ff-My Life Starting With An Unknown Person updated part72(a) aug28 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Awesome updates
Loved all d parts
Feeling bad for ishu
D way Raman treated her
Would love to read other parts
If possible do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Very Nicely updated👏
eagerly waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Read all the parts. Wonderful. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
This is update is just awesome
I literally cried while reading this update
pls pls pls update soon the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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iam very happy that u people are enjoying my writings i will try my level best to give awesome updates,here is the next part

part-22

mihir starts driving whereas raman sits in back with ishu on his lap,mihir silently drives the car because what raman did today with ishitha was very bad,they reaches home
mihir opens the car door,raman gets down from the car and takes ishu into his arms
raman stands outside and asks mihir to go inside and check whether everyone are slept or not

mihir:gets inside,everything was dark inside because everyone are slept,daadi listens some voice and comes out from her room
mihir:bhai u come inside i think so everyone are sleeping
raman enters into the house and daadi switches on the lights,mihir and raman was startled by seeing daadi,
daadi:she was shocked seeing ishu in unconscious state in ramans hands,
raman:silently goes upstairs to his room and places ishu on the bed,he comes down as daadi is waiting for him
daadi:with an angry tone u both come to my room
raman and mihir follows her into her room
daadI;shouts at raman,"what happened to ishitha?what u did to her?both are silent,raman was gazing his sight down because he has no dare to face daadi after all what happened
daadi moves towards mihir and takes his hand and places it on her head and says mihir sach bolo kya kiya raman,ye daadi ka kasam
mihir:left with no option and in addition he too fed up with raman wrong thinking about women,he tells everything what happened till then
daadi:angrily now u go mihir,he leaves silently,she moves towards raman and slaps him
raman:was in tears as his daadi never bet him till now
daadi:falls on the bed with grief and cries
raman:he cant see his daadi in tears,he marches towards her and sits on his knees,he starts pleading "daadi,iam sorry,u please dont cry,forgive me for once
daadi:she pushes his hand from her and shouts,u move away from me,is this the way i broughtup u,how many morals i teached u all u dumped in mud today,how can u behave in such rude way to that innocent girl,if anything would have happened to her,i would have killed myself for my wrong decision of getting her married to u
raman:was in shock with her words,daadi please u dont say like that i cant live without u
daadi:u never listened to me or my words,when i said that bloody shagun is not good for u,u runned behind her saying love but what resulted at end she tried to ditch u,now today when i brought ishitha for u saying she is the best,u r not caring her atleast,why cant u scrutinize ur thinking raman,why r u not ready to accept ur flaws ur misbelieves,she only knows how to love,how to care but iam seeing hatred towards u in her eyes in this one month
she covered all ur mistakes from the day one with u,u know the reason behind it,she know the value of relations,family,she doesnt want to make u low infront of us,she doesnt know the meaning of deception,cunning,separating the family,its ur luck to get her as wife in ur life,she is a precious gift for u,i know everything how u behaved with her,when her appa asked me with disbelief after knowing ur past "can ur grandson love my daughter" i promised him saying my grandson was good,loving ,caring,but iam wrong i should have slapped u for ur first mistake but because of my weak love towards u i excused u for all ur mistakes,u r thinking that i forced u to marry her,but ur marriage was happened before itself,she is ur destiny,because of this only god made me to meet her in devi temple
raman:in surprise what marriage mine before he speaks in unordered words
daadi:yes,did u remembered i took u to temple after u came from US
raman:ha i know
daadi:u and ishitha fallen in the pond?
raman:yes
daadi:after getting out of water i looked at her,her maang was filled with ur kumkum,and before that only u and she entered into temple at the same time,i talked to her,and her family everyone are good,i searched for her later but i couldn't found her,destiny united u both not iam
daadi:u went in wrong path saying every woman only loves money fame,but ishitha is not that type of woman,she didnt married u as she has less money or she is suffering with lack of love,she is the princess of her house,she married only for her appa's sake,by that she narrates subbu's story and for her small mistake how her appa stopped talking to her,but raman we always supported u,we agreed whatever u said,because of this lineance now u r doing such type of things,raman listen one thing a girl comes to her sasural house leaving her entire family.it was her husband duty to keep her happy,ye bath dyan se suno raman "bahu ka asu ghar ko accha nahi hotha raman,i brought a unique girl for u,did u ever tried to see her goodness,if u have time think over it,think this one month how she behaved in this house,if i still keep quiet her family wont excuse me,tomorrow i will ask her about her decision,if she doesnt wants to stay here,i will send her to her house already she was in trauma because of her appa i cant add more pain to her,if she forgives u,i will forgive u,untill that u dont try talk for me go now
raman:leaves to his room sadly,he goes near ishu who was sleeping on the bed,he covers her with duvet
ishu:holds his hands and murmurs in sleep,appa please forgive me,u dont leave me alone i cant live without u,no one cannot make me happy like u,please appa
raman:sits beside her,tears rolls down from his cheeks (st) i really did wrong,she is very nice girl,i hurted her much,but what if she says that she wants to go to her home then what about me,no i will request her to stay back,i will apologize her for my mistakes,i wont leave her at any cost she is my wife,by saying he sleeps beside her as she is holding his hand tightly
raman:was unable to sleep thinking of daadi's words
in the late night
ishu:in sleep comes closer to raman and places her head on his chest and her hand around him
raman:he stares at her for her sudden action he to fall asleep
in the morning:
raman:wakes up and looks at ishu who was still sleeping in the same position,he tries to get up
ishu:still in sleep murmurs saying "appa i want to sleep for somemore time please ishu ka kasam"
raman:murmurs "dekho ye ladki ko unko kya samajthe mi unka appa kya bewakoof ladki"
ishu:wakes up by his sounds and looks at him and the way she was sleeping,she getsup fastly and asks why r u sleeping beside me?
raman:do u think iam interested to sleep beside u,u only not letted me in night holding my hand tightly and now in reverse u r questioning me,pagal ladki
ishu:mi pagal nahi lekin thum ek gorilla tha😡
raman:gets up from the bed and walks to his wardrobe and says kya mi gorilla hi?😊
ishu:ha thum gorilla hu?😡
raman:ha ok u r gorilla ok happy😉
ishu:ha happy😡,she understands his words and says no u r gorilla,not iam
raman:then who r u
ishu:mai tho pagal hi na😕
raman:mi yehi kaha raha hu,thum pagal hi😉
ishu:no u r confusing me
raman:ye rocket science nahi tha samajne ke liye
ishu:was about to reply but stops when daadi calls her she leaves answering to daadi,ha daadi mi aa rahi hu
raman:sacche me pagal ladki chote bath bi unko nahi samajthi,now will daadi ask her about her decision?,he leaves worriedly to the bathroom taking towel to freshup


i thought raman being raavan kumar cant understand his mistakes easily,so i made daadi as a powerful preacher,soon u will see ishra moments



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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
gr8 updte...
cant wait fr nxt...

its very mch heart touchng...

fianlly ishra slept toghthr...nd holidng each othr...sch a cute moment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
daadi and raman convo.. awsmly written...
well done yaar...
finally Raman came to knw he has done mistake...thanks for the update...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
superb updt..
lykd d convo of dadi nd raman,,,
waitng 4 ishu decisn..
wat she wil decid..


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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Wonderful update- FINALLY Raman got things explained to him, and looks like he is softening.

Can't wait for Ishu's decision and RKB to finally start romancing his JKR!😊

Looking forward to your next update.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read the last 4-5 updates in one go ... They bind me totally ... Loved the story so far waiting for the next update .

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