggle!😆😆

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: twerping
OSJ! You wizard with words , you! This was perfect! Just perfect! Totally swept me off to IshRa land! The humour, the intensity, the passion, the love! Everything was just spot on! Boy am I glad that sleep was eluding you that night!
😳☺️

N I am as glad as u coz after reading all these awesome comments.

Thank you so much for loving this!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Beautifully written. Enjoyed it.
It doesn't seem like you have written from Raman's perspective the first time. It was perfect.

Thanks a lot dear because despite being hardly active u commented on this work😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety
First of all OJu, take a BOW girl. That was sooo romantic. You really are the Queen of Romance.😳 Both of them are nervous. Both of them are desperate. Both of them are lovers. Both of them have confessed. I was blushing throughout.☺️
Stepping into RKBs shoes, i knw how that feels🥱. Have started writing a SS in his POV and it is seeming to be a brainstorming session for me🥱
Even if the girl in front is blushing, it doesn't mean that the guy's knees are strong and steady.😳 You brought that out soo beautifully😳.

It was really a date to remember😳

Tweety simply loved ur comments because having blushed throughout my story is something just amazing! 😳

Oh tell me! I was editing every single line for this OS n I realized how tough it was to write in that man's way of thoughts.

U have? Up didn't pm me about it, how come!

I would love to read ur SS girl. Send me the link. 😃