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Posted: 10 years ago
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hai friends here is the next long part

part-21(a)

days are passing in the same way raman hurting ishu whenever he gets a chance
ishu:i want to get away from this house,i have to make appa happy,i will join in MBA then he surely forgives me
ishu(soul):will u can do it?completing degree is a hell task for u😕,u passed ur degree very hardly,dont rush without thinking,if u do any mistake again then life long u wont get any chance to get back to ur appa😲
ishu:i can do anything for my appa,i will pursue MBA,by saying she goes to bhalla😡
mr.bhalla:ishitha,kuch bolna chahiye kya?
ishu:papaji i want to pursue MBA
daadi(st):if both gets busy in their life,then when they will get closer to each other,let it be she has to be happy,already raman was hurting her much,if she gets busy then she can come out from her appa's thoughts
mr.bhalla:without wasting a sec calls to the head of a known business school
head:sir,tomorrow is the last day for admission,i will send application form,u have to submit it by tomorrow morning 10.00am,after that i cant do anything
bhalla:ok,thanku he cuts the call and turns to ishitha,ishitha he is sending ur application,we want to submit it by tomorrow,by saying he leaves
next day morning:
ishu:keeps the application form at the dressing table when daadi calls her
raman:comes there and starts combing his hair,he looks at the application form and reads it (st) i will see how u will do MBA,by saying he pours the water on the form and leaves to office
ishu:comes to the bedroom and sees the form completely wetted by water,she soon tried to dry but in vain,tears are rolling down from her eyes
bhalla:comes saying ishitha get ready fast,its already 9:30 we have to be their by 10:00 ,he sees the form was completely spoiled and enquires her about the same
ishu:with teary voice,i kept the form on the table and went to daadi's room,when i returned this was happened
daadi:listens to ishitha and understand this misdeed was done by raman,she consoles ishtiha saying bhalla will get her admission at any cost
later daadi informs the bhalla about raman msbehaviour with ishitha
bhalla:i will confront him,if we keep quiet he will go on do wrong things

in the night:
when raman reaches home
ishu looks angrily at him,raman smirks and leaves from the hall
toshi:shouts from the dining table,raman come and have ur dinner
raman:no maa iam not hungry u people carry on from his room
toshi:boils the milk for raman as he said no for dinner,she takes the milk into a glass and starts walking towards his room
daadi:from her room shouts saying santhoshi come fast once to my room
toshi:she only knows how to irk me,ishu smiles to her mummiji's words,toshi tells to ishitha "ishitha u give this milk to raman",she handovers the glass to ishitha and marches to daadi's room
ishu:takes the glass unwillingly and comes to raman who was busy looking into the files,she forwards the glass to him and says "mummijo sent milk for u,as u said no for dinner"
raman:gets irked listening to her,looking inot the file he pushes her hand saying no,the hot milk spills on her fingers
and her fingers are burnt because of hot milk,she screams saying amma,tears starts rushing out from her eyes,everyone listening to the screams rushes to their room
raman:looks at her hand and tries to take her hand into his hands
ishu:takes away her hand from him and places the glass on the table near their bed
daadi:rushes to her and takes her hand into hers and starts blowing on the bruised fingers
bhalla:ishitha how ur hand was burnt?
ishu:with teary voice while giving to raman,unknowingly my leg was hitted to this table,by that milk was spilled on my hand
daadi:takes ishu into her room
bhalla:raman r u mad how can u be so violent to her?
raman:pappa what i did why r u scolding me,for everything u r blaming me,i cant tolerate this more,by saying he throws the file on the bed and leaves angrily
bhall:why cant he understand his thinking was wrong,hey bhagavan when he will change
daadi:applies ointment on ishu's fingers and she feeds ishu
ishu:recollects how her appa used to feed her daily,tears starts rolling down from her eyes
daadi:is it paining still,why r u crying?
ishu:till now in my house i never ate on my own,my appa and amma used to feed me daily
daadi:wiping her tears,consoles her and says,from today i will feed u,iam ur daadi and u r my beautiful pothi,u should always smile
by that she starts tickling ishu
ishu:laughs and daadi too,she slept with her daadi

a month passes in the same way with raman's rude behaviour


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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
part 21(b)

in delhi:

everyone are in hall
praveen's friend comes to meet raman
raman:hugging praveen,how r u after a long time,praveen takes blessings from elders and everyone takes their seats
praveen:i have to say that ,u r busy staying in abroad,mihir informed me recently that u r staying in delhi,actually i came here to invite all u to my wedding aniversary which is today evening
bhalla:congrats praveen but raman will come we have some other work
praveen:ok uncle,turning to raman,but u have to come raman
raman:sure i will come,i too very eager to meet all our friends
praveen:ok raman bye,we will meet in the evening by saying he leaves

in the evening
raman:gets ready for the party
daadi:raman what is that color,u doesnt have proper taste,ishitha u select a nice suit for him and u also get ready
ishu:why i should get ready
daadi:u have to go with him to the party
ishu:no iam not interested let him go daadi,please
bhalla:ishitha u r his wife,u have to attend all parties along with him
ishu(st)what u know about ur son,who knows where he will leave me in the middle of the way
toshi:ishitha go and get ready fast
raman:keeps silent as everyone are asking her to go,
daadi:follows them into their room
ishu:selects a redshirt and white coat for raman,he takes it silently as daadi was in their room,ishitha wears a blue dress
after getting ready they leaves
raman:stops the car at his farmhouse
ishu:understands that he is going to leave her there,she gets out from the car silently and says,u please come fast i cant go alone,everyone will feel bad if i go alone
raman:doesnt gives any reply and leaves to the party
in party:
all his friends meet him and admires his suit,he gets irked as it was selected by ishitha
mihir:comes to the party and meets raman,and asks about ishitha
raman:i dropped her at the farmhouse
mihir:what bhai? r u in sense
raman:why r u reacting wierd,did i left her on the roads
he leaves from there without waiting for mihir's reply as he doesnt want to extend the argument
ishu:now its 11:30,still he didn't returned and he is not at all lifting my calls,i will leave now,i tolerated much by saying she calls to a cab
in party:
mihir:its already late bhai,bhabi is alone there,she is ur wife u dont forget that,if u now doesnt come along with me i will call daadi and i will inform her everything
raman:looks angrily at mihir
mihir:bhai,today i wont bother about anything,u have to come with me
raman walks angrily out from the party and starts driving
mihir:why r u like this bhai,why cant u see her good nature,she is covering all ur mistakes,but u r hurting her still,u will pay high for ur misdeeds
raman:u shut ur mouth,dont think i will listen whatever u say
ishu:she doesnt want to hurt daadi so,she asks the driver to drive to the party venue,so that she can return to the home along with raman
on her way few goons stop the cab
driver:gets down and argues with goons,goons hit him hardly and thrown him on the ground
ishitha:rushes to the driver and calls bhai,please get up r u ok
a goon drags her away and all others surrounds her in circle
ishu:with fear starts crying,she pleads them to leave her
raman is on their way
mihir:notices some goons on the other side of the road,he suddenly sees ishitha in middle and screams saying bhai,bhabi,goons
raman:looks at the goons and both gets down and rushes to her
raman:starts giving left and right blows to them
mihir:also do a small fight along with raman
ishu:rushes to the driver and makes him to drink water
goons fled away with blood oozing from their bodies
raman and mihir goes to her
ishu:with driver,bhai thum teek hu na?
driver:ha madam
ishu:with tears and teary voice,sorry bhai,e sab meri vachan se huva
driver:u did nothing that fellows doesnt have humanity
ishu:gives money to him and he leaves
raman was touched by her concern to a driver more than herself
ishu:starts walking
mihir:he is very anger on raman,he stands silently
raman:runs to her,yeh pagal where r u going
ishu:looking angrily at him,iam going to my house,i wont stay with u,i tolerated much now i lost my patience completely
raman:thum pagal ho kya?ithna rath me thum kaisa jathi hu?
ishu:cryingly..oh! when u started worrying for me,u stay away from me,by saying she starts walking again now fastly
raman:u have no money but u r saying u will go to mumbai
ishu:turns to face him and says,pointing to her legs,these are called legs i will go with the help of these
raman:mumbai is not their in the next street to go by walk
ishu:with continuous tears,u please leave me,i fedup with u,whatever may happen let it happen i will go to my appa,i will hold his legs and pleads him,even if he kill me i will feel happy,but i wont stay with u,by that she continuous her walk
raman:if u wont come with me,daadi will kill me
ishu:it will be good if she really do that,u say sorry to daadi behalf of me,she cries bitterly while walking
raman:its ur mistake not mine,why u came out of the farmhouse when i asked u to stay there
ishu:how many times i called u,did u attended my call atleast for once, u left me at the farmhouse at 6:00pm now its 12:00pm i was alone in the farm house,still how much time i have to wait for u
raman:was speechless for her direct question
ishitha:goes on walking
raman:runs to her and pulls her so that he can face her,he continues,u first come to home with me it was very late now
ishitha:unable to control her grief,she holds his shirt and rest her head on his chest and cries by saying u please send me back to my appa,i wont live with u,u r rude,insensitive,i hate u ,she cries hardly
raman:he also gets tears,as he is the reason for her pain,he puts his hand around her and tries to console her by caring her hair,please u stop crying
ishu:still sobbing by saying please send me to my appa
mihir:he too cries looking her pity situation
raman:suddenly he was unable to listen her sobing,he starts calling her saying "ishitha,,,ishitha..." but no answer from her,he gets tensed and pulls her out from him,she was fainted,he takes her into his arms and walks to the car

precap: daadi slapping raman
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
awesome update 👏
excited for next part update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
amazing update... i loved it to the core... especially the last update... ishu crying raman crying n mihir tooo crying... am sooo eagerly waiting for the next part... wen ll raman comes to kno about her part... ishu abt his past... n wen ll their lve story star... their romance... ufff... plsss cont n update soon... i know still ders a long way for all this but ll b surely waiting... plsss update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
LOved it yaar,...
amazing story...
plz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
its really heart touching...
daadi slapping raman...i can xpct tht in dreams...

cant wait fr nxt...

i hop dis d last of emotnal part...

want to see raman caring nd faling fr ishu...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Amazing story... 👏 👏
Eagerly waiting for d next part...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
eagerly waiting for the next part update soon. Waiting to c Raman to know how bubbly Ishita is.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Wonderful update...👏

Raman really needs to learn to appreciate Ishu... and fast.

Looking forward to your next update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Interesting story.. Loving both Ishitha and Raman's character, it has not deviated from YHM.
Other characters are also playing their parts so well.
Glad to see a change in Ishtha's father. The precap sounds interesting. Waiting for your update now.
Do continue the story and please do not finish it soon ..
Thanks 😊

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